Reviews for Oblivion

BY : setbl

  • From Macha on December 08, 2013

    Not certain what to say of this story yet, but I am reading it. Glad the 2nd chapter wasn't as dark as the 1st. 2nd chapter pairing was unusual, but written Very well.

    I'm taking you at your word when you said you wanted remarks, and so ; there was a 'them' instead of a 'then' in the last part of the 2nd chapter. Also, your story description has a 'on' instead of a 'one'. These don't detract from the story one bit - the meaning came across loud and clear, but there's been times I've gone back and re-read and seen similar errors and thought 'why didn't anyone tell me?'

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