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Reviews for The History of Kalika

By : jaygoose

From on May 25, 2004
Yay more Goku/Veggie. I'm so desperate for them to just say were a couple,lol. ^_^ Poor Bura she is so funny, heh. Can't wait till the next chap, Ja ne!
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From ANON - Card on May 24, 2004
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!~ I didn't want the chapter to end! It ended *sobs and sobs * Why'd it have to end?!

Seriously. Great chapter. Pouty Cell. *pats him * That was cute. And then Kalika's reaction and that whole scene. *goes back to read it again * *and again * *once more* I really liked it. All of it. Oh, *falls out of chair dying with laughter * When Goku asks if they could just talk... Oh! And the whole thing with 'if i didn't do it my son would have' and all of it. *more insane giggling * And Bra's reaction to Yamcha. And the thing with Bulma and Chichi.

*sighs * My sides hurt now. *glare * It's your fault!

Now. *cough * Goku really isn't a talker. He should just get on with making lemonade. *nods sagely *

More please. Soon.
~Card!~
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From ANON - macha on May 24, 2004
Yah, You did it! (ted ted that is)

I think that the way Cell was behaving was soooooo cute.

I think that Kalika took the news fairly well(not). Okay, well, Goku certainly took it in stride. I'd be asking questions like, "How come your kissing me, when she's preganant with your child?"

I think that Chi Chi really likes to cook. The cleaning not so much, and that's why she's still letting the bots take care of that chore.

And she was rather calm about telling Bulma about the boys being together. I wonder if she was always that calm, or if it took her a while to get use to the idea.
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From ANON - Twilight-Abyss on May 19, 2004
Yay! Goku and Vegeta kissed! Woohoo! *warm and fuzzy feelings inside* I love your fic. Update soon!

~Kira~
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From on May 18, 2004
~Crys~ Evil Kalika ruining all of Goku and Veggies fun time. And Vegeta seems more insistent about being with Goku now. YAY!!! i hope they make it official soon. Can't wait till the next chap, glad you gave Goku a brake. Well i'm off, Ja ne!
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From ANON - Ginia on May 18, 2004
Maybe a wee tad confused... mostly frustrated! I want to tie that to to a tree somewhere - she's disturbing my boys!!!
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From ANON - Hecate18 on May 17, 2004
OH MY GOD!
*faints*
I loved the beginning of the chao with Kilik and Kazi, it was so cute and funny!

And Vegeta and Goku Kissed! Awwwww... ITS ABOUT DAMNED TIME!
*coughs* Sorry bout that, i get a bit carried away. ^-^

Imagine Chi-chi was the one to clue Goku in... kinda ironic isn't it?

'�You were mine from the moment we set sights on each other.�' - I loved that! *melts*

Kalika's PREGNANT! *dies* X_x
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From ANON - Card on May 17, 2004
More! More! More!

*giggles insanely * Go Goku! Go Vegeta! That was so mean, having them kiss and then get interrupted. MEANIE!

Anywho. I loved Goku trying to spit out that he had called Chichi the wrong name and how offended he was with the word 'fuck.' Funny. ;) Now, *turns Kalika around and shoves her away * I believe we were close to something.

Oh, and I am pleased to see someone is finally pregnant. Yeah!

~Card!~
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From ANON - macha on May 16, 2004
Yeah! An update.... MORE KISSING PLEASE. That was cute/good/O.O . What rotten timing that girl has.

Oh no, she's preganent? Damit. Well, that's good for the sayian population and all but....

The journal part of the story was good. And a good reason for him to be preganent. Now, did Bardock know about this little serum, and maybe make Goku a test subject?

*thinking about kissing...again* Pardon me.
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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on May 16, 2004
Another superb chapter!

well, he did all the cooking and cleaning so maybe he was the woman of the relationship. --LMAO!!! I didn't know that mean you were a woman..saiyajins...sheesh...^_^

Kazi had it on all the time. It was the middle of the Tamena-jin summer. It was at least 100 degrees most of the day.--O_O rofl is he crazy!!! Or is he trying to hide something....

