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Reviews for Survival of the Fittest

By : fyrbyrd074
  • From ANON - Yaoiandcoffeeaddict on April 17, 2009
    Please dont delete this! Who cares what other people say! I love this story and if you are writing it so you must love this idea too! Please continue with this.
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  • From navajo on April 17, 2009
    NO PLEASE DONT....i really love your stories, with how you are able to keep the same attitudes that the characters have in the actually show while changing their environment. I'm not sure what mistakes your are talking about exactly, there may have been a typo but it didnt subtract from the story as a whole. So please dont delete your story because im already hooked on this one and i enjoy rereading "damn traditions" also.
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  • From kyuubifreak on April 17, 2009
    Hi, why? the story is good!! i love all of the stories. most of time it will take while to find a beta, so dont give up!!
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  • From HannaFO on April 17, 2009
    Noo don't stop writing just because 1 person doesn't like your writing!!
    We all have mistakes in our writing, and i for one love your stories, i've read them all, so please reconsider!!!
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  • From ANON - Yaoiandcoffeeaddict on April 14, 2009
    I love this story so far.
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  • From DarkSerapha on April 13, 2009
    Interesting start. I can tell you have a lot of ideas for this stories, and since I'm a total addict for an angsty Kakarott, I'm proabably going to stick around and see where this is going. However, you desperately need a beta, the many mistakes are really taking away from the fun. Also, don't rush things so much. This is something I noticed with your other story as well which is why I stopped reading it after a while. Take your time developing things, don't neglect descriptions, inner speech and emotions so much. It will greatly improve your writing if you heed this advice.
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  • From kyuubifreak on April 13, 2009
    what happen to goku when he was younger?? good story by the way
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  • From navajo on April 13, 2009
    love your new story although i really want to know what accident happened/ and what happened to kaka...cant wait for more
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