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Reviews for Seducing Uncle Raditz

By : Akemi

From ANON - Anon on October 25, 2003
hey you cant just leave it like that !!!!that wasnt very nice thing to do:(!!!!please update asap!!!!i never seen thise two together but i like it......
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From ANON - Sick, but exellent... on October 25, 2003
Now that I think about all the Bulma/Vegeta fics I used to read, I just feel...embarrased and sick! Did I call you sick? Oooops, I meant to say straight sex is sick!! I mean, I don`t have anything AGAINST them or anything, it`s just that thinking about the graphic act itself makes me nauseous, you know?

I don`t think I`ll have to sign any forms after THAT little comment XD!!! Well, at least I won`t have to pack a lot of clothing to where I`m going....

And it`s all your fault!!! Damn you and your fingers!!(for writing...^-^)

Sicko, official member since 2003
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From ANON - Agent Smith on October 25, 2003
I`s 3:40 in the afternoon and I just woke up. What better to go with my cup of morning tea than a nice dose of penetration :)??? And a quick trip to take a morning "shower",eh eh...Rich. I`m on fire.

I`m glad you decided to include Goku in the "storyline"(oh please!!), and, I have to admit, the ki cuffs were a better idea than mine. After all, this way the bitch (aka Bulma) won`t find out about Raditzs and Gotens little ballgames (I`m sure I wont be able to stop you from "misunderstand" th" that^_~)

I won`t even suggest anything at this point, why, the possibilities of this situation are just too delicious not to be taken advantage of ;)....

I might be an educated hentai, but even I am not foolish enough to mess with THIS mouterinering cliffy!!

Update soon,

Agent Smith

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From ANON - Anon on October 25, 2003
wow now this is getting really good!!i have to admit i was expecting Raditz to fuck Goten but all in due time, right??:) all in due time...i really didn`t see this Goku thing coming but it`s pretty intense. i wonder why he was so upset about??otherwise he would have gone ballistic on Raditz(not like THAT you hentai!!)
now i really can`t wait another second is Goku going to join in on the fun??what did Raditz mean when he thought "with or without Goku?":)hmmmm??now you`re propably gonna take a nice lttle weekend"break" and leave me writhing with ancsiety >:)???!!!
UPDATE ASAP!!!
Da Perv

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From ANON - Orlando on October 25, 2003
Yesss!!! You `re gonna write the Vegeta/chibi Gohan lemon!!! Could my day start any better??? So when are you gonna post it??# coughcoughtodaycoughcough # ^-^

Hehee, I can`t believe Raditz lost his virginity to Goten ^-^ That means that before the showerfucking he had no idea how good it would feel right??

Hey I got an idea. Raditz is pretty frustrared about not getting to fuck Goten. Maybe he could get his frustrations out on Goku and Goten would see this and get really pissed and envious!??
THEN Goten would surely be eager to finally submit to his uncle ^-^.......

I dunno, maybe you have something else in mind allready, I just have NO IDEA what is going to happen about Goku in the next chappy, such a mean clifhanger, ggrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!! >:)
I CAN`T WAIT!!!!! You`re worse than the devil himself!!!! The most evil creature in the universe you are!!!

God:"Close, but not quite."

Orlando:"Huh? Who is it then??"

God:"Take a good look in the mirror lately-_-?"

Orlando:"I have mirrors in the ceiling of my bedroom :P !?"

God:"That`s more information that I need. Now go to church!!"

Orlando:"Allright, allright...(at least I can allways draw naughty pictures of chibi Goten and Raditz in the backrow heehee..^-^)"

Please update soon on BOTH stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Orlando(I can`t call myself Orgasmo `cause He seto bto be mad at me for some reason??? Go figure^-^!??)

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From ANON - gemini66 on October 24, 2003
oh i love it ......can't wait tell you update ......oh what is goku going to do?????????? this is good plz update soon

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From ANON - Anon on October 24, 2003
I don`t know what happened there. Part of my "review" just disappeared. Maybe it`s a sign from God for me to stop this and finally become a normal, healthy person.

I really hope that wasn`t his best shot ^-^!!!

God:"I shall make you normal again one day!!!"

Orlando:"Again? Dude, sorry to disappoint you but I was BORN LIKE THIS, BABY!!!

God:"You shall kneel in front of me!! No one resists the Allmighty Lord!!"

