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Reviews for Goten/Videl/18/Bulma!

By : WTF
  • From JulCan1987 on October 11, 2012
    Damn, very nice story. Little Goten got some, way to go little bro.
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  • From jaybird19 on February 09, 2009
    the story line was good but it could use more detale
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  • From nahleili on April 02, 2007
    Ha, this is awesome. Poor little Goten!


    I dunno if you intended this, but pines = penis.
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  • From ANON - annonomous on December 30, 2006
    good
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  • From ANON - rewt on November 26, 2006
    good idea, good writing, mabey alittle longer

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  • From ANON - Anon on November 10, 2006
    The spelling is simply ATROCIOUS! Oh my... I couldn't even comprehend what some of the word were supposed to be. Is 'pines' supposed to be 'penis'? Um, and I think you either made up some of the words youself or you're just terrible at spelling. It was a good idea for a fic and not so bad in other areas except speech. Sometimes I don't know who is saying what and it frustrated me so I stopped in the middle of it. I couldn't go on knowing that the mistakes were in such annoyingly large quantities. Please fix this and attempt to post is back up.
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  • From ANON - Endlessly on November 05, 2006
    WTF? i thought this story got taken off! humm i wrote this story a whiel ago and posted it but soon after it was gone and my profile had been deleted. I think it was becouse i didnt do a prober disclaimer, if u note now its got a new disclaier written in.

    well anyway i cant update it as i was planning (the person that is angry at the end is Gohan when he comes home eirly from the camping trip, wich lead to all kind of things lol)

    But i cant continue becouse my profile was deleated, it wont let me log in.

    anyway thanks for reading, sorry about spelling im not very good at that, im glad you all liked it though i must say i wasnt very impresed myself, it was late at night and the idea just poped in my head.
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  • From ANON - moron016 on October 19, 2006
    hi, i would like to read your story but for some reason it does not show up on the screen. if you have it could you tell me where to find it? thx
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  • From ANON - biaqwe4a on October 16, 2006
    ei wassup? why isn't this story up he like the ideia plz fix the story
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  • From ANON - James Jones II on October 10, 2006
    Contact the admins so I can read this fic!
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  • From ANON - PRIMEBOOB on August 12, 2006
    A different story, and a good one; too. I don't know who it was that would be upset in the end of this story, but I think everyone else in the story was happy. Write more stories.
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