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Reviews for Chimaera

By : Deb
  • From ANON - Sister Raven Dreamer on May 19, 2005
    Thank you for the new chapter! Very funny and sweet. I read the review from "Shru," but I can't say as I agree with the assessment there. I don't think things are moving too slowly. You're hitting on the major points of the pregnancy, and while of course you're going to focus on parts where something goes wrong, I think you're doing a great job of balancing those parts with times that things are going well. I think if you sped it up more, you would run the risk of making it sound like everything was going horribly, when it really seems to be more semi-isolated incidents.
    Also, I know I'm kind of freaking out over what's probably nothing, but I hope Miracle is okay. And I mean this as a compliment when I say that you're the only writer I know who could get me this worried over a *dog*, which isn't even a major part of the storyline.
    Well, looking eagerly forward to the next installment!
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  • From ANON - black beauty on May 18, 2005
    Awww... that was sweet. Keep up the good job!
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  • From ANON - shru on May 18, 2005
    you're not planning on covering every single day of the pregnancy are you? because this is a very slow moving fic and it would get very boring if you did that. Are you also planning to take this story beyond the pregnancy and birth? it would be interesting to see how the child would grow with parents of the same sex and what it would think once it learnt about sex and the like - maybe it would think it was adopted or something.... anyway, my point is just that i think that you should speed things up a bit - but otherwise i really think your story is great - very descriptive. oh! one more thing - i think Heero is just a tad too sensitive and ooc - he's letting go and handling emotions, yes, but i don't think he would cry so much and so often, if oyu know what i mean.... well keep writing - really enjoying your fic!
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  • From ANON - Sister Raven Dreamer on May 09, 2005
    Oh, wow. That's really the only printable version that I can come up with right now. Heero being so sweet and tender, taking such care. But I have to admit, through the entire lovemaking scene, in the back of my mind was "Oh no oh no oh no oh no, Duo, you can't give chocolate to a dog, it's toxic!" I'm afraid Miracle's gonna need another one to last the night. And I'm worried about Duo's reaction when he realizes what he's done. I mean, if he nearly kills the dog, is he going to worry about his ability to care for a kid? Well, as always, I look eagerly forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - black beauty on April 28, 2005
    Cute, happy, exactly what I needed! Keep up the great job!
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  • From ANON - black beauty on April 23, 2005
    What does the cake looks like? Update soon and keep up the wonderful job!
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  • From ANON - LilBunnyRazorblades on April 21, 2005
    Thank you so much for updating *deep bow* I have been checking everyday to see if a new chapter was up, and so I shall continue to in the future so please keep updating ^-^
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  • From ANON - Solo\'s Ghost on April 20, 2005
    Wufei's speech was so wonderful. I loved it! Please update again soon, I can't wait to see what Trowa made and what the cake is going to be like.
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  • From ANON - MeinFuehrerIstDead on April 19, 2005
    I love your fics ShenLong alot, you're a very good writer. I have at least a couple of your fics on my 'favorites' list so they're readily accessible.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 15, 2005
    I thought that it was a very good story. I hope that you continue on with this story because i can't wait to see what else happens. Do the guys get "Bitten" by any more baby things? I hope so. I know that its mean to say that but i couldn't stop laughing when they tried to get the baby seat in the car. continue with the good work and i look forward to the rest of the story. thanks a lot.
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  • From ANON - Solitaire on April 12, 2005
    You have my most sincere sympathies!! I can not imagne how you must feel. My prayers are with you and your family. Thank you for writing at this difficult time, it was perfect as always. Again, blessings and healing to you and your family. Solitaire
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  • From ANON - aLLyOUrEgGSaREbELOngTouS on April 09, 2005
    gREAT fICcY yOU hAVE i LUv IT a LoT !
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  • From ANON - YuukiSan on April 08, 2005
    YuukiSan: Oh my goodness, I absolutly love this fic. The thought of Duo being pregnant is just to funny to put to words. And I'm a sap for romance, which this fic is full of.

    NinjaMouse: Yeah there are things that I find hard to imagine (like Heero showing emotion) but it's your fic so just keep on with it. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

    YuukiSan: Oh the wedding chapter was amazing. It was so sweet and loving, I was crying even before they made it down the aisle.

    ~YuukiSan & NinjaMouse
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  • From ANON - DaemonRozalyx on April 08, 2005
    I'm so sorry about your nefew, I know dealing with something like that is extremely difficult to bear. I can relate, my own sister, who was only a year older than myself, was taken in a car accident when I was eleven. Even though nearly a decade has passed since then, I still have not fully stopped greiving though I have moved on. I doubt anyone will hold the delay against you, so don't worry and please continue you wonderful stories. I give you my best wishes and deepest condolences and hope for your future happiness.
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  • From ANON - black beauty on April 05, 2005
    That was a beautiful ceremony. Love this fic! Keep up the wonderful job and update soon!
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