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Reviews for I Never Dreamed

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  • From ANON - Raditz on February 09, 2004
    That was wonderful, suspenceful, funny gut wrenching but still you need to reread! the only errors I can see are simple advoidible ones like souble words or leaving out "be" or other such common words.

    MORE!

    -R
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  • From ANON - Dan on February 08, 2004
    OMG!! AWESOME FIC!! Loved it!!! Marry me still! lol
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  • From ANON - Dan on February 08, 2004
    OMG!! AWESOME FIC!! Loved it!!! Marry me still! lol
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  • From ANON - DarkHeart6 on February 04, 2004
    OK! erm how do i say this? that story was the BEST!!! I loved it! how can you stop there? what will he choose? ohhh the suspense! update please...^_^
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  • From ANON - ApriL on February 01, 2004
    Oh gawd no! ok, yeah...update soon---pLease?
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  • From ANON - ApriL on January 13, 2004
    Update soon
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  • From ANON - Radditzsu on January 12, 2004
    This is my absolute favorate fic at the moment! Just when I thought it could get any better, when it couldn't be anymore outrageous! It dose! But, you have to watch for for simple mistakes like this "Mark pushed past he wand walked " reread a few times before you post!

    -Raditz
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  • From ANON - Radditzsu on January 11, 2004
    You are so evil to Mark and trunks I love it! Vegeta's mlingling is priceless! Freaking hysterical I love this story so much, hardly an error to boot, I notices a few minor errors but really all you need is to re -read, or a beta. I hope you have more of the Z gang in this story you know cameos and such.

    Get the next chapter out allreay what has it been? a minute since I read the last one? come on!

    -Raditz
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  • From ANON - ApriL on January 08, 2004
    lol, how...sweet? update soon
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  • From ANON - Raditz on January 04, 2004
    So when willl we be getting more? Ilove hou pou potray all the characters they just all fit! I love a mean Vegeta like bura! oh and marron aught to be fun! Hey will we ever see any of grandpa Goku and grandma chi chi?

    Vegeta is hilarious in this story, i can't wait for more of his medeling, poor veggie didn't get to tell his woman the big secret! *snickers*
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  • From ANON - Raditz on January 04, 2004
    "Trunks," Goten finally broke the male silence "We are going to die here, aren't we." Goten looked over at Trunks.

    bwahahaha! I could just picture goten hidden by all the bags! Very funny!

    watch out for simple mistakes klike this one when writing " change in her angrier", I'm assumming you ment anger.

    now fro chapter four!
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  • From ANON - Raditz on January 04, 2004
    I've only read chapter one so far but I'm liking the feel of this story. The frist interaction bewtween trunks and pan was great, the shifting of there eyes, communication threw body lauguage! My only complaint is that it seems to move to fast.

    on to chapter two!
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  • From ANON - ApriL on January 01, 2004
    lol...update soon
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  • From ANON - Kisa on December 27, 2003
    I love it very good update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - ApriL on December 25, 2003
    That sux =/ Update soon pLease
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