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By : Pixelgoddess
  • From Ontopoftheworld on November 04, 2010
    KYAAAAAAAAAAAA THIS IS FRIGGIN AMAZING!!!!!! 8D Omg, I haven't even gotten half way into this story yet, and I am utterly captivated! The entire story thus far has been purely awesome, and I can't thank you enough for making ChiChi a nice person in this story- love how she has such a feisty lover btw XD Anyway, I simply love this story- DEFINITELY one of my favorites by far, and I'm gonna be reading it again in the future for sure! You're an awesome writer! =D
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  • From ANON - meggly on January 25, 2009
    A-M-A-Z-I-N-G
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  • From Salza on February 16, 2008
    Such a great way of setting up the situation in this story - and explaining how Goku knows what the heck he's doing. An interesting take on the afterlife, one not a lot of people have thought of, and...well, just plain good ^^. I'm so glad I decided to reread this story!
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  • From Salza on February 16, 2008
    Aww...I love that. The Goku-helpful impulse strikes again. ^^ It's been so long since I first read this...I'd forgotten how much fun it was.
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  • From Salza on February 16, 2008
    I don't know if I've mentioned this anywhere else, but I LOVE this chapter. The pacing is great, there's that nice blend of humor and serious, you cover a lot of ground...it's wonderful. Not anyone can convey such complicated emotions and relationships in such a short amount of space.

    Also - the way you resolved the whole "awkward" thing at the end was great. I think my new favorite lines in fanfiction history are now "Ow, Piccolo."

    Just a lot of fun to read ^^
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  • From Salza on April 10, 2007
    Wet - man...what a time to get interrupted ^^ Nicely handled, and a good place to add in humor.
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  • From Salza on April 09, 2007
    For Paranoia - Another set of great exchanges. You have some fun dialogues in this one, that's for sure. ^^
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  • From Salza on April 09, 2007
    You're doing great work here as usual in this chapter - Goku and Vegeta seem like they're going to make it, and the handling of tension throughout was impressive. Also...kudos to you for how you're handling Piccolo in this story! He's great to see always, and he's refreshingly logical in a story like this where there's so much emotion.
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  • From Salza on April 07, 2007
    Such a great conversation between Piccolo and Vegeta in Pissy?! I loved it, and I loved that you used it to flesh out some of Vegeta's issues. And what's this - Goku is actually jealous? It's so much fun reading through this...
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  • From Salza on April 07, 2007
    I never would have thought of Olibu - but you, of course, made it believable ^^ This story is full of great twists. I can't believe I didn't read it sooner!
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  • From Salza on April 07, 2007
    Y'know, I've never read this fic before - but I'm enjoying it thus far ^^ Your interactions between Piccolo, Gohan, and Goku in this chapter were great, and I'm not just saying that. I'm looking forward to seeing this story develop!
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  • From ANON - Serepentine on October 06, 2005
    That was an awsome story, off to read the sequel. Keep writting, there always has to be more! But great work, loved every moment, i think i cried when i thought goku was dead lol. I'm such a sap. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Serpentine on October 02, 2005
    I like this chapter the most so far, mostly because of Piccolo and Vegeta. It's adorable how they get along. Good job ^_^ Hope you start a trend.
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  • From ANON - Chi on August 17, 2005
    Whoa.

    Dude.

    Whoa.

    *speechless*

    Dude.

    Okay, so at first, I was a little unsure. The first chapter is a little shaky and QUITE misleading, but after I read it I decided to plow on because a friend who is near and dear to my heart recommended this fic. I trust her tastes completely, and so I continued.

    Boy, am I glad I did.

    Which isnt to say that the fic isnt without it's weaknesses. The constant POV changing was a little daunting, as was having to remember which little symbols were for which voices in which persons head. More than a little confusing.

    But on the upside, you had stupendous characterization, exquisite dialogue, lots of details.

    AND DON'T EVEN GET ME STARTED ON THE SEX!

    I've read a LOT of smut in my life. Smut like you wouldnt believe, but nothing, NOTHING, NOTHING can even BEGIN to compare to this. This was HOT. I'm talking i-need-a-cigarette-even-though-I-don't-smoke hot. I'm talking three-cold-showers hot. I'm talking I-better-move-to-Alaska-before-I-sizzle-out-of-existence hot. It was just sooo amazing. So utterly AMAZING. You REALLY put those tails to good use. *snickers* I can only envy your smut-writing abilities.

    Anyway, so in the end, whatever mistakes this fic has, are made up for by plot, characterization and to-die-for sex scenes. *worships you*
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  • From ANON - Boris K on June 09, 2005
    Awesome. You must continue. If not then I'll get really upset and get really mad. This story is incredible.
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