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Reviews for Persistence

By : chayron
  • From ANON - ~anz~ ^_~ on December 08, 2005
    Way to go prince...make inroads with Kakarott the confused.

    Again with Damaro...who is this lout... anther one for the prince to blast away?!

    Aww how nice...he's gonna get a pretty flower...

    That's right prince...kill em with kindness//// so you can grunt, sweat and get it on!!!
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  • From ANON - Macha on November 29, 2005
    Well... That went better than expected. I am very glad Vegeta tried to think everything out before he acted in that situation.

    Now to see what will happen between Verlio and Kakarott and Vegeta and Kakarott.


    Excellent chapter!
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on November 29, 2005
    Wonderful chapter.

    Kakarott finally got that load off his chest. Veliro may become a mediator.

    I wonder if Veliro will talk to the prince.

    I look foraward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 29, 2005
    wow im glad vegeta didn't kill valiro.
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  • From ANON - kikyo on November 26, 2005
    wow. just wow. please continue! that's all i have to say... it's great!!!!!! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Tsami on November 21, 2005
    nice chap! it's the first time I read a 2nd class mentioned. at least as I remember. anyway, it's a major gap you're filling, since most stories (all the stories I read till now!) deal with just elites (1st???) and 3rd class... I always got the feeling something was missing...
    Well, tell us more about it pls! how can you tell a 2nd from a 3rd class?
    As for the er... lemon... *blushes*... 'twas great... always loved Kakarot like that...*hides face*
    thanks
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on November 20, 2005
    That was different...and cool.

    Kakarott has a possible new ally.

    Veliro better hope Vegeta doesn't find out about what he and Kakorott did.

    I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - chibi_vegeta on November 20, 2005


    methinks someone is gonna be pissed...*snerks*



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  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 20, 2005
    wow i wonder how vegeta will react when he finds out veliro and kakarott had sex.
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  • From ANON - ~anz~ on November 20, 2005
    he sure wore that towel for a while...

    Veliro had the lube in his pocket? He was very sure of himself, wasn't he?

    I guess Kakarott had to get 'Veliro' out of his system...

    Wonder what the Prince is gonna do when he finds out?

    Blast the cur? One could only hope...

    And who is this Damaro, anyway? Another cur that needs blasting?

    Seems like the Prince has a lot of competion for Kakarott....

    Blast away Prince...blast away the competition.

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  • From ANON - Macha on November 20, 2005
    YAY, Kakarott to the resque, and Veliro received only a scaring and a broken tail. That was close... I was sad to hear that there hadn't been other resques in the past for him.

    Vegeta didn't like the guards talking bad about Kakarott huh?

    Lovely lemon you put in there, even if it was with the OC.

    I just hope they don't wake up to a very pissed off Vegeta. That would suck.
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  • From ANON - Tsami on November 15, 2005
    Love this story! Loved the linguistic exploration of Mirtis... Dialects, regions, culture... wonderful touch!
    Just the MPreg thing still freaks me out!!!
    hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on November 12, 2005
    Ooh.

    Looks like more trouble. I hope Veiro gets helped out. I also were what will happen to the others.

    I wonder what new approach the Prince will take in dealing with Kakarot. Will Kakarot escape? *waits for next chapter*
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  • From ANON - Macha on November 11, 2005
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh.... all that drama and angst and then you threw in a cliff hanger that doesn't seem even remotely related. *hisses* Evil!

    Okay, ranting is done now. You explored many of Kakarott's emotions, thoughts and memories in this chapter. Gave a little more background about what he has been up to, and you put it all down in a very good story form. Nice job.

    Waiting for your next update!
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 11, 2005
    nnnooo why valiro i don't want him to get rape
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