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Reviews for The History of Kalika

By : jaygoose
  • From Kalendral9 on January 05, 2009
    Laughing my ass off the whole way through!! Wasn't there supposed to be a new threat coming? Or is it all comedy? Oh please keep the fun rolling!! This is soooooooo awesome!! K
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  • From Achillona77 on February 20, 2005
    Chapter 25 is a hoot! I really enjoyed myself. Vegeta passing out: CLASSIC!!!

    I see Mister Trunks Briefs has some 'splainin' to do! Goten is definitely gonna want answers.

    I hope Dende can make it through the night without purple becoming his permanant color!

    This is fun. Helps break the angst. It's nice too see them experience a few moments of joy before they have to deal with the pain/horror/misery/stunned suprise of what is to come.

    Great Chapter. Wonderful dialogue.
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  • From ANON - Macha on February 13, 2005
    Dende.... at a .... strip club... OMG..... *ROFL*


    *still Laughing*
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  • From ANON - Yuurei on February 13, 2005
    Oh god. I laughed so hard I thought my sides were going to split open. Sadly, I kicked over my chocolate milkshake in my hysterics while reading. *mourns the milkshake* Update again soon, please!
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  • From ANON - Yuurei on January 15, 2005
    Oh geez...an absolutely hysterical chapter. Bra's last line was PRICELESS! Keep it coming and update soon.

    ~Yuurei
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  • From ANON - Card on January 14, 2005
    That Goten--always messing with people

    “What the hell is wrong with you woman!” the prince bellowed. “Release me this instant!” --*snark*

    and the last line was hilarious too. *rubs hands together evilly and glomps Jaygoose* I loved the chappie! It was funny and good and nice and it had cookies.
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  • From ANON - Macha on January 14, 2005
    Okay, is it just me, or is Nomi deranged? lol, I like her character though.

    Awe, that was a cute conversation (and mental dialog) between Yamcha and Bra. I certainly hope she doesn't 'kill those bitches' and learns to live a happy sayain life with her tail.

    lol, Chichi! That's one heck of a way to get revenge for Goku eating all her cookies. Vegeta's reaction was priceless. I hope he doesn't pass out.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on January 14, 2005

    Chapter 24


    Bra certainly was mature for her age!  Chichi definately got Goku out of the kitchen in a hurry.  And what's this about pregancy? Someone seems to be very fertile. LOL


    I look forward to the next chapter.


    ~Webtester01~


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  • From ANON - Macha on November 21, 2004
    *ROFL* GO Denede. You tell'em! *tears in eyes* That's got to be the funniest thing. I was laughing at the name calling contest, but that just took the cake. (Or in the case of 'this' bbq, the ribs.)

    Can't say as I blame Goten, I wouldn't want to be fighting with a preganant sayian either.

    Glad you updated!
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on February 20, 2004
    ^.^!!!! That was great! I can hardly wait for the fight to begin. This story leaves so many questions lingereing in my mind. Like why do these robots need samples of theYou You are good at keeping me in suspense and wonderment! You never give to much away and I really love that! It's just great!
    Update soon!!!!! ^.*
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  • From ANON - Card on September 03, 2004
    Just be careful how you add Krillin, for some reason, tossing him in bed with beloved Prince-type characters makes some people queasy. *ponders this*

    Anyway...I am very happy to see this chapter. Very displeased to hear school is being a bitch. *glare at school not at Jaygoose*

    *goes off to reread chapter and giggle about many things.*
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on September 03, 2004
    That was excelent!

    Goku gaining weight? Hmm. Looks like the Saiyan prins is going to have another kid. Perhaps.

    Looking for ward to more.
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  • From ANON - macha on September 01, 2004
    hehe, with the first three sections of this chapter I thought it was all going to be a food theme. As it turned out, of course you know, it wasn't. I loved this chapter. Everything was so kawaii. Peanut butter and cheese puffs. Ah, Gohan is leading Kalika down such and evil road. I am glad they got all they needed to say done in the pantry. I just hope no one walks in on them. *wink*

    So, interesting, Piccolo having a thing for seventeen. Eighteen played everything real cool. Nice.

    I loved the game playing between Goku and Vegeta. hehe, Yeah, that would certainly be intereg tog to see, Vegeta playing a friendly game of hide and go seek. I had a sense that he wasn't going to be too upset if he ended up having a 'goofing' off side.

    As for your 2nd A/N, wow, you have a lot of plans for this fic. Yay!
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  • From ANON - Card on July 22, 2004
    *dies* I loved that warning! that was the bestest warning ever. *sigh * Alright, so I read this back when you only had 99 reviews, but the darn AFF.net wn'tn't let me review so I was like *sigh* I'll wait. (I don't know why I'm sighing a lot, feel free to ignore it.)

    Poor Cell. *pats the dear * *shakes fists at Radditz the bastard*

    Siiiigh. All very well written. *goes away because there is html-ing to do. *

    Card!~
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  • From ANON - Macha on July 20, 2004
    I feel like I was ambushed. What the..... Okay, it was a well written chapter. I don't think I was prepaired for it to be a rape chapter though. (Eeeek) That funny look behind Raditz's eyes gave me a moment of pause though. Was that leading somewhere perhaps?

    Stupid voice, can't it be a little more helpful? (Well, probably not, but I had to ask.)

    Your description of Cell's coloring was... well.... discriptive. I knew he had green features overall, but this chapter went into much better details.

    I am rather disturbed that Nomi didn't do anything that hollar about the racket. Of course, it IS a group of 'bad' people. I guess they don't stop eachother from hurting one another(come on people where's the sense of team?)

    Do I get to pick what side of the coin I want to see more of? I think I liked the first one, but then, a coin ALWAYS has two sides.


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