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Reviews for Chimaera

By : Deb
  • From ANON - Anon on January 29, 2005
    Damn, 86 chapters and Duo still hasn't had the baby yet! I started reading this when the first chapter came out. Then by chapter forty-something, i got tired of it and stopped. Then i came back to check on it today, and nothing has really happened. This fic has been moving way too slow, even i dont have the energy to read all of it. And the characters are just too OOC to really get into the dialogue. You arent a bad writer, I have seen so much worse. But when you lose someone's interests because of these factors, then maybe its time for a change. I almost forgot what was in the beginning of the story and how Duo and Heero met. And when that starts happening, you know youre losing your readers.
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  • From ANON - black beauty on January 24, 2005
    Can't wait to hear Howard's reply! Update soon and keep up the fantastic job!
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  • From Amarin on January 19, 2005
    I've finally remembered what this fic reminds me of. The movie series 'Look Who's Talking'. It stars John Travlota and Kirstie Allie, and one of the things the three movies have in common is that is starts with an egg being fertilized. Your asided to the baby remind me of that.

    Great story, by the way, I can't beleive you manage to update so often. But I'm glad you do! :)
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  • From ANON - black beauty on January 18, 2005
    Sweet, cute, funny, adorable and pure fluff that's how I can best describe this chapter. Update soon and keep up the awesome job.
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  • From ANON - crystaladept on January 18, 2005
    grr.... you really know how to leave a reader waiting, don't you. I wanna see the wedding, and then the baby! Please let it be a little girl. *evil grin* I'd love to see Duo and Heero trying to take care of a girl. Looking forward to the next chapter. Ja.
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  • From crystaladept on January 14, 2005
    Here you go. Now I'm giving you my officially logged in review. GREAT!! I love this story. I'm going to add it to my recommended stories right away. *runs off to do so*
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  • From ANON - crystaladept on January 14, 2005
    oooo.... the plot thickens. *bounces up and down* I am now impatiently waiting for the next chapter, and I hope it come soon. ~crystaladept
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  • From ANON - black beauty on January 14, 2005
    Yeay! Duo and Heero are going to get married! Keep up the wonderful job and update soon!
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  • From ANON - black beauty on January 11, 2005
    Oh! The indignity of it all! You made the ever wonderful and fantastic Wufei lie and cheat. Well not quite cheat and lie, never the less is not fair! Although I must admit it makes the story more fun that way... hm... Guess in the end it makes a wonderful read. Keep up the wonderful job and update soon!
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  • From ANON - crystaladept on January 09, 2005
    holy crap... four days. That's how long it took me to read up to chapter 81. And by the time I was done, I was seriously laughing. This story has a great mix of humor and horror. Enough to keep my heart racing and make me laugh. Especially the part about the car seat. Leave it to Wuffie to figure it out. I think I scared my sister and my niece with all my laughing. I am looking forward to the next few chapter, and hopefully, the birth of a baby boy or girl. So... you're an Aussie? That explains some of your words, like nappy. Took me a little bit to realize that nappy was diaper... heh heh heh. You have just caught the attention of a brand new fan, and you can be sure that I will be watching for the next few chapters and reviewing. Good job so far. Crystal Adept, out~
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  • From ANON - Rainshi on January 05, 2005
    Hey that was great love your story..... *burst out laughing* after all four tried Wufei does it in a snap*dies laughing*

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  • From ANON - Jhon Doe on January 04, 2005
    I can't get enough! This has got to be the best fan fic I have ever read. Please, keep posting your chapters I am so enjoying this fan fic.

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  • From ANON - queixo on January 03, 2005
    you're evil for just leaving it there without telling us how he did it. its not cool that wufei gets to hold that over everyone else.
    don't think i've reviewed before so wanted to say i like how you're writing this. its such that those that would complain abt m-pregs cant really argue with how you did it since this shows its within the realm of possibility. continue the good work, can't wait till the baby's born
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  • From ANON - black beauty on January 03, 2005
    Hahahahah! Wufei go it done! OMG! This chapter was so hilarious! Keep up the amazing job and update soon!
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  • From ANON - Sister Raven Dreamer on December 30, 2004
    Yay! Thank you for the update, it made a wonderful holiday gift! I'm glad Hee-chan's back home, Duo needs him around. I'm sure he's going to be sporting a few new bruises soon from that evil car seat - and that is so accurate, that's about how things went when trying to install the car seat for my sister's little one. Also, I somehow get the feeling that Heero is going to be cleaning up after Miracle more than Duo. Just a hunch. Anyhoo, I always look forward to your updates and your new stories, and I just wanted to say thank you for sharing your stories with the rest of us!
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