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Reviews for The Meaning of Pride

By : CardDragonBall

From ANON - Getarian on April 04, 2004
Another long review...so responses to your responses are here:

Responding to your response to Jaygoose:

"No, Goku�s not the idiot everyone wants him to be. But then, we shouldn�t have thought he was. (Ah, showing my colors as a Goku fan.)"

Never bought into that idiot bit either...thought he acted pretty damn annoying at times...but then again so did my Vegeta ;-) Come to think of it...everyone did :-D But yeah, Goku was way too sharp on the battlefield to ever be considered an idiot...except for when he let Freiza live...still scratching my head on that one, but then again, I'm still scratching my head on Vegeta allowing Cell to absorb 18...and Future Trunks not killing 18 when he had the chance...which would have prevented the absorption...ah well...

Totally understand your 'showing of colours' I get pretefenefensive of Vegeta...it's natural :-D

In your responses to me:

Thanks for answering my question about Goten :-)

Glad you like my theory :-) I have a slight confidence problem and am now terrified that you're going to read my stories and think they suck...visualising future review:

Uh...Yeah...That was...err, interesting (yeah that will do) interesting. Uh. looking forward to yoext ext chapter...but no rush...

Or... Man! That totally sucked! :-D

"And uhh�there was something else I wanted to say�Gee. Brain not working. *goes back to read review * Oh! Got it now."

(chuckle) I like the conversational tone of this :-)

You sound like a good friend. I like that. I hope that you have someone whom you can rely on too. It's good that you recognise the 'moochers' though, otherwise you could get seriously hurt. I'm the loyal type too and have had my share of bad experiences with 'friends' I now mainly have aquaintances, but have two friends whom I truly call friend, and I consider myself damn lucky...they're the best. :-)

"So I�m not that fond of it, but it�s what I do most and best. If that makes sense."

I guess yeah, if you have a flair for that genre, it would explain why you write it the most and the best, even if it's not your first love...but I'm glad that you write in other areas, because I love these fics you're writing now, and you do these very well. I'm assuming that your sci/fi and fantasy works are original? If they get published, there is a good chance that I will end up with a few copies of your work on my shelves...especially the fantasy...love the genre :-)

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From ANON - Getarian on April 04, 2004
I'm pleased that when Vegeta found out about Bulma's pregnancy, he went straight to her. Chuckled when as soonhe lhe landed, Bulma made a grab for him and starting cursing out all Saiyans :-)

�You need to go stop them before Gohan gets hurt.�
"�Why would I stop them?� Vegeta asked."

LOL! Love this! Honest and straight to the point. Very Vegeta :-D

"...There was bitterness in that, the implication that somehow she was better than Kakarot because she was not going to try to �steal� Vegeta...."

Can't blame her for her tone, it's pretty natural...even though it definitely takes two to tango, and Vegeta chose to go with Goku, she has a right to feel this way about Goku (and no doubt be equally pissed at Vegeta). Can't help but feel sorry for her, loving someone whose heart is elsewhere, is very sad :-(

Love that she still has attitude with Vegeta. :-D

"Silently prayed that Kakarot got in a few punches before he showed up and tried to split up a fight that he just wanted to egg on."

LOL! Vegeta to the rescue? Don't hold your breath Gohan :-D

"�Vegeta!� the bald one said (as if he needed to let everyone know the Prince�s name.)"

LOL! Krillin is such a loser.

�Get out of here,� Piccolo said, �We don�t want you around us.�

Really disappointed in Piccolo...hello, Earth to Piccolo? Ex demon Lord...remember?

�Yeah,� Baldy said, �I should have killed you when d thd the chance.�

Maybe you should have Krillin, you'll never get that opportunity again. Threats from the man who ran around in circles, whilst androids 17 & 18 were beating the shit out of everyone...and then went all gooey when android 18 gave him a peck on the cheek...what a girl!

"Kakarot touched down next to him, stood in front of him enough that it was understood who�s side he was really on without being too blatant in his body language."

Yeah Kakarot! The two strongest in the universe - side by side. If s a s a member of Gohan's groupies, I'd be wetting myself about now :-D

�I don�t have to ask him,� Kakarot said�he was almost growling out the words��Because I trust him.�

Yes! I love this guy! :-)

"He couldn�t remember a time when he liked that kid."

LOL! Annoying little snot!

