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Reviews for Lonely Desire

By : Petya
  • From ANON - Milady Trinity on October 03, 2005
    I love the story. You doing very well. Keep up the good writing. As far as Kira getting pregnant(sp?)/male pregnancy(sp?) I am NOT a fan. While I don't like it, I don't bash it. Everyone is intitled to their opinion. It just isn't my thing. So please, don't do it. To me, It will ruin the story.

    Once again, keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - nutmeg on October 03, 2005
    Nice chappy, and as for the survey thing...

    I think male pregnancies are okay as long as they are explained well and your not having Kira just have a baby popping out of no where no seemingly no reason whatsoever. But if it has a bit of plot to it, then it will be awesome. Surprise me for the miscarriage or healthy baby thing. ^_~
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  • From ANON - pancake on September 29, 2005
    WOW! this was a great chapter! seriously, that was the best dearka/yzak lemon i've ever read. i really liked the way you made them treat each other: they loved each other and acted fluffy without being too ooc. most people write them as brutish and scary, even in the "act". i can't stand those lemons. i agree that yzak still needs to be prissy and bitchy like a girl on PMS, but he should also melt whenever he's aroung Dearka. yay!

    keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - ~Sango~ on September 29, 2005
    OMG! Great job. Please update soon! ^^
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  • From ANON - Kimi on September 29, 2005
    Uwaa~
    Kawaii little chapter!! -bad bad Ai! xD it's really sad though.. how Kira is lying to hide his feelings, and Asuran getting hurt emotionally.. =(-

    Oh well, I lovee it! ^^ Keep it up! (write, write writee!! xD)

    Can't wait until the next chapter!! YAY
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  • From ANON - Yami Jay on September 28, 2005
    I laugh so much when Cagalli caught them doing it! That was so worth it!!!
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  • From ANON - Kimi on September 28, 2005
    Wheee!! Awesome!! ^^ It's really good! Natural talent I see =P

    Keep writting! YAY for AsuKira and DxY! =P kaWAIIness LOL

    Can't wait until the next chapter. Thankies for updating sooo quickly!!
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  • From ANON - Ven-Ven on September 28, 2005
    This is so cute...and damned worth it! Keep up the good work (as well as supplying us with yaoigoodness)!
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  • From ANON - Anna92 on September 28, 2005
    I was the first? O.o o.O I didn't notice that ^^;
    Eh well, I still love this story! And I still want you to continue iiiiit nooooow...
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  • From ANON - Asukira chick on September 28, 2005
    Another good chapter, i cant wait for the next one to come out. may you live long and prosper under the light of Asukira goodness. ^_^ later!
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  • From ANON - Kimi on September 27, 2005
    Hehe! No problem at all! ^^ I like reviewing good fanfics! Yours definitly deserves it!! YAY! Update sooon!! YAY for chapter 2!! xD
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  • From ANON - Asukira chick on September 26, 2005
    update? onegai (please)? pretty please? I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!
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  • From ANON - Kenz on September 26, 2005
    Keep it up starting to turn out goo.
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  • From ANON - Anna92 on September 26, 2005
    Wah! That's a great first chapter! :D
    I hope to see the rest soon :3
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