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Reviews for Wouldn\'t It Be Good

By : KahlanN
  • From ANON - Anon on November 18, 2007
    God, that was hot left me wet and needing just reading it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 27, 2007
    I'm sure I've said this before...but I'll say it again. You...are amazing. Just...wow.
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  • From Hellagoddess on September 08, 2005
    *speechless* *bows in absolute awe* wow...This is going on my reccmended reading list...well done...both of you..*still breathless* I...don't have the words...wow...Is there going to be more chapters? *sends you thousands of dollars in bribes*
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  • From ANON - zelan on July 12, 2005
    WOW!!! I loved it!!!
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  • From ANON - Noel on September 15, 2004
    Awe ending noooooooooooooooooooooo....I love this story so hot, so sexy, so rough on the ass haha. Its great I absolutly love it


    ~*Noel*~
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  • From ANON - tabby on May 02, 2004
    omg... that was well... INTENSE. very well written.. I can't believe you made them bond though!! MORE SOON PLEASE!!!
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  • From ANON - Hecate18 on April 10, 2004
    That was ... yummy! *drools*
    I'm a bit disappointed that its over... I NEED MORE!!! (ignore the crazyness) O_o
    But it was good none the less, definately worth the wait! ^_^

    Hope to see more of your works soon! And have a good easter! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 10, 2004
    OH MY LORD! That was SO! hot! I absolutly loved Gohan and Vegeta together, espiscially in this story! I beg you on my hands and knees to make another story with more of a plot but the same hot yoai! Fuck! My utter respect goet tot to you two wonderful writers.
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  • From ANON - Getarian on April 10, 2004
    Erg. Not a fan of the word, 'whore.'

    Didn't really enjoy the second chapter as much as I did the first. Too sordid for my tastes. It's a shame, I was sort of hoping for an actual relationship to develop. Well written, no complaints there, just don't really like Vegeta or Gohan like this.


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  • From ANON - LITHIA on April 09, 2004
    WOW! Chapter 2! YAY!
    It was... GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT, FANTASTIC GREAT!!!! :P

    I loved it, like the first one, you've got the amazing writing skill again, I absolutely loved how Gohan was a whore!

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    "Please fuck me, Prince Vegeta..." Gohan arched his back and bucked with relish, then whispered as he said the following words: "because your little whore wants you to fuck him. Good and hard." He gave Vegeta a groan and felt something dark seep into him. "Fuck my ass...." He hissed. "Dry and fast. Make it hurt..."
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    That is great! I realllllllllly luv that!

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    The pain was so hot. So were his words, his breath scalded his skin. "Uh...oh...fu-u-u-ck!" He gasped and wrapped his leg around the prince. It burned.... Fuck when he moved it felt like he was ripping him apart. "So...good...." He loved it.
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    Thats really interesting how Gohan enjoys the pain so much - but as its Vegeta... who wouldn't!!!???

    And from that bit where Vegeta fucked him, I knew it was you who wrote it! Hehe!

    I don't want it to end... but i guess it has to... :( i wana read more of stuff like this tho! You write great! GREAT GREAT GREAT :P

    Keep up good work, a very successful fic here! YAY! woop
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  • From ANON - LITHIA on March 21, 2004
    That was really fantastic. One amazing lemon scene there I must say. I really likew thw the Saiyans managed to go for so long, I can't even remember how many orgams they had :D
    The speech was great! I loved how Vegeta made Gohan call him his prince, that was real good. The use of speech throughout the scene was great, you included so much - really giving the best impression of what was going on, their feelings and emotions.
    Fantastic work, keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Shinna on March 17, 2004
    This was a really interesting fanfic. I wonder what Goku will do when he finds out what Gohan and Vegeta did. Can't wait for the next chapters. Keep up the good work. update soon
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  • From ANON - PinkChicken on March 12, 2004
    OMG!

    That was absolutly Brilliant!
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  • From ANON - Getarian on March 04, 2004
    I thought at first that this was going to be a V&G as well as a Gh&V fic...boy, was I ever wrong ;-)

    This was...hot! I never would have thought that I would get into a Vegeta & Gohac, bc, but so long as Gohan is all grown up, I can definitely see possibilities...especially after this!

    Damn I wish I was Saiyan...I would haunt Vegeta's training grounds, it would be my sole mission in life :-)

    Brilliant Lemons! Wonderful writing! I hope there is going to be another chapter or a follow-up. I want to know how Vegeta is going to react now that he has claimed Gohan. I want to know how everyone else is going to react as well. A jealous Goku would be a treat...too bad though, he had his chance and blew it...big time :-)
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 15, 2004
    WOW! that was great!
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