Loved how Goku faced up to them all, loved hogetageta stood at his side and didn't incite any trouble, and I totally sympathised with Goku's thoughts in regards to the others...He must have been so disappointed in his 'friends' Liked this:

"...and then there was Yamcha. Who actually he couldn�t think of anything about and spared the man from his momentary dislike."

Makes a nice change in fanfiction to not have Yamcha as the loud troublemaker...

"...Wasn�t so sure that it was the best course of action because he knew as well as the next that if she asked him to leave Vegeta he would. Then he wouldn�t like Bulma anymore and he didn�t want either of those things to happen."

Really liked this. Goku's still battling with his inner feelings, his love for his friend and the fact that he knows that he let her down, and his love for Vegeta, whom he never wants to let down.

"That made Goku shake his head to realize that Vegeta was trying not to make things diffi for for him by speaking against his son."

Love Vegeta (no surprise there) :-D Love how he's keeping his opinions to himself for the sake of Goku...must be hard for the arrogant Prince :-)

"Personally, I�m pissed. But I�m the only one that has a right t.�".�"

Well said! The others have no right to interfere with things that have nothing to do with them.

"Had the suspicious that a hot iron and his genitals would probably be involved."

LOL! Oooo, Ouchi

"...Because if he apologized that would mean he was sorry he was with Vegeta now and he wasn�t, he was just sorry that he had hurt Bulma."

Ah, this is so sweet, yet so sad...

Really liked how Bulma handled herself with the two Saiyans and really liked the fact that Vegeta knew when it was time to leave...I feel so guilty for being pleased that Goku and Vegeta are together. :-(

Loved Goku's reflections on Vegeta's current frame of mind. I do see how his love for Bulma and his kids would have Vegeta having a battle with his conscience, but it's something that he would definitely keep to himself, deal with in his way,way, and not let interfere with his choices...I like that Goku can pick up on this anyway :-)

"...So he crossed the room, kissed him. Felt Vegeta�s hands curl up in his clothes and pull on him. Felt the violent shudders as he felt the teeth biting at his lips and his tongue."

Gods...so good!

"And that was fine, but as he started to hum, he thought that maybe next time he should use a pillow or something to put under his knees."

ROTFL! Gods woman, you are not supposed to make me laugh when I am enjoying a hot G/V scene. :-D

Can't wait for this to continue...have to wait until Monday...Argh!

Loved the end dialogue :-)

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From ANON - jaygoose on April 03, 2004
You do a fabulous job of keeping everyone in character in even these not so canon moments. And I absolutely hate your Gohan...but I guess that was the point. He He. I do love your 'spoiled uke' Vegeta. Hmm...I love your anything Vegeta. I am a 'Geta fan ofcourse.
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From ANON - Hope_Poe26 on April 03, 2004
I think that this is the best G/V get together that somewhat ressembles their real personalities. So... when are you going to update?
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From ANON - Getarian on April 03, 2004
Love Vegeta's interpretation of the word 'practical' LOL!

�Alright guys,� that was his son, �Break it up in there, lunch is getting cold.�

Oh good! Trunks seems to be aware of his father's relationship with Goku and seems to be okay with it :-)

"Regretted not having locked the doors and put a huge �GO AWAY� sign on the front lawn."

LOL! That's my Vegeta :-) Glad that he is willing to miss out on some 'Goku time' to be with his son though :-)

�Hey, Dad, why is Gohan so pissed?"

Does Goten not know then? or is he just confused about the perversion part, because he doesn't see it that way...and rightly so, I might add :-)

"...Couldn�t make that decision for Kakarot, but didn�t want to have to listen to some stupid human answer coming from the Saiyan."

"...Wanted to find the baldy and the string-bean and beat the shit out of them. Because they could influence Kakarot in a way that not even his son could."

Poor Vegeta...he is not happy to have to sit back and possibly listen to Goku feeling the need to justify his life to everybody, but at the same time is not willing to interfere with Goku's relationship with his eldest, which sort of leaves him in that limbo state of not really having much of an input into his own life choice. I can understand his fear of the others having a possible influence over Goku's ultimate decision...he hasn't been with Goku long enough to be sure that Goku wouldn't back out under pressure.

"Trunks punched Kakarot�s brat and hissed: �I told you so!�"

Yay Trunks! :-)

�They�re your friends, Kakarot. I do not care if they like me or not.� A wolfish grin. �I prefer it when they do not like me.�

LOL! Gotta love this attitude, particularly with the way they areatinating Goku...bloody cheek!

"Sighed. Scratched that place on the back of his head that always tickled when he got nervous."

