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Reviews for Heavy Metal Madonna

By : antilogicgirl
  • From ANON - Diana on November 29, 2015
    l really enjoyed this and hope that someday there Is more of it. Off to go read everything else you have written, Thanks!
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  • From BlackMetalHeart on January 11, 2011
    Wow you have done an amazing job and I agree that it is better to have a story with a plot then just mindless sex also I really really like Havoc to!
    Keep up the good work and update soon! :)
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on June 08, 2010
    I love rereading this fic I really enjoy the line about her chest sliding over his wet one and Jean's large hands, very smexy.
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  • From HeavenlyEyes on May 20, 2010
    I'm really enjoying this story so far! I was going to say that it's not often you see Havoc/Winry, but I don't think I have ever seen it! So kudos to you. :P The whole operation seemed perfectly plausible, and the whole story flows well, I look forward to more. :)
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  • From theklvkid2 on April 12, 2010
    That was very, very good.
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on April 05, 2010
    Yea an update!!! I'm so happy, I've been checking and rechecking. I laughed out loud with the first paragraph that was very funny. Don't feel the need to apoligise for taking things slow. I'm a huge fan of the build up and you're doing a great job! Very real and sexy and I'm really loving this pairing. The only think I'm having trouble with is invisioning how Jean looks with the auto mail spine. If you could throw in a discription (since he's shirtless :) of how his back looks it would help me get a better mental picture. It would also be nice to have it from Winry's point of view admiring her work on him like an artist. I'm sure it would help him to feel better about himself that she likes the way he looks with all that hardware. I'm loving this story and really having a great time with it, thank you so much for writting it!
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  • From ANON - ewa on April 05, 2010
    Awesome update! This is worth the wait. I love how Winry tries to stay in control and fails. Your writing style is wonderful. Havoc's nightmare was interesting, too.
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  • From ANON - Roscoe on March 11, 2010
    I am loving this story! I would never thought Havoc and Winry as a pairing, but it seems to be working out very well. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on March 11, 2010
    I love rereading this story! I know that Winry is lying onto of the covers but it would be very smexy if she cuddled under them to sleep with Jean. I'm a big fan of smexy sleeping, all warm and cuddly.
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on January 03, 2010
    I keep rereading this over and over again. I adore this pairing. I'm on pins and needles waiting for what's going to happen with Winry in bed with Jean.
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on October 13, 2009
    I love rereading this fic. I'm really looking forward to seeing the new chapters.
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  • From ANON - ewa on September 23, 2009
    *pushes large bowl of yummy to review monster* Rare pairings are so much fun! More, please?
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on August 07, 2009
    I'm so happy to see you again I had worried that you had left us. I'm sorry to hear about the electronic gremlins my dear I hope that everything will work out for you.

    I ADORE this story. This latest intalment is soooooo yyyuuuummmyyyy. I was just eating it all up line by line. The sexual tension is fantastic and I adore the inter play between them. This was such a yumy chapter I'm waiting on pins and needles to see from you again.

    Thank you so much for continuing this story, I'm loving this pairing so much.
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  • From Evermist on August 05, 2009
    *feeds* ^^ Yay! I thought this story was dead! Good to see it's up and going again; it's a good one.
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  • From ANON - Gala S on August 05, 2009
    OMG! *heart throb* I love your story its so amazing!! *Wipes away tear* I check your story religously for an update!!! You're such an amazing author (And I NEVER review) but I just wanted to say this story is so unique and wonderful! *BEGS* Please update soon!!!!
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