Reviews for Sweet Dream

BY : missmagick


  • From ANON - Legilmyth on July 02, 2006

    Awwwwww that was so sweet! I really liked it

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  • From ANON - AMAZED on March 15, 2006

    uhhh... no

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  • From ANON - sorry on February 01, 2006

    OK I read it and I got a compant.... first off before I compane I must say the rest of your story was good. I only had one problem with it. And that is No one can talk an whole phargher in there sleep. So the whole thing she say in her sleep could never really happen. See even for ppl that do talk in there sleep they can only mutter some words or a brocken up senteacs. But never could they go on and on and on. Like you had her do. If you chage it then your story with be super cool.Couse it will seem much more real and even in fantcey some baices in reality is needed.

    sorry to be picky, but I can't help myself sometimes.

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  • From Sea-EnigmaDare on January 24, 2006

    aww... that was so cute ^_^. good job and keep it up :D.

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  • From ANON - ANA on January 06, 2006

    I like the way you built up the intro. First we were given a vegetabulma love scene and then sitting in the bloody kitchen! The setting out of your paragraphs and so on turned me off your story. It shouldn't have to be so much work to defrenciate words but that's what i had to do with your story. keep writing, and remember *the layout*. Don't think me an evil cow k? Well done the story was nice/

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  • From ANON - nujyro on December 29, 2005

    Dude that was so cool. I loved that story. I had so many sweet images from it.

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  • From ANON - hello! on December 11, 2005

    funny story

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  • From ANON - DemonPrincess on October 23, 2005

    I really liked i. And if I say something like this than it really is true. this is the first time I review for a Bulma Vegeta fic. Keep up the good work.

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  • From ANON - lafemmevegeta on May 29, 2005

    I love this fic. I read over & over again because it's so cute. Keep writing...lafemmevegeta

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  • From ANON - lovelykiss on January 11, 2005

    OMFG!!!! this story is so completely kawii! i really think thats exactly how it should happen for those two! -happy sigh- :))))) you have great talent!

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  • From on August 17, 2004

    Well, I've got to tell the truth, I always do... It's quite rediculous ar asr as truly being related to the characters it is... And it's short. Not much of a story, just sex...

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  • From ANON - maria on May 18, 2004

    i wish you would continue this short story.it's so sweat and full of love.vegeta is ooc but that's ok...just think about it.....


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  • From ANON - Queen on February 15, 2004

    I liked the plot line to the story, however you were a bit sketchy on punctuation as well as description. the story would be a whole lot better if you touched that up a bit. but otherwise it was a great story. Keep up the good work.

    Ciao
    Queen

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  • From ANON - Mya on June 26, 2003

    God this was really sweet and very good...nice job.

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  • From ANON - Rix Tyranus on May 29, 2003

    Cute. Very cute. A totally blameless and nice lemon. This kinda thing reminds me that the work of a true fan can be very sweet. Nice job.

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