Even in death the bastard was still blowing up planets. --loved that line!

He was much more interested in why the scientist�sdle dle was protruding quite noticeably.--awwww

Finally turning around to find his mate standing in the doorway of the bathroom, still staring at him in that same weird way. --lmao!!! I laughed so hard that he just kept staring and stuff. Poor guy he is in shock.

If Kilik�s mouth had actually been detachable from his face it would have rolled off of the bed and been on the floor at this point. --GAH!!!! rofl...can't breathe....that was hilarious.

And that�s when it happened. Kazi�s bottom lip started quivering; his eyes started to water and before Kilik could do anything about it, the small scientist burst into tears. --awww, its ok Kazi its the hormones that are making him cry. But I loved the conversation between them. Very realistic how Kazi kinda stayed away from Kilik because he was afraid of what Kiliks reaction would be.

How the hell did they expect him to meditate like this! --LoL, loved this line. He misses ppl messing with him, how sweet.

�Why is it that the harpy is staying at Capsule Corp instead of with you�harping?� --LoL, yeah Vegeta doesn't want to hear her crap! *kicks ChiChi*

�Just spit it out already.� The Ouji snapped. �I do have other things that I�d planned on doing today.�
�Oh yeah.� He replied. �How is Kalika anyways?� --rofl!!! Who knew Goku could think of such witty things (I did) He is sooo jealous...

Eighteen probably would have killed the midget at the first utterance of another woman�s name.--hehe I totally believe that. She would be a scary woman to be maried to.

�I�well�it was your name.� He said, chuckling nervously his hand instinctively going to the back his head.--Oh gosh...I think he is very brave for telling Vegeta that. It may seem like no big deal but if that was me I probably would have never said anything...hehe for fear of some sort of rejection. But since it's Goku..who can reject him? ^_^

Is that so?� The brown eyed Prince crooned. --he crooned...*dies*

�The minute I set foot on the planet the onna was in trouble.� --Oh gosh..that was sexy...*faints* I love that he said that. he is so confident and yum!!!!

�You were mine from the moment we set sights on each other.� --*_* You are trying to kill me!!!! I know you are!!! Vegeta is beyond delicious...

And before Goku could say anything in response he felt the Prince�s gloved hand in the back of his head and his mouth was invaded by the smaller Saiyan�s persistent ue. ue. --FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *throws lemon confetti and then dies*
That was a perfect first kiss..one I have waited so long for...so long. I spent many a sleeplnighnights thinking of how this exact moment would turn out....ok so that last part isn't true, but I am seriously HAPPY!!!!!!!

He should be the one frowning. --*pats Goku* and he has have every right to frown...damn that Kalika!!!!!!!!!!!!

�Fine�woman! You�re pregnant! Now if you wouldn�t mind, Kakarot and I are busy.� --???@_@??? WHAT!!!!!! *falls over* I knew it was going to be her! I knew it!!!!!! How could you end it right there! *strangles you* I know, I know...the saiyajin race needs to continue...or does it....

B.and.and you thought that lacked emotion!!!!
Are you insane????
That was beautiful, freaking wonderful!
And the kiss...was awesome. I can't wait to read more.
Excellent as always!

^.*
-MB-

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From on May 08, 2004
Ood sod story, but don't you think you should give Goku a break? I mean ive read all 15 chapter and not once has anything really nice happed to him. AND THAT BITCH HAS NOW LEFT HIM!!!!. ~Huggles Go-Chan~ PLZZZZZZ give him a break. i'm begging you, and i don't beg much. ^_^ well other than that this story is great, and keoingoing. ~Gets out h toh torch incase the next chap dosent give her what she want~ BYEEEEEEE!
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From ANON - CrazyGurl on May 06, 2004
Spin with a Grin I like that!
And Cell what is up with him? He only remembers his name, why? And is very childlike. I am trying to figure this out. I guess I will just have to wait because I have no clue. And I was so happy to read more Radditz!!!!!! I love him. I really love how you have written this story. I think you have proven to me that a fic with original characters can be EXCELLENT!!!!
p.s. WHEN ARE GOKU AND VEGETA GONNA GET IT ON?????? ::hands you bags and bags of lemons::
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From ANON - Hecate18 on May 05, 2004
I really like your original characters, which is odd for me I might add. It's exciting to read about them (almost like reading a book.)

