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  • From KrazyKat001 on April 18, 2013
    Yaaay!!! A new chapter!!

    I thought it was really cute that Goku/Kakarott was being to stubborn to ask for help. And Vegeta seems more open to his fated one. It's a good character development going on throughout the chapter! Great job!!

    My favorite part is Vegeta's agruing with a greedy saleman and Kakarott made a bargaining deal. That, and Vegeta waking up Kakarott. I thought it was really sad when none of Vegeta's former fated ones ever stayed with him, but then again, if this wasn't the case, then this story wouldn't be here, right? *wink, wink!*

    Man, to go thousands of years without a fated one by his side... good thing Vegeta is too stubborn to give up! XD Looking forward to reading the next one!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 17, 2013
    I love it but please make the chapters longer
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  • From KrazyKat001 on April 16, 2013
    Eeeee!!! So happy to read another chapter!!! XD

    Okay, now I'm a bit curious as to who Vegeta really is. We know he's not a demon. So, I'm guessing he could be ... Death? Wait, wait, wait, I know! I know! Vegeta's one of the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse! But which one? He could easily be Death, Famine, War or Conquest.

    ...

    Maybe he's is the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse combined into a single entity! No, wait.... I *do* know that Vegeta is connected to war and he doesn't stay in one place for very long. But he doesn't take away life... so that doesn't make him death. In a sense. And he also mentioned that he doesn't take part of the war but was involved somehow. So, that doesn't make him Conquest (which is connected with diseases) or Famine. But... does this make Vegeta "War"?

    Ah~... maybe Vegeta's "sin?" GAAAH!!!! There's so many possibilities! Even in biblical references!! Ack! Just what is Vegeta???? Maybe I'm wrong about my theories but who knows? Perhaps I'll find that out in the next chapter or any of the upcoming chapters. Keep up a great work! You're awsome!!!


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  • From KrazyKat001 on April 16, 2013
    Wow! I am hooked!!

    This story is *so* good! I was instantly hooked since the first chapter and I am eager to read the next chapter! I love this story so much!! There is something almost indescribable about this second chapter. I can't place what it is exactly it is yet but let me tell you, it has made my day!! Tons of hugs!!!
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