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Reviews for Red Right Hand

By : Agent182
  • From ultistarmon on November 18, 2007
    Hey! You ever gonna update this? I really wanna know what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Shinigami on February 17, 2004
    This is the first time I ever felt compelled to review a story, but here goes. I read the story first because I recognized to title. Red Right Hand is one of my all time favorite songs. Then to discover the tie-in to Needfull Things...well, I liked that, too. So far this is a well written story and an interesting concept. However, and believe me this isn't the first time this has come up, I don't understand how this has anything to do with DBZ other than the characters names. Will we see anything in the future that would indicate who these characters are, or are they just the names you use in this story?
    Please don't misunderstand, I am enjoying the story. I just wonder why you chose to list it under DBZ fanfic. You coud just as easily used any other names and the story would have been equally compelling.
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on February 17, 2004
    WOW!!!! That was very awesome! That chapter makes me want more. This story reminds me of something, I just can't remember what, with Vegeta's store and all. Goku's homelife makes me so sad. I want to destroy his father for being such a jerk! You always write wonderfully, it's just beautiful, descriptive, and awesome! I want to know what is going to happen, and I really can't wait until you update this.
    Oh, and thanks for visiting my blog all the time!!!! Also thanks for saying my daughter is cute!!! ^.*
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  • From ANON - Ryan on February 17, 2004
    *kills review thing* why didn't it put the rest of my review!!!!!!!!!???? I said I love you!!!!!!! Oh and please update this soon, or my head may explode from all unanswered questions!
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  • From ANON - Ryan on February 17, 2004
    Vegeta is freaking me out...what's his deal? What are his plans? Why are people his victoms, and in a daze? So many questions! Very good story. I like it a lot. Goku's home life is so. Th. That pic isn't going to do evil things is it? This fic is putting way to many questions in my mind...but that is very good.
    anyway I
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  • From ANON - SunnyVampireChild2004 on January 28, 2004
    If the ubove lyrics,aren't the correct lyrics,I'm sorry.Anyhoo...update this soon,pretty please
    with a cherry on top.
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  • From ANON - SunnyVampireChild2004 on January 28, 2004
    If anyone wants the lyrics to the song,this fic was inspired,here they are:

    written/sung by:Nick Caves And The Bad Seeds

    Take a little walk to the edge of town
    Go across the tracks
    Where the viaduct looms,
    Like a bird of doom
    As it shifts and cracks
    Where secrets lie in the border of fires,
    in the humming of the wires
    Hey man,you know
    You're never coming back
    Past the squares,past the bridge
    On a gathering storm comes
    a tall handsome man
    In a dusty black coat with
    a red right hand

    He'll wrap you in your arms.
    tell you that you've been a good boy
    He'll rekindle your dreams
    it took you a lifetime to destroy
    He'll reach deep into the hole
    heal your shrinking soul
    Hey buddy,you know you're
    never coming back
    He's a god,he's a man
    he's a ghost,he's a guru
    They're whispering his name
    through dis disappearing land
    But hidden in his coat
    is a red right hand

    You ain't got no money?
    He'll get you some
    You ain't got no car?He'll get you one
    You ain't go no self-respect
    you feel like an insect
    Well don't you worry buddy
    cause here he comes
    Through the ghettos and the barrio
    and the bowery and the slum
    A shadow is cast wherever he stands
    Stacks of green paper in his
    red right hand

    (organ solo)

    You'll see him in your nightmares
    you'll see him in your dreams
    He'll appear out of nowhere but
    he ain't what he seems
    You'll see him in your head
    on the TV screen
    And hey buddy,I'm warning
    you to turn to it off
    He's a ghost,he's a god
    he's a man,he's a guru
    You're one microscopic cog
    in his catastrophic plan
    Designed and directed by
    his red right hand.

    Hope this all helped you with the song.Agent182,I love this fic.Please update it soon.

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  • From ANON - SunnyVampireChild2004 on January 27, 2004
    Bardock's ine dee deep shit.Is Vegeta a serial killer in this fic?If he is...is he gonna kill
    Bardock?For hurting poor Goku-kun,I'd rip him apart.
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  • From ANON - Mo on January 27, 2004
    I was so drawn into this story of yours, it's quite original I just wished I knew the song you spoke of that inspired you to write this fan fic, but anyways I get the jest of the plot. You certainly had me guessing as to who was the main character to your story (I didn't know you wrote others but I'll try to take the time to read them too.) I love the way you worked in that mysterious stranger and once again it left me guessing who it was, I know now who it is. Please update soon after reading one chapter I'm hooked.
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  • From ANON - Hecate18 on January 27, 2004
    Oooooh a mystery, who's the guy in the shadows watching???
    I love the way the fic is written and layed out, i can't wait to read more! ^_^

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  • From ANON - Oujivegetasstalker on January 27, 2004
    PLEASE OH PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THIS STORY!!!!!! I really really like ur way of thinking, hehe wonderful start, just update soon or at least enough to keep me informed on what will happen next, and make it a good lemon too, when that time comes of course......i like the way u made Vegeta all mysterious and stuff, soo suits him, thank u......

    Lov ya
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  • From ANON - CrazyGurl on January 27, 2004
    Man! you sure do write a lot of fics! But Im not complaining Im happy! I love this one. It has a spooky guy who keeps his hand in his pocket Im not sure if I trust that dude! I LOVE DBZ HIGH SCHOOL!!!!!! ITS SO CUTE! I LLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEE THHHHHHHHHHHIIIISSSSSSS SSSSSTTTTTOOOOORRRRRRRYYY!
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  • From ANON - The Chaos Theory on January 27, 2004
    Ah...that was absolutely GREAT! It tot to know more about that mysterious person...It is wonderful and very descriptive. I like dbz high school fics, and I take his his isn't your run of the mill high school fic. I am intrigued even more. So many questions... cant wait until you te.
    te.
    awe...I love ya too!
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on January 27, 2004
    You rock! This is extremely interesting and original! I love it! I can't wait to read more of it. I feel bad for Goku, but I have a feeling things are going to change for him, I just hope it's for the better. ^.*
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  • From ANON - MRRA on January 27, 2004
    that was fuckin awesome!! hope ya continue soon
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