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By : Vegetaswriter
  • From ANON - Yaya on April 22, 2012
    I'm happy this fic updated! I hadn't thought of Ginyu's body-switch before in relation to this, but I'm glad Goku made the connection. Meditation sounds like a good idea, and I'm interested in seeing how you'll handle that like if Vegeta and Goku will have to meditate together, or talk with each other about how each thinks about their energy, or what obstacles might get in the way of figuring out how to use the new body's chi. Ginyu started getting used to Goku's body as he was fighting and having to deal with it, though, so I wonder if you'll also add our favorite Saiyans sparring to get more familiar with how their bodies and chis work. Vegeta seemed to look down on Goku for a lot of this chapter, and even Goku got angry more quickly than I'd expected, but that makes sense with such a crazy, upsetting situation. I wonder, though, how much of Vegeta's insults was covering, considering how defensively he decided not to admit that he sort of had made a wish the night before to be more like Goku...

    I was surprised Goku came up with a decent excuse for ChiChi about why 'Vegeta' would be staying at her house and 'Goku' wouldn't be around for the next few days, and even to keep her from talking with Bulma about it. Great job! Though that flirty bit at the end shocked me, and I wonder if Goku's going to hear more than he wanted to about what his wife thinks of him if she insults him to who she thinks is Vegeta. I loved how you described Goku's glee at being able to yell at ChiChi and gruffly tell her to shut up, as if he's always wanted to do that and now he can! A bit of his wish is coming true, it seems, when he can act like Vegeta without repercussion of his friends expecting him to be always happy and always forgiving and meek. Good for him! And Vegeta intends to tell Bulma the truth, but I wonder if he'll have to deal with any of the other fighters stopping by and treating him like Goku. Don't know, but can't wait to see more! And then they'll be trapped in a space ship together--yikes!

    Good set-up and more of Goku realizing how intimidating his body can be, though I'd like to see Vegeta noticing and enjoying being able to intimidate Kakarrot better too. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From bitemeslowly on April 21, 2012
    I think I've reviewed this story b4..only I used my real name..Kayla..so yea..just wanted to say ur welcome..if it was me u was talking to..lol..Anywayyy I really love this story..the new chapter cracked me up especially when Vegeta was trippin on Goku bc how he looked..woww..lmao..this is such an unique idea..and soo awesome! Yay for the new chapter and I can't wait for more..keep up the amazing work :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 20, 2012
    Another amusing chapter :)

    Goku seems to want to stay like it for a while, hope we get to find out why. Vegeta is his angry self, though you would have thought he'd relish the chance to have all Goku's power, if he can master it.

    I loved Goku pretending to be Vegeta to Chichi at the end but was she coming on to the prince? OMG!
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  • From ANON - Geta6310 on April 20, 2012
    When I checked to see what stories were updated today, I squealed with excitment!!! My mom looked at me like I was insane, lol!!! I just love your stories.
    This chapter is great, I could imagine just how messy Goku looked in our prince's bod & how scary Vegeta looks in Goku's. I wonder what Vegeta is going to say to the blue haired wench... will he pretend to be the happy-go-lucky fool? Or our usually cranky prince? Don't worry I am going to wait it out, I'M HOOKED!
    As for Goku, I'm glad he's not holding back on his screeching harpy. And this is when things start to get REALLY intresting for poor Goku, His wife is a cheating SLUT!!! Keep Going!!!
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  • From Zofo on March 25, 2012
    Excellant second chapter, I found it very humerous and was smiling throughout :) I agree on Vegeta having the aches and pains from his previous life, seems fitting.
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  • From ANON - yaya on March 09, 2012
    Humor is difficult, but you did a great job in making me smile without being over-the-top ridiculous. I'm so glad you didn't make Goku a caricature of a bouncing goofy idiot like some people do. You showed him as an adult, but still happy, and I found how he started making funny faces as he was brushing his teeth very realistic for him. I'm curious about what Goku's wearing now to get a reaction like that out of ChiChi. Is it something Vegeta is going to bring up? I've read parodies with the body-switch idea that were silly and were mostly focused on Goku and Vegeta trying and failing to act like each other with painfully stupid friends and family not noticing their gaffes-- the way you've written the body-switch so far though is more serious and really interesting. Was Vegeta used to waking up in pain because of old injuries or because of how hard he trained the night before? I'm really curious about what things Vegeta and Goku might learn about each other, and I loved that little insight of Goku's where he realized how intimidating his height and size might seem in comparison to Vegeta. Are they going to decide to hide the switch, and learn about how people treat the other one and what they have to deal with? It seemed like you hinted that Goten looks up to Vegeta and I wonder if you'll show Vegeta having a private kind of relationship with his son and Goten that Goku doesn't know how to deal with, as it is more small gestures and words rather than Goku's normal enthusiasm and openness.

    I wonder if Vegeta will realize that in Goku's body and with Goku's chi he is finally stronger than Goku! Or maybe they both have to get used to fighting in their bodies, or handling transforming... Would the others distrust Vegeta now that Goku isn't strong enough to stop him if he wanted to try something? If Vegeta's body is often in pain, will the pain, the distrustful glances, and how the Earthlings treat Vegeta eventually get to Goku now that he's on teh receiving end and cause him to lose his temper?

    I really like this story so far, with realism but with humor too. You've done a great job of showing the characters without trapping them in cliches of Vegeta and Goku, so I have high hopes about how this story will progress. Great job and I'm looking forward to Vegeta and Goku's talk next chapter!
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  • From ANON - animeslave18 on March 02, 2012
    I thought it was humorous. :) I'm surprised no one's done anything like this before. You'd think it'd be something popular. Or maybe someone already has and people just don't use it that much. I like how you have the little details down...such as height and voices and such. However, it gets kinda confusing when you mention Goku and Vegeta. Are you talking about the ones in the bodies or the bodies themselves? I assume it's the ones in the bodies or the souls hehe. Those ornery gods. ;) (Took me forever to find that word...I use it all the time and yet I didn't know how to spell it >.> ornery that is and because of that, I can't remember what else I was going to say...) Good stuff. :) Keep it going...if you can hehe.

    animeslave18 (in case it pops up anonymous >.>)
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  • From Zofo on January 28, 2012
    This is an interesting idea and I look forward to where it will go.
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