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Reviews for Those Eyes

By : Kuro
  • From jou on August 18, 2016

    Lov it :)


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  • From DntJudgeMe on April 03, 2013
    I feel like there's a big part of this chapter missing...
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  • From ANON - Lase on December 01, 2006
    More!More!More!
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  • From ANON - malcara on August 12, 2006
    LOL! Ilove the voices...they're really funy and unique^^
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  • From ANON - Maria on July 10, 2006
    Please answer me and tell your still alive I really love this fic!!! Why do people abandon their fic when its gets so good WAAAHHH!!
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  • From ANON - Maria on July 10, 2006
    Hi I just read your fic Those eyes and I've been waiting for a fic like this. IT''S SO AWESOME!!! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE CONTINUE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!
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  • From YaoiGoddess on December 08, 2004
    *squeals while jumping up & down*

    Please write more! I really wanna know what happens! This fic is even on my recommended reading list!
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  • From YaoiGoddess on November 22, 2004
    ......... *glares at Kuro-chan*

    Well... I was going to update, but noooo, I ended up reading your other fic. Bad me. Anyway... Well, where's the rest of it? I swear you now have me addicted to these two fics. Especially this one. Yamcha's gonna be a Mommy! oooooo.... What's Veggie gonna do when he finds out? Hmm....
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  • From Ladylupin on March 30, 2004
    ALL HAIL THE MIGHTY TRAIL BLAZER!!!!! This is the first V/Y where yamcha is the mommy!!!! It's one of those things i've never had the guts to write! Wonderful I salute you!! Hurry up and update!!!!
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  • From ANON - shhh on March 29, 2004
    I was waiting for a new chapter to one of your V/Y fics. I really hope you don't drop either story. I was so happy this chapter was alittle happier than the other two, and I was glad Yamcha was prg. and not just getting fat.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 28, 2004
    I'm glad Yamcha willp thp the baby, but who will be there to help him when he goes into labor and how will he deliver it? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - zani on March 16, 2004
    You are right there are not that many Yamcha and Vegita pairings. In actuality, I have only read one other. Ienjoenjoying this fic immensely, but I am confused at how Yamcja can get pregnant. I assume that you will explain that in latter chapters. Also will Vegita continue to be a bastard towards Yamcha and when Yamcha finds out he is pregnant will he tell our favorite Saiyan Prince. One more thing can you give some sort of explaination to why Yamcha is basicly ignored by his friends. These questions and many more are awaiting for next time on Dragon Ball Z. ;D


    Zani
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on March 13, 2004
    Yeah, I agree. There is just not enough Yamcha and Vegeta pairings. I am a closet Yamcha fan. It all started with Dragonball. I really wish he wasn't such an ass in DBZ though. He could have been great. *Sigh* Anyway, I can't wait to see more of this. It's really good.

    So when is Yamcha gonna find out he's gonna be a da...er...mommy?
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  • From ANON - sumsum on March 13, 2004
    @.@

    First, I like that you used V/Y, as they're one of my fave pairings. I just... don't understand why you characterized them as you did. And why is Yamcha pregnant? Granted, there was a warning of MPreg, but... Yamcha is human. He has no tail scar, he has no saiyajin blood... *doesn't understand* And you made Vegeta incredably mean, and not much else. Aside from the issue of characterization, though, I think this is a very well written piece.

    And I must commend you for your description of the rape. For Veg, it -wasn't- about sex, it was about power, just as is true for rape in general. You portrayed the horror of it well, and you continued with the trauma from it, not letting Yamcha just... brush it under the rug. He's trying to hide it while also waiting for the others to find out, which is true in RL. Too bad Yamcha didn't go to the hospital afterwards, as a rape survivors should (though, just as in the fic, RL survivors tend to not do that, afraid of the stigma associated with being a victim of rape)

    Anyway, it's a very well written fic. Good job.
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