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Reviews for Fated

By : animeslave18
  • From ANON - InvaderWannabe on July 14, 2014
    Well now I'm want to know the same thing Kakarot wants to know.... what does Vegeta's true form look like!?! :O
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  • From ANON - DarkDusk on March 03, 2014
    Wow, I really enjoy this story, I am so captured in what is happening, I like that Vegeta is the God of War.
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  • From ANON - vegeta lover on December 03, 2013
    I think kakarotto, did the right thing and left, so he can keep his trust.... but i am not sure, because in the las paragraph it said that his cloths was all messy... but that could be that he dressed really fast and run out side.... know that i think about it it could also be that he did have sex with that girl, and then left...ARRRGGG... SO CONFUSING... THERE ARE MANY POSSIBILITIES... I HATE WHEN PEOPLE MESSED WITH MY HEAD.. I CAN'T THINK CLEAR AFTER THEY DO....

    I just hope that you update soon.. i want to know what is going to happen next...

    Ohh.. and what about the haunted castle? Well i think is Randitz... yeahh must be him... i wonder, what he is planning... wait is Randitz ¿ Right?


    * sight* please update soon.. i think i am going to died... if kakarotto can't live without vegeta..welll i CAN'T live without reading this story.. is what keep me ALIVE...
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  • From ANON - liz fontanez on November 04, 2013
    Love it..... one of the best story there is.... i wish to read more..so please up date !!!!!.
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  • From ANON - setbl on November 02, 2013
    I like how this story is progressing. Any relationship does have to be built, and that does take time. But, it is sad how much time is wasted in trivial thoughts and matters, when it could be used to create stronger and more worthwhile bonds and worlds. I believe genuine love is eternal, but rarely is it genuine; even rarer is it mutual. I like "Fated" and most or your stories. I hope you finish them all when you can. Thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - KrazyKat001 on October 17, 2013
    This is the story I would love to see finished the most of all stories you've written. I love EVERYTHING about it. I come back each week to see if you updated this story. This story has shown much plots and promise. I love to see the relationship between Vegeta and Kakarott. Now that we know who Vegeta is, the real lies with Goku - will he accept Vegeta for who he is? Till then, please, please, please continue this story. You are an amazing writer and your uncanny talent to keep your readers in suspense is out of this world!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2013
    Please Finnish the story u love it
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  • From Yaoi_Angel on June 06, 2013
    love this story, can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From KrazyKat001 on May 29, 2013
    "peeks around*

    This is such an awsome story. I would love to read some more! I also like to read more of Bark at the Moon, All There Is But Will Never Be, and The New Kid in Town. You're doing a great job with all of them. You are an awsome writer and thank you for writing these awsome stories!!
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  • From ANON - Nancy103 on May 05, 2013
    Very different and interesting story! I really do like the God concept and their difficulties in finding a mate. Thanks for posting!
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  • From KrazyKat001 on May 02, 2013
    *le gasp!* Vegeta finally reveal himself! Looks like it was too much for Kakarott to handle, knowing who Vegeta is and what he does. I love how Kakarott still loves him but he thought it was a bad dream which made it so tragic to read! *sniff* Now I'm praying there's a happy ending in this story.


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  • From KrazyKat001 on May 01, 2013
    AAAAAAaahgghghh!!!! NOOOoo!!! Vegeta! Don't go! Epic, epic cliffhanger ever!!

    Goodness! Those two have the greatest misunderstanding ever! I hope they resolve their issue in the next chapter. I'm keeping my fingers crossed that Vegeta will listen to Kakarott's answer but knowing him, his personality, he would probably either not come to Kakarott for many months or he will not hear him out until Kakarott's in his proper age to make his decision. I'm definitely hoping that it's the former and not the latter. I mean, c'mon! Love wins all!!
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  • From KrazyKat001 on April 29, 2013
    *Peeps around*

    Aw, no updates yet. I would LOVE to read another chapter. Keep up the awsome work, cuz you are doing a fantastic job!!!
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  • From ANON - Nncy103 on April 20, 2013
    This is a very intriguing story! Please update soon and thanks for posting!
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  • From KrazyKat001 on April 20, 2013
    Just finished reading the latest two chapters and I gotta say, Dang!! I thought you were developing the story and their characters very nicely and dang! Whew! I *LOVE* it when Vegeta saves the day, but man! A beautiful moment turns disasterous!!! Goodness. I'm glad you included this side story instead of arriving to a villiage (being destroyed). It really shows more of Vegeta's character and his concerns of Goku's well-being.
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