Reviews for The Spaces In Between

BY : ct_sama


  • From ZeoViolet on January 10, 2017

    PS, one's a girl!  Yay!!!



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  • From ZeoViolet on January 10, 2017

    Hey, I have no problem  believing that  those two met on Vegeta-sei before!  This is easy enough to believe.  These two chapters were amazing! When it comes to fate, I'm a believer in middle ground no matter what the rules of the DBZ universe are...it's always possible to change things.

    Sort of reminds me of my old idea of Vegeta having a sister...I always felt it made King Vegeta a hypocrite for not being quite as hard on his daughter as he was his son, but then again, she was slightly younger.  Tarble would have been the middle child.  

    As for luck, yes, I've had a run of the bad stuff lately.  Bronchitis, then hand injury, and this past week, strep throat.  I'm cured of that and can mostly use my hand again, so I hope my luck changes soon.

    Hopefully a run of good luck for you means not breaking your computer again.  ;)



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  • From ZeoViolet on December 27, 2016

    PS, as usual, more please!  Loving these as well as the main story!



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  • From ZeoViolet on December 27, 2016

    Again, sorry for the late review, but typing is still rather painful.   (Lost my balance and fell; heard a snap.  Fingers not broken, but damage is bad.  Narrowly avoided surgery.  Fingers are slowly healing though.)

    I have a very difficult time believing that Vegeta can avoid looking upwards at all times.  Seems to me that Beerus's planet has a LOT of worlds surroundng it.  It's a minor detail. so feel free to ignore it.

    This chapter actually triggered a dream in me a few days back about some ninja father who was Saiyan and didn't know it.  Married and had a daughter.  Lived in some fishing village.  Beating off a Yakuza mob boss while going Oozaru and stomping the crap out of him.  Weird thing was, no tail.  The only thing about the dream that seemed Dragon Ball in nature was the father and daughter.  Otherwise, it was like a totally different anime.  Pretty weird.



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  • From ZeoViolet on December 04, 2016

    Sorry!  I've been sick and didn't notice you'd added this.  It's really good.  I would really like for Vegeta to be able to come around to actually saying it though...and meaning it when he does.



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