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By : Pixelgoddess

From ANON - Hellagoddess on May 22, 2005
Hey! Just wanted to say how amazing i though 'Maintaing' was! I;ve just finished it and read the whole thing in one go! it's now....hang on....4.45am and i have to be awake for work in 2 hours but it was totally worth it! I absolutley loved your relationship between Piccolo and Vegeta (made me spit my drink out in laughter as I was reading, not once but twice!) I practically cried through most of it towards the end. I think all your fics are great and you're a really easy author to read. You don't add all the other bullshit and just....hmmmm...use the right words to poytray a particular feeling (?) I'm not even sure if that's right, but it all seems to flow together nicely! I'm moving onto 'Quest' next but i think i'll read a chapter a day or something and drag it out. Kinda savour the experience a bit more (after reading 'Maintaing' again of course!) Ooh! and i think you fic Something about Sayians is really cool...bloody sayians! Woo! thanks for writing it all!

Cheers!

Hellagoddess (love & peace!)
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From Kugatsu on April 08, 2005
Your fic is the first I have read till chapter 45

THIS WAS SO EXCELLENT!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!*HUGGLES*

i usually run screaming from long fic
but i love yours
I love it! YAY VEGETA-SAMA
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From ANON - Pixelgoddess on April 07, 2005
No dear, you haven't - but it is wonderful to hear...especially since I keep committing mush and *gasp* romance. *g*
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From ANON - Camaro on April 07, 2005
::blows kiss::

have I mentioned I love you lately?

Camaro
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From ANON - Will on August 25, 2004
Ahhh goddess. Just sublime. **Deep purr of Saiyan satisfaction**. Loved it beyond words. I see I have been off line so long there is a sequel to enjoy already - it's like saving up your Christmas presents. Mmmm, on to Quest...
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From ANON - suisheu on July 31, 2004
HI! ^_^ So sorry I haven't been here for a while. Just got back from my trip and I had limited access to computers. Well, that as certainly rude of Gohan. Vegeta, kill himself?
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From ANON - Velvet Curse on July 31, 2004
yes i did the the e-mail, thanks very much ^^
wow... that's all i have to say really. if i could write fics like that i'd be mup, up, but since i can't, i'll just go read the first chap to the sequel ^^ thanks
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From ANON - jaygoose on July 28, 2004
Tis a blooming miracle that aff was working long enough for me to review. Now...It's the end. I can't believe that it is over but there is a sequel so I am pleased. This last chaptas sas so wonderful. I will not cry. I will not cry. Anyway...I can't wait for more Makoto and Kakorr and that Piccolo you promised. You should feel so proud you did...it now if I could just get around to finishing my fic. *sigh*
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From ANON - Macha on July 26, 2004
What can I say, this chapter in itself was beautiful. The story itself was a wonderful rollercoaster of highs and lows, and kept me coming back to see what would happen next. I am happy Vegeta and Kakorr have made it through this, and are going to be stronger because of it.

(I am always happy with mind blending sex. hehe)

I don't have any requests for your sequil (spelling?) I just want to be along for the ride! Happy, angsty, violent, gentel, whatever, I want to read it. You've done some pretty good advertising for it in your author's notes; I am so excited.
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From ANON - ~Evil on July 25, 2004
Oh, God!!!! I went on a holliday and came back to a completed story!!!!. Yeah!!! Although I am desperately waiting for the sequel. The holiday explained the lack of reviewing for the last two chappy's. I hope you missed me. *Winks* I loved the lemon. I would die for the two bodies experience *looks at boyfriend with sly smirk* Anyway, I loved the ending, can't wait for the sequel.
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From ANON - Weber01er01 on July 25, 2004
That was an excellent conclusion!

Vegeta overcame his fears and Goku's torment is over.

Looking forward to the sequel.

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From ANON - Nitara on July 25, 2004
Good story!
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From ANON - Velvet Curse on July 23, 2004
sorry i didn't review to the last chap, i was kinda busy, but about letting me know when you update, would you? that would be grehankhanks ^^
i loved that last chapter, it just makes me laugh the way Piccollo and Vegeta are together. It's something that Goku could never do for Vegeta because he could never speak to him like that but Picollo sure does have a way of dealing with him lol. i can't wait for the next chapter, hehe
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From ANON - Webtester01 on July 23, 2004
Wonderful chapter!

Piccolo and Goku helped get Vegeta out of his self pity. I'm glad things are turning around.

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From ANON - jaygoose on July 23, 2004
Ha! That damned Namek. He is so cool! Piccolo is awesome in your fic you know. Anyways, Vegeta did need a good kick in the ass though. Pouting is not becoming of a prince...even in these circumstances. Things are good Veg..yo..you got learn to enjoy them. I can't believe the story is almost over. I should have known you'd beat me to the finish. I still probably got ten chapterst to go...until the sequel. But I will most definitely be looking out for yours.
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