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Reviews for Kiss me Deadly

By : DragonBlade

From on November 06, 2005
o..m..g how could you say this is crap?! this is like one of the best fucking beyblade stories i've read! for reaaaaaaaaaaal...dude...it was the bomb...and the sequel was really good aswell! curious as to what you have up your sleeve..hmm
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From ANON - Kat on October 03, 2005
......that was a bit scary
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From ANON - Cat Helper on April 09, 2005
Ah, just thought I would drop in with a review, since this story rocks.

And speaking of your story, you said you weren't too sure about Asians length. To tell you, I'm born Asian, so I'm current 159cm, that is 5.3

And as far as i know, I'm not either tall or short, but all Asians have their differences.

Cat Helper
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From ANON - MultifacetedTune on March 29, 2005
Umm....okaaaay.......uh......well........yeah. ^^ I really liked this in the beginning, but towards the end, it kinda'......how should I describe this? It was like having cold water thrown in your face while your world it turned up-side down. Yeah. Or something like that. And then the last few "paragraphs" semed to turn the world back over again, in a way........or maybe that's just how I saw it, since Mom told me to get off of the computer and go to bed last night and I had to wait until this morning to finish the last chapter. *glares at her mom* .....not that the story wasn't still really enjoyable, because it was......I just wasn't expecting an ending like that. Ever. Like in-a-million-years type of ever. If that makes any since at all.........so, yeah. *just finished watching Full Metal Alchemist and is kinda' out of it* (which is one of the best shows I've ever seen, just fyi.......that, and Fruits Basket. They both rock. ^___~) ...sorry 'bout this....... ^^ Anyway, I still think that this was really good, and I'm going to go read the sequel now......and yeah, I probably misspelled lots of stuff, but I'm too tired to care much right now, so once again, I'm sorry...... ^^ I hope that the sequel isn't a lot of Rei/Mai (is that how you spell her japanese name? I dunno.......hmmm.......*shrug*), because I think that Rei and Kai fit together much better (no bad pun intended....no, really) .........okay, I'm making no sence what-so-ever, so I'm gonna' shut up now............bye! *wanders off to find coffee* ^___~ Oh! I almost forgot! ^___^ Keep up the good work -- you're really creative, and I thought that parts of this were absolutely halarious!!! (gives up trying to spll that word correctly) .......gods, do I need coffee.............................
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From ANON - Hikaru_chan_4ever on February 16, 2005
I like this version better than the oher version. but the other one was good too! I'm waiting for the next chappy to kiss me, kill me. . HURRY!
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From ANON - The Dark Messenger on February 16, 2005
I must say, this time round the chapter was infinitely better. And the first time round it was pretty damn impressive! Gppd job though, going into Kai's mind like that. And moreso, I love how you fucked up Rei's mind. Thinking that he deserved it, even though he blatently didn't is a very nice touch.
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From ANON - YuukiSan on February 16, 2005
I definatly like the changes to the last chapter. It fits the sequal better because in this version Rei has been subjucted to more therefore would be more broken. I always thought that Rei was too broken in the sequal for the first version of the rape chapter. This version also explains how Rei got the bruises on his arms and shoulders...which the other version didn't.

I LOVE how you protraited Kai going into his mind and basically re-living the shit that he went through in the Abby, which is why he's raping Rei. He goes from pissed Kai, to creepy Kai and makes Rei believe that he deseverded what's happening to him, which most rapists do (not that I know from personal experience though).

All and all I love the changes. As I've already said it fits so much better with the sequal. And you kept the anal probe! I feel so loved!

