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By : Pixelgoddess

From ANON - Macha on July 23, 2004
I am happy Piccolo offered to let Dende use some of his energy to heal Vegeta. I am also happy that in breaking free Vegeta burnt out the circutry. Yay! So, I noticed once again that Piccolo's view on the Kias and mine are very similar. I am also happy that Dende is thinking more for himself. It had to be kind of tough to be asked to be the Guardian at such a young age and not have anyone to really mentor you except some far away Kais with their own plans and skewed view of how things should be.

I liked the pep talk Piccolo had with Vegeta at the end (should I really call it that?) The Green-bean is pretty low key, taking in all of the information he received from both Goku and Vegeta and coming up with a rational reaction. (Could have something to do with Kami being a part of him.)
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From ANON - Elvenjedi on July 21, 2004
I just want to say that I love this story!! I was so mad when ff.net killed your account! Then there's something wrong with mm.org, too, I think; it only shows up to ch. 41. I was going crazy, trying to find this story and see if you'd updated! Anyway, terrific story!! And can you send me an email whenever you add a new chapter? I'd really appreciate it! Keep up the great work!
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From ANON - Sabi-san on July 21, 2004
I agree that Vegeta would feel like shit and have a huge desire to kill himself after the whole situation. I also agree that Kakarott would try very hard to stop him and show him how much he is loved and would be missed. Very nice chapter indeed.

Makoto? Hai, that's what it means. There's also a Sailor Moon character named that... I can't help but think of her when I read that name. Vegeta and Makoto... ech. Anyway, it's a good name that conveys how Kakarott sees Vegeta. My handycap is my problem that I have to deal with, no concern of yours. ^^
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From ANON - Sabi-san on July 20, 2004
Ah ha! I found you! Down with fanfiction.net and their stupidity! *rages around a moment* I was so stuck on this story. Had it on my favorites and all. I went back to see if you updated, and lo and behold, it was gone! Nooooo! But all is good. I found it. ^^ Yay!

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From ANON - jaygoose on July 18, 2004
I was like three chapters behind. What the hell is wrong with me?! I guess you were just too fast for me these days. Anyway, I am so glad that Vegeta finally beat the crap out of that bastard Frieza. That was just the way it was supposed to be. I loved your take on Dende, by the way. And Makoto...that was so perfect. I love that pet name. I wish I had something better to say but I am still reeling from everything that just happened. Poor Veggie...

They pulled you from Fanfic.net. That site is such a load...hehe. You know just when there are writers that come along and try to give that Kami damned place some originality and crediblity they turn on them like rabid dogs. That site is full of crap...*sigh* I'm not going on a rant...*looks around suspiciously* I might be next. My story has gotten a little adult as of late. Anyway...Fanfic sucks and you do not. Love Ya!
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From ANON - Crystal on July 17, 2004
yeah, i noticed that b4 when aff was messed up i couldnt find your fic on fanfiction. whyd they kill it? did they have another ban? *hmph!* whats the world coming to when you cant even write about sex, blood, murder, and gore? lol, jk.

great chapter, yet again. i almost got a little teary eyed for a mi the there. although, that might just be the pms... lol, tmi, i know. i just like to blab.

anywho, keep up the awesome work!
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From ANON - Will on July 17, 2004
It's getting so hard to track down my goddess - not on FF, I couldn't access AFF for ages, then found you on MM but can't find you there anymore - Saiyan like growl of frustration was building but AT LAST I have found you again. Wonderful chapter. True to the depths of your characters and beautifully rendered as always. I wrote you a really long review on MM but sadly my son (think Gotenks on speed) came and hassled me at crucial moment and I lost it. Never mind will do it again when I can for you.
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From ANON - Webtester01 on July 17, 2004
Wonderful!!

I'm glad that Goku was ato tto talk Vegeta out of suicide.

Goku showed Vegeta how greatly he cared for him.

The turmoil and love was described well in this chapter.

Throughout the story each characters perssonality was counterpoint

to the other, balancing the needs of the other.

Keep up the the good work!!

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From ANON - Macha on July 16, 2004
Phew, that was a close one. I am glad Goku found the will to get out of bed and find Vegeta. And I am happy Vegeta has decided to give Goku the time he has asked for.

I like the nick name Goku has given Vegeta. houghough it is new to me, so I can't type it yet.)

So, There will be more questioned answered next chapter. Yay!
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From ANON - Crystal on July 14, 2004
Looks like I spoke too soon, its workin again. Woo-hoo! (my real review is on mediaminer.org, lol)
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From ANON - Macha on July 13, 2004
I may be reading the wrong things into this, but it seemed as though Vegeta felt that his victory over the F'ing bastard was hollow. I don't know how he can think that. , he, he has every right to feel dejected about the things that being a sleeper made him do to Goku, but his victory over F.B. wasn't hallow. I am just sorry there is so much pain that he can't enjoy it. (hehe, he toasted the reamains)

*sighs* I wish there was some way to get that damn chip out of him without killing him.

*sobs* I thought something like this was going to happen. I certainly hope that Goku can change Vegeta's mind. I don't want him to go down that road again. (refering to DBZ Majin Vegeta blowing himself up.)

Ah, so you have a plan. I am so glad you have a plan, even if I don't know what it is, because it means I get to read more. Yay!

Thanks for the explination of Dende's ablities. It sounds very plossable (Spelling?) *nods head* Seems like it could happen.
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From ANON - Velvet Curse on July 13, 2004
oh did they? i wasn't aware they had pulled my reveiws too *growls* anyway, i noticed that they pulled your account from thee toe too. did they bother to inform you of why? i've e-mailed them every day since i reviewed that last time but they never answer. i'm refusing to visit that site now since you're not posting there anymore. it's a good job i remembered you saying in a previous chapter that you posted here or i wouldn't have been able to read anymore and that would have been BAD. i'm lucky since my best friend is a website designer and what are friends good for if not making websites for you? hehe no, i'm in his debt eternally, or i will be once he's finished it. so i don't care if FF dropped me, their loss.
i feel so sorry for vegeta, i mean he just found someone to trust and now he see's himself in that way again. goku's going to have his work cut out for him now, especially with him still being injured. good chapter, thanks ^^
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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on July 11, 2004
*cries tears of joy* Oh yay! Goku is going to be ok! Vegeta killed Frieza! That was so awesome. I am proud of him!
And I loved how Goku encouraged him through out the fight.
And I didn't think that the whole Vegeta falling in love and Kakorr thing was to subt.I k.I knew. I just love that pet-name. As for suggestions...I don't think I have one...it would be horrible if I did. I really suck at stuff like that.
And *grabs box of kleenex* oh no...the nchapchapters are going to be rough? I kinda figured they might, with everything that happened. But I can hardly wait to read them. This was a great chap and I was so glad Vegeta ascended and got to defeat the one who had wronged him so much in life.
Oh and one of my favorite parts in this chap was when Frieza was talking about how Trunks and how he wouldn't be back and Vegeta's like that was my son, asshole...hehe I loved that sooooo much.
^.*
-MB-
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From ANON - Marie on July 10, 2004
Yay! Freiza's dead! Again! :D Happy day.

I've always been a fan of 'Geta. :3
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From ANON - Crystal on July 09, 2004
I have been rather lax in my reading and reviewing lately. Im glad Im back up to date cuz these past few chapters were really intense. In #41 I was really gettin into it. *Go, Vegeta! Kill him! Tear him apart!* Ahem. Yes. I cant wait until you update again. Now, I must comment on my friend, the kitty cat. What is this flirting bussiness all about? How did this start? Its cute, lol.
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