Reviews for Like Father Like Son

BY : Herpb4uDerp


  • From TristaML on May 16, 2019

    I can't help but constantly ask myself, "What the hell is Goten thinking?!"

    That is all I really have to say.

    TristaML



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  • From TristaML on May 06, 2019

    As annoyed as I am to not get any progress on the storyline itself with these last two chapters, I am still grateful for the insight they gave. Necessary plot information to be sure. So many little details were in there that correlate so well with everything else I was surprised, even though I suppose I shouldn't have been. Everything from Vegeta silently telling Goku he was sorry for teaching Goten to cuss to much, in retrospect to another scene from an earlier chapter, and then from Chi Chi freaking out about Goten's sexual preferences, which explains why he hasn't been home in so long, to Goten's dislike of Gohan's perpetual "perfection," it all just makes so much more sense. I was honestly wondering when the depth for Goten's character was going to come in, I think I mentioned that before, and I'm happy to have gotten some answers!

    That being said I'm desperately in need of some storyline developement now, lol, and I wonder at what you have in store. I like that I can't predict what's coming next, although I have some ideas. Each new chapter always leaves me a little bit surprised. Still, I know it's only a matter of time before the weight of their relationship troubles start to crack down on them. Patiently waiting as usual...

    TristaML



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  • From TristaML on April 12, 2019

    I'm so curious... to know what Goten wants. I mean,  what does he really want, from Goku and from Vegeta. For himself. It seems to me that he is just so messed up that he hasn't thought things through...

    Vegeta should have told Goku! But I enjoyed this chapter nonetheless. 

    I found you on AO3, I forget about that sight,  honestly,  and I really wanted to go ahead and read the whole story-  And you have so many reviews there!- I wanted to read those,  too, but since you're revamping the story, it wouldn't do any justice to ruin whatever changes you deemed necessary by forgoing the new updates here so I restrained,  but it took effort lol. My curiosity is piqued. 

    Ugh.

    TristaML



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  • From reto90kid on April 06, 2019

    hey can I be in the story



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  • From TristaML on March 27, 2019

    Totally not surprised by Vegetas response but wow does Goku have some work to do.

    I love how well thought out your storyline is, and how "dbz-like" it is. The innocence of Goku, along with his completely unintentional actions,  are an interesting parallel with the actual impacts of his choices and it makes everything that much more tricky and delicate when it comes to his relationships.

    I also really appreciated Gotens silent admittance of how childish and insecure he truly is. What a huge character development.  Not to mention the correlation between his characteristics and Vegetas, which makes sense,  but I never thought of it that way before.  Very, very well done.  I am looking forward to the next installments!

    TristaML



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  • From TristaML on March 09, 2019

    Oh my gosh.  And you talk about my cliff hangers. Holy hell. Oh my gosh.

    I literally have nothing else to say!

    Except I wish it was next Saturday...

    TristaML



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  • From TristaML on March 04, 2019

    Yessss!!!! I loved that Goten was showing so much vulnerability here,  we got to see more out of him than just anger and scheming and I am loving the change of direction! Very interested to see what else Bra's part to play in this is... my favorite part was when Vegeta told Goten that he would approve,  Gotens response was hilarious,  and his retorting kiss was epic.  Love it. 

    Im excited to read more as usual!

     



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  • From Iuvenes on February 23, 2019

    mmmm, my favorite chapter. Not counting the extra one. Maybe even counting the extra one. I suck at reviews so I'm struggling to explain how much I love it. You even warned us ahead of time that it would be the end (for a while, anyway). And of all the places to run to when Goku finally lost it, of course he went to the place where he had the happiest day of his life. This chapter is the bedrock of this entire story and it's perfect.



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  • From TristaML on January 30, 2019

    I had this whole long review written out and then somehow it all got deleted, so I'll make this short and sweet. Goten is absolutely nuts, Vegeta is surely going to find out, and/or be that much more upset in the long run which is not a good thing. I love the foreshadowing from previous chapters coming into play in these recent ones (like the information about Bra's conception and why she can do nothing wrong in Vegeta's eyes), I was so surprised by how Bulma handled the situation, threatening Goku like that, which also speaks to why he may have left and leaves me even more curious about everything to begin with, I'm glad to see Gohan in this, I hope to see more of him, and I am eagerly awaiting what's to come next! EEK!

    Sincerely,

    Trista ML



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  • From TristaML on January 20, 2019

    I could not be fucking happier to hear that about the chapters! Not necessarily that they'll take a while but that there's so much more to happen! These last two chapters were incredible! I have not been so enthralled in a story in so long :)  I could not put my phone down...

    Goten fucked up so bad! I can honestly say I was not expecting that to go down in such a way, and I wonder so badly at what's to come next...  Your creativity needs to be applauded,  so cheers to you. I have much more to say but I'm pressed for time,  I will try to write a more in depth view at a later date but for now, I am just so happy to see these updates! 

    -TristaML



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  • From TristaML on December 31, 2018

    I'm excited for the next few chapters! Its kind of funny to me that Goten was hesitant to try Vegeta in the first place,  maybe he didn't want to be rejected,  so he waited until he knew he wouldn't be. We shall see :) A little sad that Goku and Vegeta's first time was spurred on by an aphrodisiac but I get more why they're so at odds with their "relationship". I want to know more about that relationship,  so many things are yet to be explained...

    I will say, too, that I like that you update multiple chapters, although there is a downside to doing that.  One, it creates a lack of anticipation, and hits on your story,  and two,  sometimes it seems rushed. I've done it before on one of my favorite stories and it wasn't received very well on this particular sight since some people only read stories on here based off of hits,  which is ridiculous but true.

    Plus, make sure you reread what you're about to post a few times before posting it, in this last chapter in particular, there were a lot of grammatical errors that could easily be fixed. Don't rush it, unless you are just dying to get it out,  in which case I understand,  and do go on... it just throws off the flow and emotion of the story when the reader has to mentally correct a sentence. It happens to all of us, I'm just putting it out there so you can fine tune the overall mood of your story, which will make the impact on the reader that much better. 

    TristaML



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  • From TristaML on December 16, 2018

    I really want to know how you're going to satiate their burning desire! And Goku is always such a dick for leaving- I want to know when he'll come back,  damn it! That's one thing I never understood: why he can just leave and think that no one else will be bothered.  

    I enjoy the monologues, they seem practical,  but mistaken, which is part of life. The conversation between Vegeta and Goku, Trunks and Goten, so... to the point,  like familiar relations, never fully labelled... Goten is in denial,  and Vegeta must have already known about him, too,  but he's in denial as well. It's exciting to watch it all play out. But I itch for more. 

    I love PWP, BUT, porn WITH plot give you so much more to think of...

    Trista ML



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  • From TristaML on December 02, 2018

    I love this.  I know you said you posted this before in a different site, under a different name, and I feel like it rings some bells,  BUT I am so wholly excited to reread, if that is the case, everything,  including the changes you have made.  Please continue...

     

    Please?

     

    Trista ML

     



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