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By : Pixelgoddess
  • From ANON - Webtester01 on June 12, 2004
    Another wonderful chapter.

    Vegeta rubbed the trace of lipstick off and looked at it. "Kakarott is going to growl au fou for that."

    "No he won't."

    Vegeta just smirked - Kakarott chose that moment to reappear. He raised an eyebrow and waited for it. Sniff. Growl. Glare at woman. Realize what he did. Scratch back of head. This possessive streak of Kakarott's was a great source of entertainment.

    "Told you," Vegeta said to her. -LOL

    Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on June 11, 2004
    *sigh* I know that Goku couldn't have killed Krillin. He couldn't have even hurt him more than he had otherwise it would have made and ever bigger mess of thing. I am glad that the bastard knows now that no one is os sis side though. I am also glad that Piccolo's around too. He is always the voice of reason in most of the fics I read. He's not nearly in mine enough. I might change that.
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  • From ANON - macha on June 11, 2004
    I am so excited about the fact Bulma had installed camera's on the GR. 500 hr. of feed, jeez, that's a lot. I think that it's going to help Vegeta and Goku re sre somethings out though.

    I am sorry that Krillin has to be such a prick. I would have to agree with you though, the angst that Goku would end up going through if he had killed the monk would be a lot to deal with in the story.

    I was sorry to read, in one of your comments to previous reviews, that the warm and fuzzies are over for a little while.

    You say a ki spike on the ship, eh?
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  • From Shan on June 11, 2004
    If someone else killed Krillin, Goku wouldn't have the angst..... hey, I'll do it!
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  • From ANON - suisheu on June 08, 2004
    Ddn't review last chappie...oops... *fwaps self*
    Dammit, what's the significance of that scar and its memories? How did it come about? And why is it only Goku that makes it react like that?

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  • From ANON - Sarkywoman on June 08, 2004
    Mmm, angst.... I'm glad Vegeta just sat around feeling helpless, I was worried he would go to the ship and get in the way. Not that I would ever say that to his face of course....
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on June 08, 2004
    Aww...*rolls around on the floor twitching like a nut case* The beginning was adorable. I feel so sad for my Veggie...er...Kaki's Veggie...*looked around out of fear* I hope they figure this out soon. Whoa 50 chapters. I'm hoping to get mine done in 30 or less. yeah, right. And now a side fic is brewing. We just love writing ourselves to death don't we. :)
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  • From ANON - macha on June 08, 2004
    Hmmm, that was interesting, I was feeling calm just reading the part about Vegeta 'grooming' Goku.

    So, Vegeta has a hint about the scar now, but doesn't want to face the memories. And he did pretty well in accepting the fact he and Goku won't be joining the fight.

    Yes! Two more chapies almost done, and you say you think this is going to be about 50 long? . ma.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on June 08, 2004
    Oops. Mentals= mental blocks.

    Typo.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on June 08, 2004
    Loved this chapter (35.)

    You were right. I did like the baka bear statement.

    I was also sick last week. I'm still working on chapter 11. *Groans* seems like it's taking forever.
    And with the mentals... *rolls eyes and huffs*

    Anyway, check out my story Ancient History: The forgotten Past of the Saiyans, when you have the time.
    It is my first fic, so review and tell me what you think.

    I really love this whole story! Very original! Keep it up. :-)
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  • From ANON - Twilight-Abyss on June 08, 2004
    You got sick, too. It seems everywhere I turn someone has the flu or something similar. I myself have a nasty cough. The kind that sounds like a dog choking (the best description I've heard for it so far). Hope you are feeling better.

    Story, right. This chapter was very sweet and filled me with the fuzzies. Especially the stuffed animal toting Vegeta image. Squee! Write more soon please.

    ~Kira~
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on June 06, 2004
    Oh. My. God. I am sweating. They are so cute. I am a gushing idiot now. :)
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  • From ANON - Sarkywoman on June 05, 2004
    Vegeta is such a lovely uke. Um...nope, that's all my brain can think about right now.
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  • From ANON - Crystal on June 05, 2004
    *Has nothing left to say* ...Its awesome, keep it up. > Drama, drama, drama. lol
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on June 04, 2004
    Great chapter.

    I liked it when Goku used his side of the the bond to tell Vegeta he was safe.

    I wonder if Freiza is talking to Vegeta telepathically from hell, or if Dende did something to him.

    Looking forward to more.

    I am really ejoying your story.
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