Got a theory about that head scratching thing...wanna hear it? Too bad, I'm telling ya anyway :-)

I'm thinking this is the spot that got bopped when he hit his head as a child, and when he is faced with something that really bothers him (or contradicts/confusis Sis Saiyan side) he feels his Saiyan side emerging, he shuts it down with this subconscious action...or some such bullshit...either way, it's connected to his Saiyan nature ...that's my theory, for what it's worth :-)

"Vegeta stepped up into his line of sight, said: �Don�t let them make you feel bad about who you are. You are a Saiyan. Remember it.� Then he was kissed, just a quick kiss, and Vegeta nodded, crossed his arms over his chest and waited for Goku to leave."

Really loved this! Especially the quick kiss...so loving and supportive :-)

"...and Krillin shrieked (sort of like a girl)..."
LOL!

"Hn. So did Chichi. But he actually cared about what she had hated,..."
ROTFL!

�Why would you be worried?� He cocked his head to one side, played the cheerful idiot one more time for the sake of humanity, �Does it matter?�

Really loved that entire passage...especially loved this bit...there was a sense of menace about Goku that really suits him :-)

"Goku repressed the snort and the laughter that was in his chest at the hypocrisy of that statement coming from the man who married the former android."

Indeed! Goku shouldn't have repressed... and he shouldn't be made to feel like he has to justify his decision to those idiots...what a huge bunch of hypocrites! Goku deserves better from his so called friends.

"If he had used the dragon balls to revive Freiza, Kooler, Kid Buu and Cell so he could have a rousing game of tag than he would feel as if he needed to take time out of his busy schedule of fighting to explain to his friends that he was just bored stiff and needed the entertainment."

ROTFL! I loved this...you know, if I didn't hold back on some of my 'cut and pastes' I'd just be highlightinur wur whole fic everytime I review :-)

"(Again, unless he and �Geta banded together and decided to kill the planet for old times� sake.)"

LOL! Love it when Goku gets sarcastic :-)

�Yes he is,� that was a new voice, his son, and there was an angry glare on his facHe lHe left Bulma pregnant� Or didn�t he tell you?�

Oh F***! Well that definitely threw a spanner in the works didn't it?...can't help but feel that Gohan is really loving this fact, just because it gives him a weapon against Vegeta and not out of any real pity for poor old Bulma...little bastard!

Roll on the next chapter...definitely need to know how, both Goku and Vegeta deal with this.
Loved the end dialogue :-)

Thanks for your answer about my plagiarism fear...I feel much relieved. Yeah, not reading while you're writing makes alot of sense, but unfortunately, I can go days without being hit with any inspiration...I truly wish I had your gift for writing. And yeah, you betcha, I will definitely let you know when I finally finish my fics...I would love for you to read them :-)

"I think I heard somewhere that DBZ fans are the second most loyal (Trekkies being the first.)"

Wow, second most loyal...impressive! This pleases me no end! Yeah, Trekkies are pretty loyal...love Star Trek and all the follow up shows myself...real big Sci-fi fan...just not at Trekkie level :-)

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From ANON - MB on April 03, 2004
Oh yeah I just wanted ay Iay I really hate Gohan, Piccolo, and Krillen in this fic! *kicks them all* How dare they think Vegeta will use Goku...I mean really! They are just jealous and stupid! Especially Gohan! I really did not expect that from Piccolo...UGH! I wish Goku was more saiyajin so he could blow their asses into oblivion! WOO HOO!!! And that is why I love the fic...so much drama...I also love how Vegeta handles this all, and he wants to be hated and feared by the Z fighters...
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-MB-
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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on April 03, 2004
loved this chapter.

Regretted not having locked the doors and put a huge �GO AWAY� sign on the front lawn. --rofl, hehe that's a good idea.

Gave him the false impression that something had gone right in his life after all.--aww that isn't a fals impression something is going right in his life...at least I hope it is...

�Hey, Dad, why is Gohan so pissed? He�s been telling everyone that Vegeta is manipulating you into�� he paused there for a second �Perversion I think he said.�---AH! Can anyone hate Gohan as much as I hate him right now? HE is so annyoying...why is he telling everyone that it is perversion...please!!!!!! Gohan is the perverted o.heh.hehe but then again...oh nevermind...I just hate Gohan! *

He didn�t even breathe as he waited to see what Kakarot was going to do. Didn�t want to be the one to remind everyone that what Gohan thought was about equal to the shit that he scrapped off his shoes. --rofl!!! That's right Vegeta. that exactly what Gohan is! Aww he didn't want to breathe....

