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Reviews for Resolution on a Lonely Planet

By : Ulrike
  • From ANON - LadyAlucard on July 20, 2014
    Ouch, this chapter was somewhat hard to read for me. It's almost painful how it's Trunks who first reminds Vegeta of what happend to him. Or, well he doesn't really remind him I guess, but it does feel like Trunks set something in motion that will bring Vegetas memories back to him. And that is somehow really sad. Trunks is after all, the only really innocent person here.
    And I do agree with Yamcha. It really wasn't fair of Bulma to bring a child into this messed up situation. How can she even live with herself? I'm really sorry, as I am not sure if you were aiming to make Bulma unlikable, but I can't stand her at all in this fic. Everything she does and did is just so messed up.
    Oh and I looooved how you made Goku give a hint of being uncomfortable with lying to Vegeta! Thank you for updating once again! (:
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  • From ANON - Lady on June 08, 2014
    Thank you for updating! I think I would die if I never found out how this story ended haha :D
    True that this is quite a strange chapter as it seems so unrelated to the real plot, but I love the background you gave the Sayjans here. I always wanted to belive that they are not purely bad. I'd also really love to know what Goku and the rest of the Z-fighters think of the Vegeta situation at this point and how they behave towards him. Goku was quite disapproving of lying about the "Hate being right" incident after all and I cant see him acting like nothings changed around him (or the Briefs). Krillin as well, I picture him being overly nice to Vegeta, constantly thinking about what happened.

    Im really looking forward to the next chapter already!
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  • From ANON - Lady on June 01, 2014
    Hey there, I just thought I'd come here to beg you not to abandon this story haha xD
    Please please please keep writing? :D Or spoil me with the ending so I can imagine how everything plays out :P
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  • From ANON - Lady on March 27, 2014
    Finally :D I've waited sooooooo long for the next chapter.
    Although I'm reaaaaaally unhappy that Bulma and Vegeta seemed to have ended up together?! D:
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  • From ANON - cara on March 12, 2014
    Love it! I really didn't think that Yamcha would gather the dragon balls and wish Vegeta's memories away! XD
    It'll be really interesting seeing how the others act around Vegeta and how he gets his memory back.
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  • From ANON - LadyAlucard on February 25, 2014
    Argh!!! Oh no it really did happen in the end Dx
    Vegetas memories got blocked. Well at least Piccolo agrees with me "“The dragon-balls are not to be used for selfish, personal wishes such as this! They cannot be the answer to everything!”

    I hope you don't mind my critique, but I felt like this chapter was moving extremely fast. Like Yamcha disappears and not even 5 seconds later has the dragonballs. Another 5seconds later he made his wish and Piccolo is upon him. Then Bulma, Krillin and Tien seem to arrive at CC really fast. And how the heck did Bulma know to ask Vegeta for his last memory when she didn't know about the wish at that point?

    I really really hope your not going to end up with BulmaxVegeta at this point. I really don't think I can forgive what has been done and I doubt Vegeta can either.
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  • From ANON - LadyAlucard on February 08, 2014
    My poor poor heart D:
    This is terrible, how do you plan to EVER give any kind of closure to this?
    And now it's not only Vegeta but Goku as well. He's losing his faith in humanity and for good reasons as well.
    I really can't help but hate Tien. That man, seriously! I hope he will finally "see the light" now :/
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  • From ANON - nancy103 on February 07, 2014
    This is definitely a very emotional story. Hatred, jealousy, love, trust, hope, desire....all of it is in here. Thanks for the updates!
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  • From ANON - Cara on December 27, 2013
    *uncontrollable sobbing* it's so sad but I love it T~T
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  • From ANON - VampireQueen on November 25, 2013
    I love the story so far. The last scene with bulma was very well written :)
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  • From ANON - Jb on October 17, 2013
    I really love how you had him pause before taking his pants off. I could tell that he was thinking about how those guys had made fun of his underwear and that he was worried Bulma would think the same thing. Or at least that's what I'm pretty sure what happened. That was probably one of my favorite parts of chapter ten. XD
    Wonderful chapter!
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  • From ANON - Cara on October 12, 2013
    Beautiful chapter! I think you did great on the sex scene! I know that this won't be just another 3 year fic, I feel like things are going to get very interesting. XD
    I'm terrified and really excited to find out what doctor Briefs is going to do about all of this. Anyway I love it and it was a brilliant chapter!
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  • From ANON - Zar on October 10, 2013
    Great! the update was worth to wait for, it has pace, that is good many just hurry a lot, I love it
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  • From ANON - nancy103 on October 10, 2013
    That was a fantastic lemon!!! Extremely sexy, hot and desirable. Excellent work for being new to writing erotica.
    Also, the story is very interesting. I like how everyone is in this story but, of course, Dr Briefs. It is very hard to see him be so OOC but I know this is your story and an AU.
    Hopefully we will all like the resolution by the end of the story. Thanks for posting!
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  • From ANON - Cara on September 29, 2013
    I love this story more than words can describe!
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