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By : Pixelgoddess

From ANON - ~Evil on July 09, 2004
Good, Frieza's dead. Finally!! And Goku will be fine. Ah. You make me happy. Now... bring up the drama again!!!
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From ANON - Macha on July 06, 2004
*starts chanting* "The bastard, freak is dead......"(Wizard of Oz comes to mind)

*hugs Pixelgoddess* I know, you said in a couple of replies to reviews that the roller coaster isn't over yet, but I am soooooo happy the freak is dead. And it's a story were Vegeta got to kill the f'ing bastard. YAY!

I am also soooooo happy Goku is is alive. I am glad Piccolo made it in time to get him out of the GR, I just hope he makes it to the lookout and Dende in time. So, I actually never thought about it, I just let you have author's rights, but now that you have mentioned it, sure, I'd like to see the reasons behind Dende having to do multipul sessions instead of just one session like when he was younger. I am fairly certain he isn't going to have the same mental issues healing Goku that he did with Vegeta though. Dang those Senzu plants anyway, why can't they produce all year long? They are certainly impartial and unbiased, you just have to go through the Koro geo get them (I think that's the cats name.)

I think that Vegeta going SSJ4 would have been overboard. I would have loved it, but sometimes there is such a thing as overkill..... or wait, with the F'ing bastard you can't be too sure, SSJ4 would have been good. Make him a smuge mark on the ground and then fry the smudge mark to ashes.... Okay, I'll stop.

Gotenks/Piccolo? 0.0
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From ANON - jaygoose on June 30, 2004
*sobs* No...no...no! You killed off Goku *suddenly remembers that she just did the same thing in one of her fics* Opps...nevermind. Hey, but I didn't have Vegeta do it. That was so sad. I could just see the prince blubbering over his belove's body. That bastard Frieza! *sigh* Now on to the amusing bits. "I should have stayed evil"---that was hilarious. Oh and the emergence of Gotenks. I forgot how much I loved that guy. I hope things get better...or wait, how about worse. I love drama.
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From ANON - Macha on June 30, 2004
Yes, I would have to say that with the down time on AFF and your couple of rewrites that you did, you gave me plenty of time to stop panicing. Now all I want to do is kill that bastard Frezia. *Glares threateningly at the purple and white freak.*

Yay, Gotenks. I know Piccolo has a real problem with him, but he has his moments. Thank Kami they are only thrity minutes at the most.

I hope and pray somehow Vegeta is able to resist the freak. It seemed as though the freak may have gone too far, threatening the body of Goku. This is my thoughts on the matter, if Vegeta believes that life isn't worth living without Goku, he is a strong enough person to overcome any sort of pain the freak can dish out.

I don't know what to think of the telepathic ending :Vegeta: It could have been Goku, but it very easily could have been Piccolo trying to reach him. I don't know if you were trying to lead us/me astray or not with that mini cliff hanger. We'll find out soon enough, I am sure.

The freak is twisted and evil, what a devious plan he set in motion, only to have it work out this way instead of the way he had intended.
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From ANON - QueenSaiyan on June 29, 2004
Aah! AAH! Wtf, no! *tears her hair out and demands that the next chapter be ready and waiting for her when her sanity returns*

*ahem* Great story, great chappy. XD
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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on June 29, 2004
OMG! NO! nonononononononono!!!!!!!
Goku!!!!!! Please let Goku be ok somehow. And Vegeta his mental stability, I am afraid for him.
So Frieza was waiting for Vegeta to fall in love! wanting it to be radditz! but it wasn't! *sobs* it was Goku!!!!!!!
This is all so horrible. Frieza is ugh! I hate him, I am not sure if it is possible for me to hate him even more. Everytime he calls Vegeta pet I just want to hit him!!
Now I understand what Vegeta was saying when he was afraid ove ove and had a fear of unlocking whatever it was inside of him. What Frieza put inside of him...damn that icy bastard staright to hell.
Gosh, what is going to happen. Poor Vegeta having to go through all of this and not being strong enough to beat Frieza...and poor Goku. But maybe there is hope, if that was Goku who said Vegeta's name at the end. I hope it was.
I love this fic! but you know that. ^_^
and 39 was written first(I never ever would have guessed that)...wow s sos so amazing to hear how ppl create their stories.
^.*
-MB-

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From ANON - suisheu on June 25, 2004
OMG OMG OMG YOU DID NUST UST DO THAT! YOU CAN'T HAVEE FRE FRIEZA OVERTAKE VEGETA AND THEN MAKE HIM DO THOSE HEINOUS ACTS ON GOKU. OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!! I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU!! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT?! HOW COULD YOU?! WHYYYYYYYY??!!!!!! Oh, I'm so confused right now. How will Vegeta ever forgive himself if he finds out?! And why was Frieza using Vegeta for the torture, if he too was in the room? To make it more entertaining, maybe? GRRRRRR!! I AM SO MAD RIGHR NOW!! OYS! This is too terrible!!! How will goku be able to get over this?! Why is he toying with them like this? Was Vegeta really tortured like that? How were they captured and subdued like that? Fill in the gaps please!!! And next chappie, SOON!
p.s. I'm out of state at a friend's house and may not be able to review as often as I'd like to... so if I'm not heard from for a while, that's why. But I'll catch up! promise! ^_^

