Reviews for The Adventures of the Legendary Super Pervert!

BY : Cool Burn


  • From reto90kid on May 12, 2019

    hey cool

    can I be in the story?



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  • From MickGesitt on February 11, 2019

    I've seen a fair few doujins based on this same sexually charged alternate take on Bulma's first meeting with Master Roshi. I suppose it's a fairly common scenario for a Dragon Ball porn story. But this was a well-written rendition of it. I'm glad to see that you left off at a blowjob and didn't go straight to sex in the first chapter. That gives you something to build up to as the story progresses.

    However, given that this is an 'old' scenario, I'm more interested in seeing where the story goes. The end of this first chapter seemed to say that this was the beginning of a saga. Is 'Super Pervert' Roshi going to travel around and get into a bunch of new and original sexual adventures? Or is he going to wait around until Goku and Chichi come to get him to deal with Fry Pan Mountain and do a new version of your other Dragon Ball fanfic? Bulma's second deal with Roshi is another fairly common scenario that I've seen in doujins so I'd honestly prefer to see Roshi traveling and getting in new adventures.

    Either way, well done with your first chapter. I'm interested in where you go from here.



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