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Reviews for Walled

By : Scarletdream
  • From ANON - ToonMistress on February 14, 2005
    Damn. Just Damn. That's hot. I know how Ed feels. Everyone picks on the short people. Short is sexy!
    You must continue it! I love it so much! *squeezes Edward plushie complete with noticible bulge in the leather pants*
    Ed Plushie: *squeak*
    ^^I'd do some fun with this, but my friend has teh Roy plushie.
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  • From ANON - The Empress on February 11, 2005
    *drools* Wow. That was awesome. I've got a sweet visual in my head and I friggin' love it. You rock. ^.~
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  • From ANON - milk on February 09, 2005
    love it, love it, love it!!!! great job keep going, make a chap. 2 plz i really, really cant wait!
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  • From EmbersEye on January 31, 2005
    I'd had my doubts, but that was really good! Descriptive (from a literary POV not a sexual one) and true to character. Overall: "That was fun ;) "
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  • From ANON - Curry-Chan on January 10, 2005
    Such an awesome story. You should make a sequel.. or prequel.. your choice. I don't care. But if you make something the least bit related to this, then you should title it: Doored. OR: Windowed, bwahaha... windowed, bwaha... I'm so silly. :P

    --Tililia
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  • From ANON - brittany on January 03, 2005
    Are you going to make a nother chapter. Because I really like stories that has Roy and Ed they look so good toether.

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  • From ANON - Aiko on January 01, 2005
    That was not a realy interesting story! u can do better!
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  • From ANON - trish on December 19, 2004
    Awwwwwwwwwww this was just the awesomest full metal slash i have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From tulleighmohre on November 29, 2004
    I cannot express just how much I have wanted to see something like this from the first moment I saw Mustang on screen. There is a man who was drawn to be slashed! Your use of canon is brilliant, as is your characterisation. Of course, very nice smut, too. Bravo.

    If I had to pick, I would say you could use another beta reader. Some of the typos in this were confusing and distracting from the story. Apart from that, I cannot fault it. Ed's such a cutie! *fangirl squee*
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  • From ANON - KyuTails on November 21, 2004
    *big pervert grin*

    THis is so cool, plus, the FIRST Fullmetal Alchemist fic I've ever read, and I'm glad it was this one.
    ^_^

    Good Job keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Yamilisa on November 10, 2004
    Hmm, talking about a love/hate-relationship. But apart from that... Wow! That was seriously awesome!
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  • From ANON - Chibi Ron Weasley on August 26, 2004
    *Applauds you*
    Oh, what fun... hee hee! You gotta love Roy and Ed... and Ed's happy little temper and denial makes him so darned cute~!! Great job with Ed's huffiness... XD Scowling pantsless Edward =
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  • From ANON - hentaiyarou on May 25, 2004
    Yum...now that's what I call a lemon! What really sells it is the banter between them, it feels like you were actually writing characters and not Random Joe A and B. Nobody melts with gooey, lovey-dovey emotions either, which is very appropriate. Well done.
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  • From ANON - RikuNghts (to lazy to sign in) on May 09, 2004
    ^_^! Awesome job.
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  • From ANON - Ima on May 02, 2004
    You know for as much as people complain about lack of character attraction toward one another and the whole "mental scarring" that Ed would have after this, I really think they're missing the point that this is a PWP - aka Plot What Plot. It's just written for the fun of it and to be and and well written, and you did an absolutely fantastic job in every sense of what it is supposed to be. This is quite htly tly one of the best PWP yaoi fics I have read in quite some time. Don't take it so seriously people! And Keep up the fantastic writing, I really hope to see more! :3
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