Assuming that he was after something as if he wasn�t good enough for their precious savior of the world.--he ismore than good enough, forget what everyone says!

He just blinked, stared at Vegeta, found that he was being more and more amazed by this man. Thought that he had reached his ability to be shocked out of his mind when he had slept with him, and found that apparently the shocks were just starting.--LoL who knew someone could be more shocked than having sex with Vegeta...that a deadly delicious shock within itself...

Vegeta stepped up into his line of sight, said: �Don�t let them make you feel bad about who you are. You are a Saiyan. Remember it.� Then he was kissed, just a quick kiss, and Vegeta nodded, crossed his arms over his t ant and waited for Goku to leave. --oh...no...*dies* that was so wonderful! I loved that so much. It is like something an actual coupl would do...so cute.

Ok, I guess Goku was right more shocks are coming...*faints* Bulma is pregg!?!?!?!?!? What is going to happen?????????????????

Gk: I better get the besx ofx of the century for this.--LoL, hehe I hope you do to..then I get to read all about it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Once again an amazing chapter...with a surprisngly pregnant Bulma, that I can't wait to read about.
Darn Goten and Trunks for breaking up the beautiful lemon that was about to happen...*shakes fists at them*

^.*
-MB-

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From ANON - jaygoose on April 02, 2004
@.@ Okay, wow, that was totally unexpected. Cool. Love that you Goku is not as dumb as everyone likes to think he is and I love that Krillin is turning out to be as dumb as I think he is. Did that make sensnywanyway, this story is turning out to be so much fun!
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From ANON - Hecate18 on April 02, 2004
Supposed to be at college today, but I forgot my train pass. So now I've got the day off! ^_^

I'm glad that Trunks and Goten are ok with Goku and Vegeta being together, they seem to be the only mature ones about this. But I can't believe the nerve of Krillin and Piccolo (who I may add is the former demon king) and Krillin who married and had a kid with android 18.

Enough of my rant and may I say OMG!!! Bulma's pregnant?!? (I'll probably review the next chap on sunday cause work have decided to be so nice and make me start at 9.00am instead of 12noon. -_-)

Off to do some work now, so I don't feel so guilty about my 'day off'. ^_^
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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on April 02, 2004
Love is in the air...and sex...
which is always very good!

and while Vegeta was resolutely not ashamed of his choice to continue this with Kakarot he was not about to put up posters and invite everyone to the show. --LoL aww why not I kinda wanted to see... Its funny how Goku seems to not mind that they are outside but Vegeta is very reserved and doesn't want to show off his or Goku's goods out in the open for the world to see.

to let him down out of his embrace and that meant he could not longer thrust his hips into Kakarot, and he found that he did not like that at all.--rofl oh...how I love that...poor Geta...he shouldn't have said stop. That was nice of Goku to stop when asked to stop also. He is such a gentleman.

Couldn�t stand the thought of handing anyone that kind of ammunition.--Oh wow, that is a wonderful line. Very Vegeta...but I think he is handing over that ammunition whether he knows it or not...and that's not a bad thing, at least I hope it's not. I love how Goku affects Vegeta...it's beautiful

Vegeta rolled his eyes and went inside, didn�t even pause to look at the kitchen or the living room, just went straight to the bedroom and pulled his gloves off, set them on the dresser. --he is very determined isn't he..and for a man who doesn't want anyone to see GokuGoku is effecting him he sure has a one track mind on getting lube...*shakes head* oh Vegeta, he is just too much!

So I can tap dance on the toilet, he thought. --GAH!!!!!! ROFL!!!!! These are the times I yell for my twin brother and my younger brother Lucas and we all laugh because that is so freaking hilarious! Love it when Vegeta thinks things like that, but never says them.

Wouldn�t be able to hear the breathy voice that was refusing to moan but wanted to.--aww Vegeta dont be so trapped and uptight...let your man hear you scream!

�I�m glad I found you, too, Kakarot,� Vegeta said. --oh gosh, *puts hand over heart* I loved that...

Wowsers!!! Thanks for another amazing lemon! I really don't know how you do it, but you rule!!!!!!! You are awesome! *bows to you*
*scratches head* Uh...*mumbles* sorry about that plot twist... *coughs* not really...
Anywho I loved this chap, I love this fic, and most of all I love you... *is standing outside of your window* Hiya, I thought I would start stalking you since I love your fics so much...just cant get enough of you...
ok.......just kidding I was starting to freak myself out a little bit! I am soooooo not a stalker, unless I saw Vegeta of course....