~ YuukiSan & NinjaMouse

P.S Pregnant M&M's...pregnant Rei!
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From ANON - DS on February 16, 2005
I liked more this version of the chapter 11... It explains why Kai did all that... And it was the thing of Pink Nightmare! *cheers* Yay! you can use it whenever you want it! (I said it well? Damn my cheesy english...) *DS with extra dosis of sugar* I'm so happy! ahem... anyway... I liked this version of the chapter, the descriptions are pretty good... but oh well, I liked it
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From ANON - Silver rose fox on February 04, 2005
I reader your story I love the begining not too sure that I like the ending. But still it was very good I my friends and I couldn't wait for you to finish this story. And now that is finish I can really say it was Great. Hope you do more story like this one.OOOOOOOOOOOOOO..........KKKKKKKKKKKKKKK.Good ^-^
Your Fan,
Silver Rose Fox
a.k.a
Foxxy.^-*
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From ANON - Chibi Drigger on February 02, 2005
OoOoOoOoOo!! YOU EVIL!! XDDD You are SOOOOOO MEAN!! Hahahaha!! But so gifted!....ANOTHER REASON I should HATE YOU!!! BUAHAHAHAHA- *hack hack* ahahaha- *caugh caugh* haha- *wheez wheez*..Ok ok -__-..I'm gonna stop that before I kill myself! *dies* X__X...Nah just kidding! ^__-...Really great last couple chapters by the way! Even with Kai's fucking violence-enhances-blow job! XDD...Can only imagen how bad that would hurt!! ^^;;...Heh...Yeah..I really did like this story! ^_^...Sorry I could review EVERY chapter!! *dies again* X__X....But I could never get on the damn site -__-......To many parents running around the house with their stupid rules!!! X____X...*sighs* Oh well!! ^__^...Im off to see if ya got...*already forgot the neame for it* >
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From ANON - SilverYami on January 24, 2005
wow. that was a strange ending. not at all what i expected. but.... I cant wait to read the sequel! i want to know what happens! i was really excited when i saw you updated! i was all like, yay! and bouncy... poor rei. does he still like kai now? well see you in the sequel!
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From ANON - Shinigami on January 24, 2005
That was... that was... well... I'm not usually a fan of KaRe rape, and though that wasn't particulally *enjoyable* to read, the fact that you stated that Kai would get nasty from the start, means that not only did you have this planned from the outset, but you didn't buckle under the pressure of what you knew everyone would 'want'. Sure we all want lovely- dovey, sugary sweet lemons and happy ever after, but this ending was strangely satisfying. The sheer irony that for the whole fic Rei has been lusting after Kai, yet in the end, he was nothing more then a victim of his affections, really impresses me. Like it was all for nothing, because he fucked up the game, and so, lost in the long run.
I'm looking forward to the sequal, however, Rei's reaction to all of this will be a pivotal part of the story line. I mean, the kid was raped, so I wonder how he is going to take it when Kai leaves the room and he realises that he has just been violently sexually assulted.
Gawd, I'm enthralled. Don't keep us waiting too long eh? And yes, I will hope for all of that 'everything works out alright' fluff crap. It's in my nature. All my lemons end up fluffy, I'm afraid it's a disease -_-
Take care
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From ANON - YuukiSan on January 23, 2005
YuukiSan: Oh my God!!!! You have offically rendered me speechless, and you know how hard that is!!!!

I must say that I love it and I can't wait until you write the sequal. Yeah I admitt that the last chapter was a little hard to read considering that I am a Rei fan (come on how can you blame me...just look at him...those muscles...those hands...that HAIR...) wait what was I saying...oh yeah right story.

NinjaMouse: I still can't believe that you put my comment in your story (the 'flying fuck'...yes I'll take full credit for that). Pissy Rei is fun, though you just knew that he was going to get his ass kicked (or raped in this case...well actaully both) because of it.

YuukiSan: I really can't wait until the sequal...I guess it kinda helps that I know a bit about what's going to happen and let's just say that Kai is in for a wicked surprise. I can't wait!

NinjaMouse: Yeah that's right, just give away what's going to happen why don't ya!

YuukiSan: I didn't. I just gave a little hint. Anyways enough of our rants for now, and yes I did mean it when I said that I loved it!

~YuukiSan & NinjaMouse
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From ANON - Death Girl Miya on January 23, 2005
Oh mi gosh...after I reviewed you posted another chapter up!

WOW WOW WOW! i LOVE THIS SO MUCH!! I AM SO GOING TO HAVE TO READ THE SEQUEL! MWHA MWAH I LOVE YOU SOOO MUCH!! Okay I'm calm ^___^ You're a REALLY REALLY GOOD AUTHOR!! I can't wait til the sequel!
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From ANON - Death Girl Miya on January 23, 2005
Damn...Rei's really REALLY pissed...

Haha its been like FOREVER since you last updated! I'm glad you did, and this chapter wasn't sucky! It was really good. Update soon please!
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