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By : Pixelgoddess
  • From ANON - Twilight-Abyss on June 03, 2004
    YAY! Another chapter so soon. I'm so very happy. SQUEE! The thought of Vegeta curling up next to Goku is so cute. Urge to glomp...rising... Goku would kill me for glomping his Prince, but I'd risk it anyway. Will we learn more about whatever or whoever is approaching the planet soon? My curiosity s beginning to burn a hole in me. Keep it coming and update again soon.

    ~Kira~
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  • From ANON - Zero on June 03, 2004
    i love this fic ^_^ i've been reading since you first started, and it keeps getting better, the story has a plot, and a good one at that, and still works in the deliciously juicy lemons. i check to see if you've updated at least 3 times a week. i want to hear more from Gohan, last time he appeared he sounded rather left out, even un happy about his situation w/ being the only strait person in the family, and i'd like it if you played that up. or maybe i'm not remembering the story corectly. it's been going on for sooooo long. it's great, epics rock!!! but if it doesn't work into the story line, no biggie. just keep updating!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - XxNeko_YoukaixX on June 03, 2004
    sorry i haven't updated in a while I DIDN'T MEAN IT I SWEAR!!!!!!!!!!! its just thats i have finals comin' up in a few days there a pain in the *** & its really drainin' me of my energy. i feel bad that i haven't updated it wasn't what i want sorry again.

    but other then thhe fhe fic's great i love it & PLEASE don't cliff hang u had me on the edge of my sit when u ended those to chaps & i was diin' to know what happened next. & from what i can see when Vegeta gots some serios problems with that damn voice that keeps buggin' him & poor Goku doesn't knoat tat the hell to do. what does he have to do to get the voice to stop anyway? SEE now look at what u've done i'm on the edge of my sit just askin' these questions.......grrrrrr......oh well i'll live just as long as u keepin' writin' *smile*

    Cat
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  • From ANON - macha on June 03, 2004
    My thanks go to Midnight-Flame Princess, if you really wrote this yummy lemon for her. An you you of course, for filling her request!

    You did update fast. I looked at the posting, and I thought to lf. lf. "No way," but it was true! Yay!


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  • From ANON - Will on June 03, 2004
    Glomping right back at ya - thanks for the welcome. Nice chapter. They will either save each other or ruin each other (hopefully save cos I really want a happy ending here - incurably romantic I know). Maybe the ship and whoever is on it (have my suspicions!) will be the catalyst for Vegeta to excorsise his demons and realise his love? No? Aw go on!! Can't wait for 35. PS What's happening with the other characters? Is Gohan alright about stuff now? Dende and Krillin need sorting out and I do like ChiChi and Rezu...
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  • From ANON - ~Evil on June 03, 2004
    Wow, very fast indeed! I couldn't even review in time!! You can do that more often, I don't mind... I can't wait till the ship comes, I think it has something to do to Veggie's moodswings and the voices, it seems to get worse now that the ship is getting closer. Well, I'll see in time. Keep up the fast updates.
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on June 02, 2004
    Aww...I got the warm fuzzies! :)
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  • From ANON - Will on June 02, 2004
    Hope this works - I'm new to AFF and this is my first ever review - took a long time to screw up the courage! I have been checking every day for Ch 33 and now its up! Love the way you write, love the way you get inside the characters. Please please keep going (hmm now I guess to have to make up a name - eek!).
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  • From ANON - macha on June 01, 2004
    I am very happy that Goku is so steadfast in his devotion to Vegeta. If he weren't it would make this struggle that they are about to go through unbareable; they wouldn't make it through as a couple.

    I found it very disturbing that Vegeta was able to break his own tail. I hope that Goku mentions the Voice's vocal reaction to him touching Vegeta's angry/red scar ealier. I think that there may be a key to this whole mess, and not mentioning this detail could leave the clue unfound.

    I know that there is still the tha that is coming to earth to worry about, but I hope pro problem is delt with first.
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  • From ANON - suisheu on June 01, 2004
    oh, joy in the morning! Vegeta's back! will goku ask Vegeta to tell him all that he remembers at each blackout? Maybe there's something common about all of them? Aw, dammit! and I thought they could just get the dragonballs... but nothing is ever that easy, or there wouldn't be any fun in the reading. Hehe... 'twas a thought.
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  • From Shan on June 01, 2004
    I was trying to explain to a non-dbz-watching friend how sensitive Saiyan tails are and she was just like, 'so it's like having two dicks'? Not sure about that one. Anyway,k cool fic, carry on! Not that you're gonna stop here anyway.
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  • From ANON - Twilight-Abyss on May 31, 2004
    hmm..I must have misread something in the last chapter because I tht Vht Vegeta broke Goku's tail. Didn't realize it was his own tail he broke. Ah well. It's all cleared up now at least. (my brain likes to play tricks on me). And yeah, I do get very emotional when reading at times, but that's how I distinguish between the stories I absolutely love and the ones that are ok or worse. Any fic that can elevate my emotions and make me feel what the characters are feeling is an amazing fic, which is what this one is. I'm a little worried that one day I just might get so hyped I'll just get up and do a very unsuccessful backflip ending up with me planting my face in the ground *ouchies*. Maybe I should strap myself down when reading...

    Well keep up the great work and update soon.

    ~Kira~
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  • From ANON - ~Evil on May 25, 2004
    How very right you are. How horrible! My poor Veggie. Does this have something to do with the approaching ship?? By the way: WHAT"S WITH THE CLIFFY'S?!?!?!!? You are mean, I can't sleep at night feeling sorry for my poor little princeling. *I'm only slightly overreacting* Well, hurry up!!! time for the next very cool chapter.
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  • From ANON - Twilight-Abyss on May 24, 2004
    Agh! No! Stupid evil voice! Get out of my prince's body this instant or I'll come in and rip you out myself! Grr... Fight it Vegeta! Fight it! *blushes in embarassment for having actually screamed all that out loud*
    Man I love this story more and more with each chapter! Yeah! Keep it coming and please update soon!

    ~Kira~
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  • From ANON - suisheu on May 23, 2004
    oooooooOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! *hugz self* broke his tail?! **stamps feet** that must hurt like a sonofabitch to a saiyajin!!!! Yeesh!!! ::ish suddenly furious:: snaps! That stupid Frieza has gotten so far into veegta that he's able to take over his body for a couple seconds at a time!!! What's this shell that's left? It's neither the voice, nor is it the Ouji. So.... what's there? This robotic personality that goes back and forth between responding as Vegeta would, and as the voice commands. Is it going to worsen as it has been? Will Vegeta be imprisoned within his own form, just a helpless onlooker, unable to command his own body? Is Dende gonna pull another stupid ass stunt and force Goku to kill him?(piccoloc ould do it just as well) Y'know, that's not a bad idea... but there is that problem with the dragonballs. Couldn't they be used to find out what's happening to Vegeta? When are the peopleson the ship due to arrive, and who the heck are they?! Grrrrr....!!!! *sits down* next chappie!! More more more!
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