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Reviews for Pleasure Slave

By : Gokumum
  • From liz on January 12, 2008
    //“Swallow Vegeta, swallow my seed, and you will never be able to go against me.”//

    That's not porn. That's comedy. **CLAPS** Swallow my seed. You should can't write your way out of a paper bag. I couldn't read beyond this line because I hurt my side laughing. People must encourage you to keep going just for the shits and giggles. And they aren't laughing with you.

    You might hate my reviews but you need to know the truth. Your fics are awful.
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  • From ANON - MidoriNite on September 28, 2003
    that was so sad! i nearly cried when vegeta got his balls cut off! i really liked the story. make a sequel!
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  • From ANON - Bellona on December 30, 2002
    That was awesome. unique. ah, i am lost at words, really. dare i hope of a sequel? maybe a resuce mission?
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