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Reviews for A Shoulder To Cry On

By : Paigemaster42891
  • From ANON - Serenity on June 19, 2005
    'Kay coutinue coutinue I wanna to see what happens
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  • From ANON - anon on August 06, 2004
    i like the ideas but i dont really like your writing style. it's just a lttle too...erm..basic. can i ask how old you are because you do realise this site is for 18+ right? i dont mean to offend you it's just that i got the impression that maybe you were like 14 or summin. sorry.
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  • From Paigemaster42891 on June 05, 2004
    Thank you for the advice Agent182 and I shall use it wisely and it's my first time for a yaoi so sorry.
    the author,
    Vgirl
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  • From ANON - Agent 182 on June 05, 2004
    Good start. Very short to my dismay but i can live with it.
    O.O i was hoping to see a lemon there... but i guess not.. *frowns* hopefully there will be one sooner or later.
    Hm, next time add more detail and make spaces between the dialogue, it's hard to read in huge paragraphs. Make it like this:

    "Hello Kakkarot"

    "Hey Vegeta"

    - 2 spaces between the dialogue or paragraphs. Just some hints that i hope help. I hope you update soon.

    Agent -182-
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  • From Paigemaster42891 on June 05, 2004
    I know it's short but hey im updating tonight so hey what the heck and I promise I'll update daily.
    the author,
    Vash_sgirl
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