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Reviews for Atavism

By : ctsama
  • From ZeoViolet on January 16, 2018

    I've been a bit sick to my stomach so I'm a bit late, but amazing as always!

    The mental image of "Helicopter Mom" Whis nearly had me on the floor with laughter.  That was so damned funny....

    Can't wait for the clothes shucking!  (And the rest....)


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  • From ZeoViolet on January 10, 2018

    Are you on vacation?  *Hoping for update really soon*


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  • From ZeoViolet on January 02, 2018

    Hope you had a happy holiday!  Hoping for more soon!


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  • From ZeoViolet on December 20, 2017

    And I really, REALLY hope he's able to...

    Awesome!  Next chapter plz...


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  • From ZeoViolet on December 17, 2017

    Waiting eagerly for new chapter...


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  • From ZeoViolet on December 01, 2017

    Amazing as always!!!  Moreplz!!!


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  • From ZeoViolet on November 29, 2017

    Hoping for a new chapter soon!


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  • From ZeoViolet on November 17, 2017

    You seem to be doing "everything but" with regards to Gohan and Vegeta at this point.  XD


    Waiting for more!


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  • From ZeoViolet on November 10, 2017

    Hoping for more soon!  *Wave wave*


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  • From ZeoViolet on November 02, 2017

    I am sick yet again, this time with tonsilitis/ear infection, so I didn't notice this for a while.

    I swear I am not lying to you.  I get sick a lot because the inhaled steriods I have to use for asthma make me VERY susceptible to anything that goes around, AND my job brings me into contact with several hundred people on a daily basis.

    I did read it, and I can't wait for more....so give me more, please!  :)


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  • From ZeoViolet on October 26, 2017

    Here and waiting for more!!!!


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  • From ZeoViolet on October 13, 2017

    Oh, after a re-read (when I was less in a hurry), I wanted to comment and ask about this:  Whis's behavior in this chapter.  His emotions about Vegeta are becoming increasingly pronounced.  I don't know what else to say about it, besides it was emotional to read (also read:  enjoyable).  I suppose when he hasn't let himself feel anything for so, so long, to finally be able to feel again; it is pretty hard to contain.


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  • From ZeoViolet on October 13, 2017

    I completely forgot I hadn't commented on this chapter!  When I read it I was heading out the door to work, so that fact had slipped my mind.

    In short, very good chapter!  Frost:  An asshole, any way you see it.

    I do have a thought about Vegeta, but do you want to hear it is my question.


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  • From Wemyss on October 09, 2017

    Great saga! Loving every chapter.


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  • From ZeoViolet on October 05, 2017

    Hoping to see more soon!  :)


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