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From ANON - XxNeko_YoukaixX on June 24, 2004
awwwww poor Goku & Vegeta *sniff* damn u Frieza *growls a lil* i should tare him from limb to limb *gets ready to pounce from Pixegoddess's lap with her fluffy long brown tail high in the air*......ummm oh damn i can't, damn Pixelgoddess must have done somethin' to me 'cause i can't for some reason leave her lap (LIER!) *sits back down on Pixelgoddess lap* well damn there goes my plan. (that was never ur plan to begin with u just made up that stupid excuse so that u have a reason to stay on Pixelgoddess lap) grrr damn inner voice shut up no one was talkin' to u! *faces Pixelgoddess with her head tilted slighty sideways with a corious look on her face & her paws on Pixelgoddess stomach* how much longger does Goku & Vegeta have to get tortued? is there gonna be any good stuff happenin' anytime SOON?*tail swayin' from side to side eagerly* & whats with this temptemmetmmet u wanted to say about cute lil nekos under ur shirt hmmmmmm? come on tell me i wanna know *gives big neko eyes looks*

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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on June 24, 2004
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
What is happening?! *sobs*
This is soooo horrible... Frieza must die!!!!
I loved this chappie...but so sad. Poor Goku and Vegeta...
and gosh the ending of this chapter...how frightening....*sobs more* There has to be a good explanation.
I loved Goku's train of thought...how he believed he was the coward and he wanted Vegeta to beud oud of him...*tears gather in eyes once more* How I love this fic.
I love, love, love the way you write, how you describe emotion, and how you describe things in general.
^.*
-MB-

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From ANON - Macha on June 23, 2004
Okay, hopefully I am not posting this review twice.

This chapter was written very well. I can't necessarily say I liked it though. The surpirse at the ending *shudders*

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhhh............." Is heard as Macha runs away in a panic.

(Don't worry. I'll be back after I have had a moment to digest what I just read.)
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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on June 20, 2004
*gets all sparkly eyed and clasps hands together* When I grow up I want to write just like yo*sob*sobs* but it's too late I'm already grown! -_-
I love this ficcie, it gets better and better with each chapter.

It's all so detailed, I love the emotion put behind the fic and it's characters.
and it is so funny...ah..everything I love.

he remembered as a child hoping he would find someone who he could love.--I loved that line and I think he has found that person.

This fic is so sad...I always find myself either on the edge of tears or in tears. And gosh I love it...love how Goku is constantly there for his Prince. I was so sad when Goku said "I already knew you didn't love me. We're companions. You said that." That is heartbreaking, but I know Vegeta does love him, so that made me happy.

*puts on lots and lots of hair extentions and bats eyes at Vegeta* I heard he has a hair fetish...*dies* that is so cute!
AHHH! Krillen made me so mad in ch 36 I am somewhat glad Goku didn't kill him b/c that would have added to his worries. But sheesh how could he be so cruel. The bit when Piccolo said you would only get hurt if you were in the same room with them while they were having sex was great...I laughed so hard.

*gasp* NO! It was Frieza in the ship!!!!! And the slave chip thing, I loved it, thought it was so creativee fae fact that it attaches itself to the spine too...that is just horrible. Everything Vegeta went through just makes me want to sob...and now poor Goku...and Piccolo can't feel his ki! oh gosh...please don't let be dbe dead. *pulls hair out* Frieza can't blow up the earth and he can't take Vegeta....it is masaos!aos!

I was glad to see the Krillen came back to fight, I mean really the world could be destroyed he should fight for it.
This fic is excellently written and everything seems to fit together perfectly. I love it.

If I were a professional movie reviewer I would say:
Mainintaining is Masterful, intelligent, and a must see(in this case read)! A fascinating take on the lives of everyone's two favorite saiayjins. Filled with romance, comedy, angst, and passion...it is sure to sate all your fanfic needs.^_~

^.*
-MB-
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From ANON - Twilight-Abyss on June 19, 2004
Well look at that, Krillin actually came to help. Too bad Frieza is a step ahead of everyone. Erg! Gohan should have called Goku and Vegeta the minute they recognized the ship. Update soon so we can find out what happened to Vegeta and Goku.

~Kira~
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From ANON - Renzuite on June 19, 2004
GWAHHHHH Goku! No ki? None at all? Ahhhh! +goes insane+ Vegeta, you sure are mean to Goku! I just *knew* Frieza was 'alive.' He had to be. So how did he get back alive? Slavey Vegeta wish him back without wanting to? He ran away from Hell? Or did I entirely miss it all together, eh? He sure is one sick fuck. Your's has to be the evilest Frieza ever, congratulations ;) Fluff, return! This story is gettin' so depressing lol.

I feel li'm 'm posting multiple times.. Damn "too many connections" jazz.
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From ANON - Macha on June 19, 2004
*spews own string of curses* "Why can't that F'ing Lizard die arleady?!"......"And Stay F'ing dead!" I hate that bastard. Okay, tecnically, he isn't a bastard. F'ker? Yeah, I like that one.

Does it seem as though I hate that...thing? Good, that's what I was going for. Seems to me he still likes to count chickens before the eggs hatch though.

Hehe. Okay, you answered all of my questions about what was going on. Now I guess I have several more, about what is going to happen. I will be waiting for the answeres in your chapters to come.

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From ANON - jaygoose on June 18, 2004
*sobs* No...No! I knew this was going to happen! Vegeta can't leave. There has to be another way. *sobs some more*
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