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Reviews for Dragons and Yaoi

By : chayron
  • From ANON - Webtester01 on April 25, 2007

    Parts 1-3


    Chayron, you have outdone yourself again! :) I just discovered this story and really love it. This adventure is really captivating.


    I did notice a few grammatical errors.


    I look forward to your next update.


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  • From ultistarmon on April 24, 2007
    Ooooooo, I think I'm going to like this one. I like the intrigue and suspense a lot. Hope you update SOON.
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  • From ANON - Saiyajinprincess on November 25, 2006
    yeah! that was a great experience! awesome job, again.
    with that red creature, you painted a very strange picture in my mind, even if i was surprised, that you didnīt choose a "fishitentaklewhateverseathing" but to think, that this creature has a human form, is much more errr...interesting! and actually it is a little bit more scary.
    and than, gohan and athera, both naked in a bubble (yeah, i know it was a serious situation but... *x* awwwwww, canīt stand the impressive picture i saw, while reading it.
    athara seems to me, that he always seeks for the danger, even if he donīt know, that he does.-does he? ^^
    i really like the names of the characters.
    the scottish-sounding ones, either. for my feeling, they fit very well to the characters behavor, what they say and so on.
    soooo, iīm very curious, who saved them and just wanna know, what will happen next.

    bye. :)

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  • From ANON - Guice on November 12, 2006
    You've done a great job again. Enjoyed the small fight sequence. I love everyones attitudes in this story, they make me smile while reading. Don't know why. Keep up the good work, I can't wait till the next installment. Talk to you later.
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  • From ANON - Macha on November 12, 2006
    Yes! Despite having to get used to all the new names, this story is following through on its promise of adventure! YAY!!!! :D

    Very descriptive and stimulating. I want to know who made the air bubble though!

    Oh, and I liked Gohan's seeing his life flash before his eyes, that was AWESOME!
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  • From ANON - saiyajinprincess on October 13, 2006
    i am glad that you felt like put the dbz characteres and your new ones "into hell knows what" i like the story very much!
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  • From ANON - Yuurei on October 12, 2006
    *Is excited* Seems like it's going to be one hell of an adventure. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Macha on October 08, 2006
    *rubs hands together* Looks like a good adventure story!
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