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Reviews for Prince\'s Pawn

By : BarbaraSheridan
  • From ANON - SonSofia on December 12, 2006
    I saw this story and didn't want to read it because of the pairing. But I took a look at it at 2am in the morning and holy crap it's hot! Yamcha makes a suitable uke for Vegeta, perfect to dominate and he's so submissive. I loved it! Better than I expected. Please write more, you have a lot of talent.
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  • From ANON - L. Claudius Pulcher on November 05, 2004
    "Overtones"? Fuck that! That was more d/s than most people bother to put into thir damn bdsm fics, and better. Seriously, this is some hot shit, I have read it multiple times (yeah, I have no life) and it continues to be ridiculously hot. I wish shit like this happened to me.
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  • From ANON - dizzee rascal on January 14, 2004
    Laina you stupid, STUPID FUCKING MORON!!! HOW STUPID CAN U GET!!??!?!?!?!?!?!? there was a WARNING yamchaxvegeta and sex warning in the beginning of the text u STUPID FUCK!!!!! GO DO US ALL A FAVOR AND JUMP OF A CLIF U ILLITERATE FUCKING WHORE!!!!! BURN IN HELL!!!!!

    ok but i liked the story very much please write more :)
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  • From ANON - OujiVegeta on December 15, 2003
    Ohh my, i liked that very much, please tell me that there is more to come i must have more of that sweet shit, oh yea.....hehe this has lots of great potenial to become a story not just a one shot, plz say u'll consider it.
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  • From ANON - Laina on December 10, 2003
    Yuck, you should warn people if it's going to be yaoi, especially if it going it's be Yamcha and Vegata!!!!! That sucked!!! Why do people even e the that stuff????!!!!!!
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  • From WhiteDog on December 09, 2003
    I'm glad you decided to post this here.Took you long enough.Man I love this fic,and this pairing!It's sooo underestimated,and I just love these fics where Vegeta makes Yamcha his bitch #drooooool^-^ ^-^ Oh and if I may recommend another excellent VxY one-shot, go to the Sayan Hideaway.It's called Brand new lover by Saiyjin Raven,you have to check it out!!
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  • From Shan on December 07, 2003
    Oh yeah! I normally prefer my Vegeta to be dominated, but that was so good!
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  • From ANON - Ominous Prophecy on December 07, 2003
    Very original ^_^ You have a great writing style! I hope you don't mind me asking, but do you only write yaoi or do you do regular pairings too? Call me boring, but I like the old fashioned B/V and it would be pretty cool to read one from someone as imaginitive as you. Great job
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