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Reviews for Deceitful Allies and Trustworthy Foes

By : animeslave18
  • From ANON - InvaderWannabe on February 26, 2014
    Wow only one more chapter left? I feel like there's so much that still needs to happen, but hey I have faith in your writing :) Can't wait for the final update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 17, 2013
    I am absolutely THRILLED to pieces when you updated this story. I love how you kept the Japanese traditions (and I'm sure it cannot have been easy to do so). I would love to see Vegeta and Goku get married!! Yaaay!
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  • From Yaoi_Angel on August 28, 2013
    happy to see the update. cant wait to read the rest. keep up the good work.
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  • From Yaoi_Angel on June 06, 2013
    I really wish this story was done. I was so looking forward to see if vegeta would really have to marry ookami. I think he should just kill ookami and get it over with.
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  • From ANON - OYM on May 24, 2013
    I like the story. It's slow in places, but it is understood that some scenes are necessary for a good story. I have liked all the stories you've put on this site, and hope that you eventually finish them all. Thanks for writing.
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  • From Zofo on May 26, 2011
    So Akuto is after Hokoru, how creepy, and Ookami is getting worse by the day. I don't know how Vegeta can stand it! Please don't make him marry him :( Can't they kill Ookami as well as Akuto?
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  • From topbear1974 on May 23, 2011
    I thoroughly enjoy how Vegeta care about Kaka. it is so sweet!! Now we know that Vegeta's father's problem with Akuro. I wish they can solve the problem. I seriously wonder how they are going to turn the table.
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  • From Dragon7 on May 17, 2011
    Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From Zofo on May 15, 2011
    Finally caught up with this story and it's wonderful :)

    I was worried that Lord Hokoru was only stringing Vegeta along and would capture Kakarot so was very relived when he didn't. Now they have to find a way to get them back and prevent Vegeta's marriage but it seems they are outnumbered, and now Karaot is out of commision for a while the odds against them are even worse! The tension is palpable.

    Can't wait for more :)
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  • From topbear1974 on May 08, 2011
    Wow, this is intriguing. Is kaka in danger. Please update soon.
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  • From mjmusiclover on May 07, 2011
    ahh very beautifull well written :D
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  • From mjmusiclover on May 05, 2011
    wow this is awesomeness, thankgod, vegeta's dad agrees with him
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  • From topbear1974 on May 04, 2011
    I am glad vegeta and his father agreed on helping kakarotto. I am intrigued as to what happened between akuru and vegetas father. The plot is getting thick, and I love to see where this is going. Thanks for the update.
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  • From topbear1974 on April 30, 2011
    Yaya!! An update! I am so glad to see such a quite update. I had the imagine of vegeta having two swords in his hands. It is quite cute. I laughed with Kakarotto when vegeta said he wants to be on top. Well I hope he will succeed in future. The lemon is great. So they come up with a plan to get back Kakarotto's status? I am curious how, as Kakarotto doesn't seem to have power at the moment apart from his skill. I look forward to reading more.

    I am sorry to hear that you failed your tests. I hope it is not because you are too dwelled on updating the story.
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  • From topbear1974 on April 23, 2011
    Wow, it seems my guess is correct. I am sorry you have to rush a bit. I hope it is not because I guessed the result. the story is very enticing. Now i wonder how can kakarotto and vegeta deal with the enemies. How would they tide over all the difficulties.

    Looking forward to read more.
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