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Reviews for Hope Leaves

By : pegarsus9
  • From ANON - Anon on October 18, 2012
    This story had the makings of a grand melodrama. I just HAD to skip to the last chapter (skipped like 2) You were veering all over the place, how many topics did u want to cover? I don't dislike it, but it doesn't leave me very satisfied. It's no grand love story, not really, everything seemed too... Planned for porn? Zooma the sexual gladiator, check it out. I don't know, I just don't feel any attachment to any of the characters. Not like with that chick who wrote "against all odds", that bitch really had my heart racing. This... I was annoyed that the same issue took forever to resolve. Again, trunks, sometimes bra, vegeta, bulma, basically annoyed me. So stupid.
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  • From Ulrike on October 23, 2011
    Wow, it has been a while since I came back to read this fic. I truly love the horror aspect of it all. Really, really disturbing. And as always, love the Vegeta angst whenever he visits his memories. I've fallen out of the DBZ fandom recently, but was interested to see how much I had missed on Hope Leaves. After reading it, perhaps my Vegeta obsession is not entirely gone :D
    My one and only tiny complaint about the chapters near the end was that Bulma and Vegeta never really discussed what happened to Bulma. She was attacked quiet brutally and I would have liked to see the real Vegeta react in some way to what happened to her.

    Besides that, great job! I look forward to seeing how this end and how everyone gets out of this mess.
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  • From Ulrike on April 01, 2011
    Wow...powerful chapter!

    It's been so long since I visited this site and I was so excited when I saw the newest chapter had been added. Wow, wow! This was one amazingly dark chapter and I loved every second of it. Jeice is one sick, messed-up person. Yet he's so believable, too! Some fanfics have their characters just too unbelievably evil, yet Jeice is clearly confused and twisted and just....scary. He has feelings and appears to have some sort of warped affection for Vegeta, but because of this he's positively dangerous and crazy. And poor Vegeta. Jeez...what a horrible life he lived.

    I hope everything turns out ok for Goten. Poor kid. It sucks that no one believes him about this phantom-Vegeta! I'm very excited to see what happens next. Great stuff!
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  • From Ulrike on February 04, 2011
    Arg, scary! Who is this crazy false Vegeta character? Is he all the darkness and evil within Vegeta or just a conjured spirit or something else? What a horrible creature! And now what is he going to do to Bulma and Bra?!?

    Once again, a marvelous chapter. I absolutely love the Vegeta flashbacks. They make my day...or night. And the realism is this story is always shocking and perfect. Vegeta's fear, Bulma and Trunks's disbelief, evil Vegeta guy killing the neighbor and her poor daughter :( This story gets better and better. Awesome work!
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  • From Danyealle on January 11, 2011
    Upon review of your story, it was noticed that you cite/quote from another source, but that it is not properly cited.

    Please read the below listed FAQ, for the format that is needed.
    http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=15097

    Should you, the author use extensive quotations and references, footnoting would be best in that for instance.

    Thank you for your cooperation.

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  • From Ulrike on December 31, 2010
    Ooo...there is something so creepy about this chapter. Goten's dream and Bra's chilling "Daddy isn't here" thing...it's a freakin horror movie! But seriously...Loved. The. Angst. Probably one of my favorite chapters so far. I love this awful, terrifying journey down memory lane. The end of this chapter...Wow. So blunt, yet gets right to torture of this whole thing. This Lennon guy is such an asshole! Anyway...awesome chapter. Can't wait to read what happens next!
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  • From Ulrike on December 09, 2010
    Excellent! I guess I hadn't realized you had a newer chapter before this one! I loved it. Deeply disturbing. I know I've said it before, but there is a truly realistic quality to this story that makes it really horrifying at moments. After the Ginyu Force...well...forced Vegeta onto that girl and he kept repeating about the diseases they could get, there was a very real fear in those words that I had to read over and over again. The drug use and paranoia of all of Frieza's men is just so creepy...and sad. I'm excited to see what happens next. This impostor Vegeta is freaky!

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  • From TaishoTears on October 31, 2010
    Whaaaaaaaaaa!!! More! There has to be more! I was glued the your words the whole time!
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  • From Ulrike on October 04, 2010
    Whoa.

    I'm a huge fan of angst, as everyone can see, so I read a lot of fanfictions about Vegeta being abused or assaulted or hurt. A lot of the stories are similar or describe the same things happening to him, so I'm never really surprised by the plot or violence.

    But this story really disturbs me...in an awesome way! Your writing is excellent and the creeping horror in the background of everything that is happening is really freaking me out! The idea of Vegeta's brain being tampered with to the point of him becoming a 'drooling vegetable' really hit me. It's a level of realistic violence many DBZ fanfics don't portray. The frightening relationship between Jeice and Vegeta is also greatly written and intense. I'm so used to the "Vegeta screaming for help, bleeding everywhere, and trying to escape from Frieza" plots that reading a fanfic about a tainted friendship going awry truly makes this story believable. Jeice is believable and Vegeta's confusion toward him is perfectly written, something you'd see in a movie! Anyway, fantastic work. I can't wait to read more angst. I just adore fanfics about Vegeta's past. I also want to see what happens with this evil twin Vegeta running around. What's up with that guy?! :D Great stuff!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 06, 2010
    Oooo....this definitely has my attention! I can usually assume where most fanfictions are going in sense of plot and direction, but this one has me guessing! I am looking forward to the angsty goodness that lies ahead. The summary definitely had me interested. Wonderful grasp on the dialogue and characters! I'm really wondering what's going to happen to Vegeta. Nervous and anxious and excited to read some more!
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