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Reviews for The Source Of All Things

By : Maldoror
  • From ANON - bex drake on December 16, 2004
    as always this chapter rocks :)

    i love the way you've moved from heero, duo and wufei's relationship(s) to quatre and trowa's- poor q!!

    i'm not very good at writing constructive reviews, though I'm sure you've noticed that by now :) so i hope this non-cconstructive review is okay
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  • From ANON - black beauty on December 14, 2004
    Update soon and keep up the great job!
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  • From ANON - Bex Drake on November 19, 2004
    Fabulous!! I adored it!
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  • From ANON - PhoenixMageFire on November 01, 2004
    Hehehehehehehe
    I'm so glad I'm not on Center. ^_^
    I'm so glad I'm not Wufei, all these strange things organizing themselves without any rythm or reason.
    Dragon's Lair hehehehehehehe.
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  • From ANON - sminty on October 30, 2004
    So Wufei is falling for ol Maxie. Sigh...I see an abusive relationship in the making. I feel sorry for him. All Duo does is call in name, tear at is pride and insult his intelligance. Sooner or later its going to destroy our stubbon dragon. He hasn't had an easy life too and these allies of his are pretty much just as bad as the Scurge, using him for their own agenda while always bellitting him and his worth. Its almost too hard to read. No one gets put down as much as Wufei. No on. I mean everyone is getting insulted but with the other, we are quickly reminded of their true worth, unlike with Wufei. So far I can't see a 2x5 being healthy, unless Duo starts feeling something besides bitterness, spite and hate. So right now I am all for the 1x5. You do them so well, and they are so well together because of the way you write them. Even in this fic. The silent conversations and conformation of each other. Heero picking him out before the others. Though, it might mean he thinks Wufei is the most expendable. Who knows... I'll just have to read and see. ^_^ Besides the loop of Wufei insults, the story is really a great read. The characters are full and round. The dialouge is witty, and the whole story is so orginial, I suggest you change the names one day in the furture and publish this, not as fanfiction but as your own orginal work!!
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  • From ANON - Bex on October 30, 2004
    that was a fantastic chapter, i love it. poor wufei, all confuzzeled about his feelings towards duo. lol. i cannot wait for the next part.
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  • From ANON - RavenWings on October 28, 2004
    With weapons like those, I *doubt* those are fairy godmothers... And I'm surprised that Wufei hasn't realized that Svale's been manipulating him to make him ln ton to Duo. *Grins* Or I could be giving Svale too much credit and she's really just using every chance she can get to try to grope 'Fei-fEithEither way is extremely amusing to watch from the sidelines. I can't wait for the next part! Oh, and *why* do I have a feeling Hee-chan knows more about Scources then the others do? My mind could just be playing tricks on me again, but I've got this hunch... well, we'll find out eventually if I'm right or totally off-base, heh.
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  • From ANON - Sivy on October 28, 2004
    I am really excited for the beginnning of 2x5 I can't wait to read more on it... I can't wait for next week... I was really excited over 2 weeks for this chapter... its annoying... Alright, happy writing
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  • From ANON - katrice on October 17, 2004
    Whoa! Hell of an update! This was definetly worth waiting for! The "Scourge" is really utterly ruthless, but I am sorry that we had to force Duo to relive his pain all over again. Nowcan can really see why he took the steps that he did in order to kill him. It must have been terrible to watch your whole race of people die. Not to mention the one pereson that really mattered to you to have them taken away must be just as bad. Now I hope that they will all be willingly to give Duo a chance because something tells me that things are about to get worse. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Bex Drake on October 16, 2004
    that was a beautifully dark chapter. i loved it!!!! chapter 33 rocked!!
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  • From ANON - RavenWings on October 16, 2004
    *Mutters* Nothing sad or angsty my arse! What do you call THAT?! *Points at chapter 33* I'd call that angst! Major angst, really! Er, not to say I'm *complaining*... you figure you're in for something angsty when dealing with the death of an entire race with only one left to get his revenge... but... wahhhh, that was *really* sad! And chibi-Duo was cute... though I do wanna kill Svale now. Well, not *kill* but... maim... Will the next chapter be coming soon? Or soon-ish? ^^' 'Cause I'd like to know what happens next. And find out why Quatre went all wobbly and stuff when he heard that the Scourge was the 13th Source. Post more soon, 'k? Please?
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  • From ANON - black beauty on October 15, 2004
    Wow! Duo's memories are intense. Keep up the good job and update soon!
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  • From ANON - GoldenRat on October 15, 2004
    Damn! Memories of the Dead is an incredibly powerful chapter. Reliving the destruction of your entire race, in front of an audience.
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  • From ANON - Jamethiel on October 13, 2004
    Your story is very interesting and intriguing but while i was reading, i just thought, while Duo has extensive knowledge concerning Juusan as an enemy, Wufei is the only one among them with knowledge of Juusan as an ally and the only one who has had up close and personal contact with Juusan, and the chance of playing on that knowledge is fast retreating.
    If you play on Wufei's knowledge and his reactions to sharing, you could wreck interesting havoc on the slim balance between toleration and complete chaos. Not to mention whee she shield comes down Juusan has access to Wufei again, right?? Is he a walking time bomb or what. . .
    Please finish this, it brightens my day.
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  • From ANON - bex drake on October 09, 2004
    chapter 32 was an awesome chapter and i cannot wait for the next one. your story is magnificant. a really jewel :D i am totally in love with it and i cannot wait for more.
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