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Reviews for My Suru Lover 2: Never Ending

By : silveryaoi
  • From ANON - Maria S on October 30, 2005
    Man did you have make Radditz one of the bad guys HE one of my favorites characters, like the story by the way
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  • From ANON - wendyghost on July 30, 2005
    i enjoyed ur stories all of them
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  • From ANON - ozumas girl on January 13, 2005
    For the love of everything chocolate!!! I didn't know you updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But I'm glad I checked!!! I hope Geta's going to be ok... and everyone else!!!!!!! You SO need to update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - XxNeko_YoukaixX on August 07, 2004
    HEY!!! UPDATE ALREADY!!!!!! *growls* i wanna read whats next damnit! I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE!!!!!!!! U HAVE TO UPDATE NOOOOOOOOOWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Bluesake on August 06, 2004
    CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it
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  • From ANON - NuTHOusE on July 25, 2004
    Great fic
    KEEP GOING!!!
    Plez and thank u!!
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  • From ANON - ozumas girl on July 23, 2004
    YYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FINALLY YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Would you belive I've been checking everyday ^ ^ SO Goku and Geta are finally together again!!!!!!! YYYYYYAAAAAAAAAYYYYYY Such a sweet reunion!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BUT I wanna see some action between the two, if only for a little bit, you know some time to themselve's????????????? PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update as soon as you can ^-^ I know you're busy so it's understandable that you can't post a chapter everyday or whatever!!!!!

    Loving you're work!!!!!!!!!

    Ozumas Girl OUT!!!!!!!! WWWWWEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - AngelicTrinity on July 06, 2004
    After reading your a/n, I think you're actually looking for pity or something. Because if you had really any intention of taking off the st you you probably would have just done it but instead, it kinda just seems you wanted people to review and talk ya out of it. I heard of your story from a website whose host kinda flamed it because of the way you made vejita so pitiful and pathetic- her words, not mine. After reading, I gotta agree with her on that. you took away the essence of what makes vejita, vejita... his pride. I'm not trying to flame because thats not my style but you really should think about trying to gvejivejita some respect. you made him like a lapdog just like camero said. i respect orignality but maybe next time you should trying writing a fic that stays even remotely true to the characters. Theres no point in using akira's characters if you dont intend to keep them even slightly the way he created them. No offense, but I find it disrespectful and empty. You dont write bad but nex ttime write with a little regard for readers who dont want to get sick reading about goku and his french poodle vejita.
    Just a suggestion
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  • From ANON - XxNeko_YoukiaxX on June 15, 2004
    FINALLY!!!!!!!!!! i thought u were just gonna stops fis fic all together thank God u didn't ^^ what took u so long to update?Huh? well anyway nice chap i hope u update SOON 'cause i want to see what happans next. oh & before i forget how was it only Piccolo was able to understand Vegeta & Tein couldn't? did i miss somethin'?
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  • From ANON - Twilight-Abyss on June 15, 2004
    Finally another chapter. I was getting a little worried that this might be a discontinued fic. great chapter, I'm looking forward to the next. Update soon.

    ~Kira~
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  • From ANON - ozumas girl on May 19, 2004
    YYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY You rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm glad you are still writing this fic!!!! as you know heh heh!! ^_^ anyway, Vegeta is too cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep going!!!!!! and if anyone flame's!!!! you just tell me and I Ozumas Girl will take care of them yep!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Getarian on May 03, 2004
    I'm sorry for the late review. I was sorting a few things out in my head. Nothing to do with your story. But yeah, I had to get my head clear on a few things.

    Anyway, I aad tad that you have decided to go a wit with everything. If it helps, I don't see Vegeta as a lapdog in this... y I' I've also read fics where he is Freiza's slave and I don't really like them, because they are demeaning to him, but your suru Vegeta has an open, healthy relationship with Goku. I love it anyway. :-)

    This latest chapter was horrible for Goku, and yeah, I was hoping that he wouldn't get raped by Brolli and Radditz (shudder), but it's done now, and I can only hope that he can deal with this. Vegeta sensed something, I'm wondering if he felt what Goku went through, or if he just knows that something is wrong.

    I love that he wants to learn to fight. :-)

    I loved this:

    "As he opened his mouth, Piccolo muttred,"

    “What is it, Sayajiin? Need to take a leak?”

    LOL! Nice bit of humour, near the end of an angsty chapter. :-)

    I really hope that Bulma is going to implement her plan soon. I don't like the sound of Freiza accompanying Goku to the med centre... sounds worrying.

    Good chapter. Looking forward to the next. :-)
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  • From ANON - Ravenx on April 28, 2004
    Okay, first I'll be honest! I can't really remember the whole story because you haven't updated for a while, but I know that I really loved it (and still do) because I saved it on my favorites list. I never really liked Vegeta (spelling?) being the submissive one but I've begun to like it. Especially with your story, I love how you've written Vegeta. The way he acts with his cubs and with Goku. I hope you don't get to discouraged with the flames and stop writting completely because I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next. I really want to know who was spying! And how the training with Vegeta and Picoagaiagain spelling?) goes. So please ignthe the flames (use them to keep warm while writing) and update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Getarian on April 23, 2004
    You really shouldn't let a few idiot people, who have nothing better to do than look for people to annoy, to push you into doing something you normawoulwouldn't do. Your stories are very good, and I have been enjoying this one very much, and deeply loved the original "My Suru Lover" It is an interesting and inventive idea and you write it very well.

    For those who don't like this, then they have the option not to read if they feel it's not for them. You provided the necessary warnings, there is nothing more you can do. If this (no doubt) very small group of people, who seem to go around simply for the sheer pleasure of flaming, are too amazingly stupid to understand the warnings, then they shouldn't be on these sites in the first place.

    Hor, ir, if you feel more comfortable removing your stuff, then that is, of course, your option. It won't stop them though. There will always be nasty people who spend their time harassing people who are simply trying to tell a new story with familiar characters who are known and loved.

    There is constructive criticism, and then there is flaming.

    Criticism, which is pointed out in a calm, rational manner, regarding whichever aspects of your story the reader did not like, and why they did not like it, is constructive and perfectly acceptable, and an author should be prepared for this to occur on occasion. Not everyone is going to like what you write, no matter how well written it is. You can of course agree or disgree with their viewpoint, that's your choice as authauthor, just as the reader's choice is to express their opinion on your work.

    However, flaming is never acceptable. It's abusive and it offers no help whatsoever. I liken flamers to people who yell and screech in a persons ear, loud, annoying and never worth listening too.

    I for one love this and hope that you will indeed finish it. It's worth it :-)
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  • From ANON - LadyDrea on April 22, 2004
    Flaming????Yeah,that's a great problem,since some people tend to be so bitch-like.........grrrrrrrRRRrrrrRRrrrrr....
    I'm sorry about U taking flames,I think that's just not fair:your stis ais awesome........T_T *cries*
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