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By : Pixelgoddess
  • From ANON - Renzuite on June 17, 2004
    Yeehaw! I get to read before no one else! +privileged+ Gwah this is turning out very nicely, a big chunk to swallow! Vegeta's implant is coursed throughout his body? Or just on his spinal cord? Bulma should figure out a way to remove it :D Or Mr. Popo LMAO That guy scares me. Throw him in here somewhere besides being Dende's shadoWhenWhen you, if you, end this, will you make both Goku and Vegeta go to the same place when they die? Vegeta's loneliness and pain and fear in Hell and Goku's loss of interest in his lovers in Heaven should bring them together somewhere!.. Or turn them immortal...wahahaha. Are you going to bring the dragonballs in this somewhere? Oh I just want you to finthe the whole thing already! It's great! Wonderful! Moreeee :)
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  • From Shan on June 17, 2004
    Something tells me Goku won't let Vegeta go that easily. And I'm glad to see I wasn't way off the mark with what I expected to happen. And there's still that ship on it's way....
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  • From ANON - Macha on June 17, 2004
    *sobs* Nooooooooooo. I know it seems like the best thing in the world right now, but does Vegeta really have to get away from Goku? Isn't there something else, anything else?

    Okay, I'll stop being melodramatic now.

    The angst level is really up there. You wrote it so well.

    And yes, I was wondering about a feedback loop myself. Hmmmm.
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  • From ANON - suisheu on June 16, 2004
    Ack! I didn't get to finish my review last time!!!! That was only the first sentence! My stupid computer cose that time to go wacko with a virus and submitted the partial 4 different times all at once before locking up. *bows to author* I'm so sorry!!! I was gonna say that I kinda had hopes that Goku would finally kill Krillin.
    But for this one; I didn't knwo that recording stuff would come in handy. That's pretty neat. Maybe he could live in there and record everything that happens. Hehe... vut that wouldn't be right. Did it show how he'd go hur hurt? Or was that truly the end? And once again, why did the scar only react to Goku's touch? How come Vegeta isn't teaching Goku how to control his side of the bond? And what did Vegeta have in mind when he said they could be bonded differnt but it might not be as strong? Once again, I'm very sorry for the error last time. Other that what's been said.... this chappie was a little on the short side, don't you think?
    And everthing is turning very mor Gok Goku seems depressed and Vegeta's terrified. Not good to have two jumpiyajiyajins. Will there be more about the ship next time? More soon, please!
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  • From ANON - XxNeko_YoukaixX on June 16, 2004
    awwww poor Vegeta looks like those voices r really gettin' to him & Gokun but....how can it be stopped? is there a way for him to get rid of the voices? & how many more cliffhangers r u gonna do? *pout* man u had me on the edge of my seat AGAIN! *whin*


    *kitty curls up at Pixelgoddess's feet* update soon i can't wait to read the next chap *wags her tail wildly & brushes head against Pixelgoddess's leg purrin' awaitin' for her to sratch the kitty's head* hehe ^______^



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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on June 16, 2004
    Wow.

    I'm glad that Vegeta is opening up to Goku.
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  • From ANON - Macha on June 16, 2004
    It was good to see Vegeta giving Kakarott the comfort he needed. I am glad it seems as though Vegeta doesn't want to give up on the bond. I don't think Goku would be happy with that at all. I hope they find a way to make it work better.

    The sceen with Vegeta in the GR, that was kind of freakish. You warned us that the warm fuzzies were going to leave for a little while. I appreciate that. I think I've said it before, but I'll say it again. I love this story.
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  • From ANON - ~Evil on June 14, 2004
    Hello, I'm back and I have a new theory. Frieza drugged Veggie-chan lots of times in the past, maybe he found some way to implant himself into him?? Explains he doesn't know where the scar comes from. But than again whats with the ship?! Better update soon so I don't have to guess anymore:)
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  • From ANON - yaoifaerie on June 14, 2004
    OMG!! This story kicks m ass ass! It's incredibled! I feel so sorry for Vegeta. I bet the white ki is Freiza! Gomen, I'm talking to much. Anyway,ove ove it. Update soon!


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  • From ANON - Will on June 13, 2004
    Loved it. Really liked the hot kiss in front of Bulma and her reaction to it (he never kissed me like that heheh). Also enjoyed the extra little plot threads to unravel. Cameras in the GR room, so that will mean.... and a ki spike eh? Hmmm.... Agree about Krillin, but honour has been satisfied. Also happy that Gohan is over any bumpy bits in his reactions and is now so supportive of his father. Maybe Piccolo will help - more Piccolo and Vegeta verbal sparring?? Love that. Love it all. Want more soon ::makes puppy eyes::
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  • From ANON - Twilight-Abyss on June 13, 2004
    Yeah! An enraged Goku trying to kill Krillin. I love it. And well...if there are no fuzzies for a while, I can deal with that. That just means there is more room for angst and drama. Either way, I look forward to it. Glad to hear you are healthy again, and keep up the good work. Update soon.

    ~Kira~
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  • From ANON - suisheu on June 12, 2004
    **warning... I am going to sream** AAAAAAAARRRRRRRGRAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!re, re, I'm done. Then again, maybe not.
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  • From ANON - suisheu on June 12, 2004
    **warning... I am going to sream** AAAAAAAARRRRRRRGRAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!! There, I'm done. Then again, maybe not.
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  • From ANON - suisheu on June 12, 2004
    **warning... I am going to sream** AAAAAAAARRRRRRRGRAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!! There, I'm done. Then again, maybe not.
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  • From ANON - suisheu on June 12, 2004
    **warning... I am going to sream** AAAAAAAARRRRRRRGRAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!! There, I'm done. Then again, maybe not.
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