QUICK! DUCK! There�s a flying plot twist!
Gk: Where?!
Card: Don�t know. But Mechanical Butterfly tossed one in here, so beware.--*looks around sheepishy then runs off laughing* I did it!!!! WOO HOO!!!

Gk: As if the great Vegeta, Prince of All Saiyans really listens to the rules of rabid fangirls.---*points to shirt that says: Rabid FanGirl, then smiles*

Getarian:Also, many thanks to Mechanical Butterfly for her ingeniously executed flying plot twist :-)---you are so very welcome, I didn't know what else to do...I was at my wits end. I love this fic so much, I didn't want it to end!!!

^.*
-MB-

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From ANON - Getarian on April 01, 2004
An enjoyable chapter :-)

"and while Vegeta was resolutely not ashamed of his choice to continue this with Kakarot he was not about to put up posters and invite everyone to the show."

LOL! Really love Vegeta's inner thoughts :-)

�Yeah,� the big one said, �I guess we should. It might�uh�rain.�

(chuckle) Can definitely see Goku saying this :-)

"...Now it was asking him why the hell it had listened to his brain in the first place when it was his throbbing erection that should have been allowed to make the decisions."

LOL! Yep...Definitely male :-)

Loved it when they were looking for an area to place the house and Vegeta cut off Goku's 'sales pitch' because he just wanted a place to continue their 'activities' and not a lecture on the wonders of nature...Vegeta and Goku to perfection :-)

�Wow!� that was Kakarot�still in the kitchen��There�s tons of food in here!�

LOL! Kakarot you fool...there's a much more appetizing feast waiting for you upsta...Oooo, doughnuts... :-)

�Why are you in the bathroom �Geta?�
"So I can tap dance on the toilet, he thought."

LOL! Love sarcasm :-)

Amazing lemon! These two are really something together :-)

"�I�m glad I found you, too, Kakarot,� Vegeta said."

I love this...but feel a little strange as well...I've got a similar kind of action in one of my stories...although the words are different...and it's between Vegeta and Radditz...if I keep it, does that now make it plagiarism?

Also thought I'd mention, (with you being a fan fan) I also have two G/V stories in the works as well...sort of working on all three at once...depending on what mood I'm in...Gods, I hope there's still a love for this fandom by the time I finish these buggers...LOL!

Really enjoying this story and Yay... "QUICK! DUCK! There�s a flying plot twist!"

Extended story! Thank-you, thank-you, thank-you :-) o, mo, many thanks to Mechanical Butterfly for her ingeniously executed flying plot twist :-)

"...Sm gom going to have to leave dopey little notes."

(chuckle) That's fine :-) Thanks for responding to my query about the "overly bright Son & Sun" line. :-)

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From ANON - jaygoose on April 01, 2004
Yay! Lemonade. Wonderfully refreshing and 100 times better for u that soda pop. He He. Okay so it's obvious that I really don't have anything else insightful to say other than...more please...that was really good.
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From ANON - Hecate18 on April 01, 2004
there's gonna be a real quick review here, I've gotten leave for work in a few!

As always I loved the chapter (I love the entire fic!)
'He said that like he was trying to find an appropriate excuse, which he probably was because it didn�t seem to bother him that people might randomly walk up and see the two of them. Probably didn�t.' - I found that totally hilarius LMAO ^_^

And there's a plot twist? YAY!!! you know I'm looking forward to the next chap! ^_^
BYE!
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From ANON - Getarian on April 01, 2004
So sad, that bit with Vegeta and Bulma...If only he had a twin...but then maybe not...they both might have fallen for Goku...LOL! Sorry, had to lighten my mood :-)

I loved Vegeta's thoughts about Bulma and Trunks. I'm glad that he is determined to remain a part of their lives, but I can understand him needing to follow his heart, he would have done Bulma no favours staying with her when his heart was elsewhere...Time to move on.

Bulma handled herself well...I'm proud of her :-)

Loved that Vegeta told her that he was sorry, not exactly something Bulma really needed to hear at that point, but eventually she'll see it for what it was :-)

"The gloriously over-bright sun had returned and so had the gloriously over-angry Son. Gohan."

