Reviews for NightingaleBY : Shenronprincess
From Kit-kit on February 27, 2017
Awesome chapter...i hope goku can learn to forgive vegeta.
From cookietherookie on December 30, 2016
I'm so glad I stumbled upon this story tonight! I've been in the mood for some bottom/victim!Goku fics. I was so pleased with this story that I created an account just to review this story. I sat down to write a critique but quickly ran into a problem. How does one go about critiquing perfection? This is not flattery; I can't think of a single critique that I have. I've been sitting here for 5 minutes trying to find an area where you could improve and I keep drawing blanks. Your grammar was great, the characterizations of both Goku and Vegeta were, to me, spot on, and there's an intruiging plot that keeps me interested. I especially love your Goku. He's so true to canon in terms of how forgiving he is and how naiive he is. I can't wait to see what'll happen when Goku wakes up. Can't wait for the next update!