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Reviews for Survival of the Fittest

By : fyrbyrd074
  • From Zofo on February 10, 2011
    Oooo Raditz and Nappa servicing Kakarot - yummy :)

    Hope Kakarot's new found strength will attract Vegeta, at the moment they seem so far apart. I hope they keep the kids too.
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  • From Shaquana on February 09, 2011
    I love this story!!! PLEASE PLEASE, UPDATE SOON!!!!
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  • From ANON - hajiu on January 23, 2011
    your back with a super hot chaptor to boot!!(droolssss)
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  • From KittyhawkLuvcat on January 23, 2011
    I love this story, especially the complexities of who knows what about whom. I hope to be able to read another chapter in the near future. Great writing!
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  • From kitkit on January 23, 2011
    love it
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  • From ANON - Lil jj on December 19, 2010
    This story is great! pleez make ch.7! I love it!
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  • From Zofo on November 14, 2010
    Is it Kakarot with the three fetuses, oh I bet it is as he was Broly's favorite. Spealing of whom, I don't believe he's dead, don't think Vegeta does either.

    Glad Vegeta has to accept all the boys as his for now and looking forward to any interactions with him and Kakarot :)
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  • From kitkit on August 27, 2010
    luv it...i can't wait for kaka and veggie to get together
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  • From ANON - Jocelyn on July 05, 2010
    This is a wonderful story. I understand that you are disappointed you don't have a beta. But please don't let that discourage you from writing this story! There are a couple minor errors here and there, but your talent for creating a narrative is far more compelling that I am easily able to ignore the little mistakes. So please continue! It would be a shame if you didn't finish it because I want to know how it ends!
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  • From ANON - topbear on June 17, 2010
    I am glad you are writing again! I love this story and want to see how it developed. Poor kakarotto, he was not wanted by Vegeta, I wonder why. Poor him. sniff. I look forward to seeing the interaction between kakarotto and vegeta.

    love from topbear
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  • From ANON - cremepuff on June 14, 2010
    the long wait was worth it, im glad your back and up too snuff with your writing (mpreggooglyeyes)

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  • From ANON - superfan on June 13, 2010
    iam glad your back ^_^ i reallyreally enjoy reading your fanfic

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  • From GodOfInsanity on June 13, 2010
    Glad you updated. This is one of my favorite DBZ stories.

    I don't really think you NEED a beta. You write well enough on your own. I'm sure one would help you and (any of us) but I believe you do a good job on your own. If anyone says otherwise, they can either beta for you or just shut the hell up. >8)

    Three fetuses. O_O The story is getting better as you write and I hope you keep writing it. I know how it feels when it starts feeling like a chore. Sometimes you just need a break from it. *nods* Anywhos, I look forward to your next update and have a good week where you're going. >;)
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  • From Deathdeamon88 on June 13, 2010
    HERE HERE! great work so far and can't wait to read more ^^ and i love your style of writing.
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  • From ANON - TiffumsLG on May 19, 2010
    oh no as soon as its starts to get juicy and oh so interesting TBC oh please please continue im hooked
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