And Cell... how is it you can make me like and hate characters so easily ... well actually I liked Cell before, but still you made me hate Videl when I didn't have 'much' of a problem with her before.
WhatWhat is wrong with my coloring?� Cell asked innocently.' - you make me want to hug him. ^-^
I also find myself understand her hatred towards Vegeta and all Saiyans in general... I guess shes not that bad.

Anyways, I liked this chap alot, one of my favourites. Definately looking forward to the next chap! ^_^
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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on May 05, 2004
Update already!!!! YEAH!!!

We were a happy family then�until those twins lights came. --*gasp* What are Goten and Vegeta doing in your!!!!!!!!! hehe...j/k

Our world was coming to an end and all my parents could do was stare at a television screen and watch it happen.--That would truly be a horrible thing.

The images of their killers forever imprinted on in my brain. --wow...do you think you can somehow unprint one of the killers fror brr brain so she doesnt remember? hehe...

It does not redeem him in my mind.--*gasp* oh no...so I guess that unprinting thing isnt going to work...I feel badly for her I do...I never read a fic that came from the perspective of when Vegeta and Nappa landed on Earth and killed all those people. I really am impressed. But as much as I feel for her...this is Vegeta...my precious Vegeta...really he can do no wrong. I believe the word I am searching for is...perfect...yes he is perfect.

The creatures that I would spend the rest of my life if necessary trying to destroy. --Oh gosh...this girl is determined...Sadly, someone needs to crush her spirit...hehe..j/k I just dont want Vegeta getting hurt...*sobs*

A creature that would�ve killed his own brother and nephew. Why would we need him to rule along side us?--ths exs exactly why...because he would have killed his own brother and nephew. cold, callous and cruel...ahh how I love Radditz.

The Saiyan had been dead for many years�his power now is feyoneyond my own. --@_@ *is scared* He better not hurt Vegeta!!!!! But that is an interesting take on the saiyajin power growth. Never thought that their power could be growing the whole time that they are dead.

�I know, it is impressive. And to think he is only at base level.� --*gulps and is evore ore scared* That doesn't sound too good.

He seemed to radiate childlike innocence. --I wonder why..maybe it is b/c of Goku or maybe it is something else...I will just be wondering until it is answered I guess.

This irked me of course�what the hell was I suppose to accomplish with an over grown monkey child? --Lmao!!!!

I smiled a real smile�for the first time in ages. I was going to enjoy this ride.--Well I am glad someone is smiling...*pouts* I dont want anything to annhilate Vegeta...that is such a hard word...there will be nothing left if one annhilated him...cant we just replace that word with the word punch? how about soft punch....^_^ just playing wit ya.

But this Cell is kinda disturbing his whole childlike innocence is creeping me out. Well this chap was superb and I was enthralled while reading it. I cant wait until you update again...and now I am going to bed it is exactly 6 a.m. @_@

^.*

-MB-

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From ANON - macha on May 04, 2004
Oh*shivers*, Cell is creeping me out. I think you have created a real threat. After the Buu saga, and even GT (GT isn't my favorit, but it did have lots of Vegeta there for a while) I didn't think there were any other bad guys that could pose a threat, but you have created one. That is quite an acomplishment.

So now we know what the dragon balls were used for.

Cell could remember his name, even if he didn't have his memories, hmmmmm. Did the Dragon say he wouldn't have memories, or did Cell tell them this with his actions. (acting like everything was new to him)

You updated very fast. Nice. I liked this chapter, even if it didn't have any of my favorit characters in it.
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