Reviews for Wishes and Commands

BY : Timaelan

  • From TristaML on October 25, 2018

    I've been reading this and wondering where you are going with this story. There are a lot of different things going on,  what with the Saiyan Flame, Goten's supposed death,  and Trunks' obvious inexperience in pretty much anything but trying to act like a badass,  I'm intrigued by what you have in store and surprised this doesn't have more hits, honestly. There are a lot of Truhan fans out there and while I'm not really one of them,  I still enjoy these type of fanfics. I chalk it up to this site just not being as active as it once was.

    Either way,  the grammar issues you explained and they don't bother me very much.  I like the backdrop of the story,  it leaves a lot to think about,  and the fact that i can't see what's coming next is good! Anyways, all I really wanted to say was don't get discouraged, you have at least one person who wants to know what happens next. 

    Trista ML



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