Orlando:"Hmmm... That sounded kinda hot...." # starts to remove clothes #

God:"NO NO NO!!! NOT LIKE THAT!!!"

Orlando:"What?! You`re the one who started with the dirrty talk!??"

God:"Enough!! I`ve cast seven plagues upon Egypt. I THINK I can save one mortal from doom!"

Orlando:"I wouldn`t put my money on it^-^"

Please update soon!!!

Orlando
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From ANON - Anon on October 24, 2003
Hi. Just came to check out if you updated yet. Nope >.:)

Your wondering why I used the form "his/her"? The answer is: thanks to your fics, I nowadays consider myself an "it" :P

Puh-lease update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Orlando(I should probably change my name to smo^smo^_^)
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From ANON - Da Perv on October 24, 2003
ok first I thought the shower masturbating thing was a little strange, but now after reading it a couple of times I`m starting to get the "hang of it"heheee... whatthe hell is taking you so it it must have been allready 24 hours!!
and you have to tell me if raditzs tail is sensitive it`s kinda important, to me at least...
update allready!!!
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From ANON - SICK!!!! on October 24, 2003
You fucking sick twisted mentally ill unclefucker!!! You are so SICK SICK SICK SICK SICK SICK SICK SICK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I like it please write more :)
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From ANON - XZanayu on October 24, 2003
Wow!! Talk about HOT AND HEAVY!! Keep up the great work!!
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From ANON - What the..?? on October 23, 2003
What do you know?? I came here to flame you for pairing these two up, but as a responsible reviewer, I always READ the fics I`m about to flame.

I was going to call you a sick pervert, but then I realised that would make ME a sick pervert. Why?? Because I LIKED IT!! I`ve NEVER liked incest before and I blame you!!

So, I`m going to Hell. Might as well have some fun. So where do I sign??

Update soon, you bastard!!
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From ANON - Agent Smith on October 23, 2003
You should get paid to do this.

In the next chapter I hope to see some penetration. I think Goten should steal some ki-resistant cuffs from Bulma and tie his uncle up and do what the hell ever he wants with him.

I like the fast updates just as much as everyone else, but I think it would be worth a wait if you make the next chapter a bit longer and take advantage of all the material you have available: underline how WRONG it is. Wrong really does it for me:). Maybe they could secretly fuck while Gokou was in the next room or something, now THAT would be hot!! And I, too, would like to see some bondage with Goten as the dominant one. He doesn`t have to use any objects, instead he could blind-fold his uncle and tease him long and agonisingly...;) Forced to be quiet because of the others in the house...

You can take your time, if the next part is going to be 2-3 times longer, but if not, be kind and update TODAY!!!:) Who says I`m demanding??

It seems a certain room is calling me again:)...

Agent Smith

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From ANON - Orlando on October 23, 2003
I must correct two errors, I insist^_^. First of all, you do not aim to please me. You LIVE to please me. Understood? Because it`s been working so far^_~!! Secondly, someone claimed that Goten was a cockteaser. Bullshit. YOU are the cockteaser!!
I really appreciate your superfast updating, but the chapters could be longer(I live on smut :9)... Yaoi lemons can never be too long, so don`t be shy(HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!! You?? Shy??)

I don`t want anyone else involved, at least not yet, since they HAVEN`T EVEN FUCKED YET!!!(hint, hint...)
I`ve been thinking about a Vegetaxchibi Gohan lemon, so if you are absolutely, positively sure you`re not going to write it#pout#, then you might throw Vegeta in to the RaditzxGoten-mix... But only if you`re REALLY SUPER SURE#extra-chibi-Goten-pout#!!!! Please think about it, if you`re not too busy^_^??
I don�t think they need any special toys, other than Raditzs tail(I`m sure you`ll come up with something to do with it^_~)

Please think about my offer, and,if you do it, I want Vegeta to be playfull and seductive and chibi Gohan to be eager and submissive...
Keep updating like this, no-one else does!!:P

I gotta go now, I`m late for church.

Orlando(I can`t think of anything that rhimes, but surely the "church"thing was entertainment enough^_^)
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From ANON - Anon on October 23, 2003
wow that was...different^_^ hey I got one q: howcome was R grooming his tail? I thought the tail is supposed to be as sensitive as a cock or sumthin`?? at least it is in the other stories, well, answer in the next chappy and thanks for updating

Da Perv
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