Reviews for Made Whole

BY : eternalfire

  • From ANON - Anon on November 14, 2006


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  • From on June 18, 2003

    It started out great, but I have just one thing to point out. You made Heero way too sentimental. The Perfect Soldier doesn't cry. This is a great story, but you might want to stay a little more true to Heero's personality.

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