LOL! Don't know if this was meant to be funny, but I cracked up anyway :-)

�I know how you feel,� he said, �Now listen to me while I tell you how I feel.�

Oh yeah! Love this! :-)

I won't touch what Gohan said with a barge pole...but I loved the silent "end of discussion" attitude of Goku's :-)

"Had his arms crossed over his chest, scowling and doing that sneer thing..."

ROTFL! Love the way that Goku appraises Vegeta :-)

Really loved all of this, the way Vegeta and Goku interacted with each other, not letting what happened sit heavily on them, catching and eating breakfast, sparring and then finally coming together in a kiss...loved it all :-)

Oh noooo...it can't be drawing to an end...I so love this fic!

"You know I just recently figured out that I drop the subject when I write."

Yes, and that's one of the things that I love about your writing! The way you drop the subject allows for a better flow of actions and something that would normally be a good read, suddenly becomes highly erotic...you're right about the reader being 'right there with them.' I often become so engrossed with a well written scene (and you do that alot) that I not only visualise the scene but can sometimes hear and smell the surroundings as well (providing sounds and smells are present)...okay, it's possible that I just shared too much...I'm honestly not as weird as I sound :-)

"(Sorry that I felt compelled to share that insight with you. I just now noticed that I do that.)"

LOL! No need to apologise...I enjoy reading these extra's...plus, in case you haven't noticed, I tend to do that too :-)

"Er� How about he just thinks about it real generally and not anyone specifically."

(chuckle) Sounds good to me :-)

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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on March 31, 2004
Emotional chapter...

Kissed him again and held onto him like he didn�t want to go, but Kakarot�s dislike of the house overcame his desire to be close to Vegeta. --I love that, it is wonderful. It's sad that the house has such and effect on Goku, but at the same time it is understandable.

There was no way a house would fucking outdo him in anything--rofl! That's right Geta!!!

Wasn�ing ing to apologize about Kakarot. Wouldn�t demean the man that way like he was something filthy that Vegeta had to hide. Because he wasn�t. ---I am happy to know Vegeta isn't ashamed of him. I love how he ts/ths/thinks of Goku. This fic is so emotional. REally you do such a great job at capturing everything. The way Vegeta feels about Bulma, feels as if she deserves more than he had given her, it makes me sad that the Ouji feels like that.

Dropped a capsule on the table.---so much was said just by her doing that. I can see how hard this really is for her. She really did care for him. *wipes tears from eyes* So sad!

Looked at everything in his life wrapped up in a tiny cae.--e.--wow, thats a great line. Everything in his life in that capsule...like I said reading this is like reading poetry...beautiful..descriptive...

Closed his fist around it. And for the very first time in his whole life said: �I�m sorry.�--I am sad that Bulma's response to this was whatever...I mean doesn't he get credit for this...saying a word he has never said befoI woI would have been fucking amazed if he apologized to me. I understand she is hurt, but this is Vegeta... I really, love how you wrote all this

�I know how you feel,� he said, �Now listen to me while I tell you how I feel.�--Alright Goku!!! I loved what he said and how he said Gohan has to deal with it because he is going to be with Vegeta! Gohan is so stupid I swear! What gives him the right to even say :I felt your power levels how could you?!?!? God!!!! If I was Goku I would have slapped him...that made m mad mad, like the world revolves around Gohan and what he wants...no...the world revolves around Goku and Vegeta...at least my world does...

Said this like it was the absolute truth and Vegeta went about murdering every single day.--LoL although I laughed at this, it made me sad and mad to think that this is how Gohan really thinks of Vegeta...*shakes head* Ugh! I want him to be destroyed!

Felt hunger settling in the pit of his stomach that had absolutely nothing to do with food.---hehe, I bet. I love that, Goku is always hungry for something, but I am glad this time that it is the Pr.
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Vegeta: I think its almost finished.---WHAT!?!?! NO!?!?!? *looks around frantically* What will I do!?!?! *throws a plot twist in your fic* There...that ought to buy me a few more chapters...

Thanks for another wonderful chapter!!!!

*Adds locks to the closet door and pockets the . * . * You are not going to abuse Vegeta! He�s busy making lemonade!---*laughs* You think locks will keep me out of there??? *snaps fingers and out of no where appears doppelganger Goku* I think he can get Vegeta out of that closet...*lightbulb appears* wait did you say lemonade...??? *pushes DG out of the way* You heard the lady he is making lemonade, leave him be!!!...For now...

Keep up the excellence...
^.*

-MB-
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