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Reviews for The Dragonball Z Consepts

By : Druidstar
  • From JubblesBubbles on January 07, 2011
    I couldn't bear to read this trough!!!

    There are SO many grammar mistakes that's painful! You have no idea how much it hurts me, because the plot is really good (we don't see much of Goku-Trunks fics around here) and the characterization is great, in fact.

    Please, email me if you want me to beta your fic. It has so much potential
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  • From ANON - Wednesday on February 20, 2003
    Um... The story idea was good but you REALLY need to get someone to edit your grammar and spelling errors...
    It kindof ruined it sometimes when every other word was spelled or conjugated incorrectly...
    It's a good story though, and despite that I had to stumble over all the typing errors, I enjoyed it.
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  • From ANON - animekid on February 04, 2003
    Man! I have no idea where this is going! Pretty good for a first time! Please finish!

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