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Reviews for The Chains We Wear

By : LadyYeinKhan
  • From ANON - Markanovanlink on September 26, 2006
    Oh my, poor Trowa and those damn hells. What is taking Duo and the others so long to get there? I hope Quatre is the one who takes care of that creep. Oh well, I love the story and cant wait until the next installment. Good luck with your papers for class, I know how they can get in the way of fun, but school comes first.

    Luv your new biggest fan
    8D
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  • From ANON - miss_blue664 on September 25, 2006
    You my dear are a truely twisted freak. O.o

    You make me cry a little emo tear from Trowa.

    Continue the story please. :D
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  • From ANON - Teaspoon on September 24, 2006
    That was REALLY good. The attraction to the enemy, the surprise at being caught and the escape and then the climax... I think the my favorite part of Chapter 5 started the moment the bad guy smiled wickedly at Trowas small glance
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  • From ANON - Markanovanlink on September 12, 2006
    Oh my wow, I am in love with your writing style and story plot. You have become one of my favorite writers. The way you describe scenes is outstanding. I hope I am blowing your head up, so you can put out the 5th chapter. I really love this story. I am just wondering if Quatre will somehow be at the club when Trowa gets there. Hmmmmm. Keep up the good work. Luv your new fan....8D
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  • From ANON - MissBlue on September 09, 2006
    HOLY FUCKING HELL?! I really want to just like I dunno, but omg, this is an amazing story. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I feel bad for Trowa and I kinda want to hurt Duo for being an ass. *huggles* Trowa. You're plot bunnies never stop amusing me.
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  • From ANON - Anon Food on September 07, 2006
    Interesting chapter. It was fun to see his transformation. Just as a side detail, maybe I missed it, but as part of the outfit she gave him, did she give him something to disguise his gender in a clingy skirt? And I know this may sound horrid since you more chapters done, but the story feels a tad bit rushed. I suppose I'd just like to hear more of broody, angst-filled Trowa (which you do well). My favorite part in this chapter was the moment between Quatre and him when he was tucking Quatre in. But the story has really picked up momentum, and Trowa has his plate filled. Moments like this for him seem a while in coming. Poor, poor Trowa :) Can't wait for the next part.
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  • From ANON - Draconayzia on September 03, 2006
    I love how much detail you put into these chapters. Draws you and really puts you in their shoes as it were. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Anon Food on August 28, 2006
    Again, great portrayal of a bittersweet, complex Trowa. As a story mover, I'm not so sure about the area where they discuss the employment contract. I think something vague that just hints to cover everything would be more in line with letting Une give pretty much any job to any worker. But that's just me. Other than that, the chapter seemed to give the feel of a conclusion to a previous section and the beginning another section of his life. I can't wait to see what's in store for Trowa on his assignment.
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  • From ANON - Miss_blue664 on August 26, 2006
    One again I must impress upon you the lovelyness of your story. It's just so wonderful how you keep beating around the bush about Trowa's 'condition'. And this little twist in the Preventers world is jsut soooo cool. I can't wait for the next instalment. Thankyou for your brilliant idea! :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 26, 2006
    yay another chapter congrats! that was a good ending point for the chapter, though i am curious about where all this is going, not to mention EXCITED!! i totally love lena's personality and i totally agree with the 'everyone can dance' thing.
    keep up the good work, can't wait till the next chapter!

    Courtney
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  • From ANON - Draconayzia on August 25, 2006
    I feel so bad for Trowa having to do the strip club.

    And since when is that part of a contract legal!?

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - SupiChan1026 on August 22, 2006
    That was an awsome and horrible cliffy! I was really gettin in to it. update soon, please...cause then me and my friends won't have huge arguments on whats gonna happen next. it's scary to see .... just imagine WW3...you get the picture
    Great Job! keep it up
    Courtney
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  • From ANON - anon food on August 21, 2006
    The development of Trowa and his issues so far has been great. The story has pieces that hint at it being headed towards something really dark, but doesn't seem to go that far yet, more like a very morose grey. I can't wait for the next part and how all of this will be revealed to his housemates and impacts their relationships.
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  • From ANON - MissBlue on August 19, 2006
    wow. This is something intriguing. I really would love to read more of this story. I love how you kept Trowa's secret from untill the very end. I definatly can't wait to see what other plot twists you come up with. :D
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  • From ANON - Draconayzia on August 17, 2006
    O_O holy shit! I didn't see that one coming! The length is fine, it's a complicated but good read which sucks you right into it.

    I can't wait tos ee where this goes.
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