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Reviews for Mind Rape

By : MutantPoptart
  • From ANON - Anon on March 16, 2012
    Ah, what a way to end the chapter! I'm desperate to see the next part now! It was a nice moment when Bulma compared Vegeta and Goku, usually thought to be opposites, and realized that they would have been doing the same thing or made the same choice--Saiyans. Great build-up of fear and suspense, and the chilling truth that terrible things can happen before the hero even has a chance to fight, not just at the end of the battle. Vegeta being too late to save or even try to save everyone on the Lookout was awful and realistic for how cruel life can be, and that they didn't have to wait for a dramatic showdown, and no matter how important a person might be to one person like Vegeta to another their life is just a speck of dust and not worth waiting for.

    Can't wait to read what will happen with Buu and Vegeta, and what role you might have Bow play! Great job.
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  • From ANON - T-Chan on November 13, 2011
    Dear Kami above, you are very good at what you do. I breathlessly await the next installment of this fantastic story. I am such a huge fan of the Goku/Vegeta pairing, but I have never seen it played from this angle before. You are Brilliant, beyond brilliant you are a genius. If my begging could somehow inspire you to post another chapter soon I would do so until I am blue in the face. Your newly faithful and completely devoted fan.
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on November 08, 2011
    YAY, another chappie! I check back here every once in a while now just in case you updated. Anyway I feel for Vegeta, now that Goku is kinda temporarily indisposed of at the moment Geta finally has his moment to shine. And get his revenge on Buu as well, assuming he can get passed Bow first.
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  • From Zofo on November 05, 2011
    Darn Vegeta's pride, again, sure it would be awkward to face Goku, but wishing him back could be their only hope.

    Oh no are they headed for the lookout!
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  • From Lorichelle87 on November 05, 2011
    OMG i am so happy you've posted again but what a cliffhanger!
    I love this story so much and i can't wait to read more, please post more soon hun!
    :)
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  • From ANON - Topbear on November 05, 2011
    Wow, this chapter made me miss goku a lot. Is vegeta going to battle buu alone? but we all know he can not win. In the anemia, it took fusion of the two to win. Even I love the idea vegeta to be the hero this time, it would be great to have some goku help too. More believable that way. Can't wait to see how the two heal of this experience. This an epic story, please please continue.
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  • From Zofo on August 15, 2011
    Enjoyed reading how Goku got absorbed, hope Vegeta can understand what Dende is trying to tell him.
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  • From Lorichelle87 on July 28, 2011
    Wow this is getting good.
    I love the way you write, so beautiful, so elegant.
    This has the potential to be an epic and powerful story, I think.
    This is quickly becoming one of my faves...
    I love it, you are doing such a wonderful job and I absolutely cannot wait for more! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on July 28, 2011
    Man, this chappie made me miss Goku alot XD! But maybe this new plan will be just what Vegeta needs.
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  • From ANON - noon on July 27, 2011
    Another wonderful chapter! I loved the flashback to when Goku and Vegeta were fighting Buu that lets us better understand how the Saiyans were relating to each other through the fight even after Vegeta broke off from canon and refused fusion again. Have you ever seen the DBZ movie with Janemba in Hell? I think it was called Fusion Reborn. I always loved how Vegeta and Goku spoke to each other in that and Vegeta's pride and stubbornness couldn't get in the way of the underlying close relationship and Goku's sincerity there just like in your scene-- perfect! Though I can't help but wonder how differently it all might have turned out if Vegeta had been the one absorbed... Yikes.

    I'm curious about what you're planning or what will happen with the dragonballs, but it's Vegeta and Goku's relationship that makes me so eager for the next chapter! Definitely looking forward to Vegeta trying to call out Goku and how Buu might have to struggle. I love looking into the Saiyan's personalities and strength of will rather than just power levels. How much will Vegeta learn about how Goku feels about him and if it will grow or change their relationship? After Buu is defeated, and maybe Bow, will Vegeta and Goku have to address trying to heal each other after the ugly experiences and trust each other?

    Great story! Please keep writing!
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  • From Zofo on July 25, 2011
    Phew lucky escape for Vegeta there, but it doesn't look like Buu can restrain Bow for long.
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on July 11, 2011
    I feel it's only a matter of time before Bow ultimately turns on Buu himself. He's like a boiling pot of water seconds before boiling over and burning your skin.
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  • From Lorichelle87 on July 10, 2011
    This is very, very good so far. It definitely seems to be going somewhere. I love the way you describe and convey the psychology of Vegeta and Buu. Cannot wait to read more!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Julia on July 10, 2011
    I like this story!

    You describe Vegeta's, Buu's and Bow' feelings very good and the story goes on, even with a slow speed.
    I'm excited about what happens next.
    Thanks for writing this story!
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  • From ANON - jalapeno toes on June 29, 2011
    Your story is just about the only thing I come to this site to read anymore. Please continue because I really like it!
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