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By : Pixelgoddess
  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on March 01, 2004
    WOO! I just got done reading all of this...and I must say it is beautifully written. I loved it. Vegeta makes me so sad, the way you wrote his character is wonderful. This is a very deep story w/ an excellent plot. That last chap blew me away...It was very intense. Goku trapped inside the Ouji's mind...and time is running out...gosh..I'm hooked, and I can't wait to see hveryverything is going to turn out.
    I love your story! ^.*
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  • From on February 28, 2004
    Oh no! They shouldn't die!!!
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  • From ANON - Senaca on February 28, 2004
    Ohhhh....I can't wait to read what happens next. Thank for writing the 19 chapters, could you release ch.20 soon
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  • From ANON - Crystal on February 25, 2004
    OMG!!! The suspense!!! Update soon!!! Plz!!!
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  • From ANON - Hecate18 on February 23, 2004
    Sorry its a little late... I just have to say, I think I was about an inch from the computer screen when I finished reading this chap!
    You had me hanging off the edge of my chair, and then it stopped!!!!
    A CLIFFHANGER! ::grrr::
    I am now waiting 'patiently' ::eye twitch:: for the next chap. ^_^
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  • From ANON - suisheu on February 21, 2004
    Oh, damn... this is not good...
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on February 20, 2004
    I have never been so jealous of another person in all of my life. That was amazing. That chapter is by far the best one I have read, ever. Even better than the sex scenes. Damn you. I loved it. I want to be like you when I grow up. ;)
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  • From ANON - Getarian on February 20, 2004
    Damn! This is what comes of turning a simple review into a bloody novel :-) ...I forgot something.

    I love the friendship you have building between Vegeta and Piccolo...I always figured that they would be perfect as friends...Kindred spirits and all that :-)

    Well, that's it for now...I think ;-)


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  • From ANON - Getarian on February 20, 2004
    Oooh. forgive this rather long review, but I've only just read this and I absolutely love it and have much to say :-)

    First. Bulma...What a complete bitch! I can't believe that the 'genius' let go of the hottest male in creation...for anyone, let alone Yamcha. I agree with Goku...I hope she gets the 'happiness' she deserves, as well. I don't even want to go into how I feel about Krillin. Well done...you have definitely stirred my emotions...a sign of a good author.
    econecond. ChiChi...Nice! I am about as tired of the ChiChi bashing as I was of the Yamcha bashing in the B/V fics...I have nothing against making one or other of the regulars, the 'bad guy' in fics, but once it becomes a craze, it annoys me, so I am thrilled to see a nice Chi, who cares about Vegeta and doesn't want to rip his head off...I even like Rezu, which is saying something for me...I hate OC's. However; Rezu participates without taking over and she is a regular person...she fits :-)

    Third. Radditz...ah, Radditsu...Thank-you, thank-you and thank-you once again :-) I loved the tender scenes between Radditz and his Prince. The lemon was exceptional! I also loved it when Radditz was listening to a young and confused Vegeta explain about his beating and when Vegeta referred to Frieza as 'Lord Frieza,' Radditz told him never to call him that unless he had to...he was so...nurturing.

    Vegeta's anger at himself when he realised what he had done to Radditz's memory, by denying his feelings for him to Goku, was very well done...He wanted the last five minutes back, to do over and to do it right...This is something I'm pretty sure that we have all experienced. I'm glad that he told Goku the truth.

    When Vegeta stated that he looked for Radditz in hell...but he was gone. Heartbreaking. You really know how to touch your readers. I had tears.

    I loved the Blackadder references!

    Nice touch, involving Gohan and possible minor issues he has with his father, over the fact that Goku decided to stay in otherworld rather than return home to his family.

    The Goku/Vegeta get-together was very welcome and well done. I think that Vegeta has tremendous trust in Goku, to be able to let go in his arms and allow him to take him, I'm sure that some of that comes from the fact , Go, Goku is related to Radditz - and I don't mean that in a bad way, I'm not saying that he's substituting, because I don't think that at all - but I think that he feels, safe, as he did with Radditz...even more so, because they don't have to hide what they have. The small sense of panic when he awoke, before realising that it was okay to stay with Goku, was very realistic.

    Finally, the latest chapter has lost none of the pull, which your previous chapters possessed...I am looking forward to the next chapter and wait with bated breath to see how Vegeta and Goku get get out of Vegeta's tortured mindscape.

    This is good reading :-)
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  • From ANON - Alangirl on February 09, 2004
    My cat is better now thanks for asking! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS CHAPTER! You are indeed awesome. I loved the way Goku and Vegeta deal with the kids! I can just picture it. You're right about the trust issues. I have a feeling theirs going to be a lot of dealing before they both get better. And I think that I would be uspet if you didn't have that, just because it would not have made sense otherwise. Cruelness for you for not telling me your plot but (sigh) a magition never reveals his tricks. Keep writing, and I keep reviewing! Unless rocks fall on my head. That would be kinda bad. See ya!
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  • From ANON - Kahlan Nightwing on February 09, 2004
    *nods* Okay.... So these issues are trust, self-esteem, and I see the hint of 'he's stronger than me' too. ^_^ Hmm....

    You ! Th! That's exactly what I do! I always not only ask for an apology, but why the person is apologizing. It's frustrating when it's done to you...but why apologize if you don't know what you're apologizing for. I do that to my friend. Cause sometimes she thinks I'm angry at something I'm not angry at...and I hav exp explain to her why I am angry.... Ah, another reason to love the Prince. And I have to say...the Kakarott lovin' seems good to the soul...Vegeta's in this case.

    Can't wait for your necxt update!
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  • From ANON - tana on February 06, 2004
    I don't know how to begin, really. This is one of the best Goku/Vegeta fics I've ever read. It's not just a huge fuck-f(alt(although those are fun, too), and you really dug deep with the characters. I love Vegeta- always have- and I'm glad you gave him real feelings and emotions that he refuses to admit he has. Chichi being a dyke, though... that was an interesting twist that I liked, being bi myself. She's always been one of my fav anime girls.
    Ahem. Back to reviewing the story itself. Your descriptions are awesome- I love the way the words flow together. Very simto fto follow, without pointless and sometimes annoying author's notes stuck in the middle of a sentence. Characterization is great- I kinda wish there was a series of this, to see it on screen. On a scale of 1-10, I give a 10 for creativity, sexiness, and angst. Lots of teenage-ish angst. Which works well, seeing the nature of the storyline.
    Well, that's it, I guess. I could babble on, but I'll leave that for later, when there's more to read. I would have rndednded earlier, but didn't want to stop reading!
    -- helpful hints and comments from one author to another
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 02, 2004
    jingle bells

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  • From ANON - Alangirl on February 01, 2004
    This i so awesome! I have been waiting soooooooooo looooooooong for the next chapter! I would write more but I've got a lapful oinjured cat which I need to comfort. However One Question! Is Freeza's spirit possesing Vegita or is he just getting the more natural effects of abuse? I only ask because of their time in hell. Of course I think I remember you mentioning the whispers came before Hell but with said cat I don't have time to check.

    Keep Writing
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  • From ANON - Crystal on January 31, 2004
    Great chappie. Looking forward to some plot and angst, lol. Keep it up!!!
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